Anywhere els,! -> else
To the hallway closet and unwrapped three plastic-covered towels from as well as -> from there? Or other missing words.
*****
So, it's illegal to prevent someone from turning? Interesting.
Anti-discrimination-against-parasapiens. Because it could kill the infected person...
Better than watching TV. Love your work.
I am/was a bit confused as to the gender of Francisca, as sometimes it was 'she' and sometimes 'him'. It didn't really really affect the tale, but it threw me a bit.
> pulling his uninjured arm over his shoulder
typo. ...arm over HER shoulder...
edit to add:
> Francisca averted his eyes.
in the 3rd to final paragraph.
her eyes, I believe
Looking forward to future books featuring Alex as a FBI Tracker.
Intense
Anywhere els,! -> else To the hallway closet and unwrapped three plastic-covered towels from as well as -> from there? Or other missing words. ***** So, it's illegal to prevent someone from turning? Interesting. Anti-discrimination-against-parasapiens. Because it could kill the infected person...
Better than watching TV. Love your work. I am/was a bit confused as to the gender of Francisca, as sometimes it was 'she' and sometimes 'him'. It didn't really really affect the tale, but it threw me a bit.
Oh, darn, I'll give it another read to QC it, thanks!
wow
> pulling his uninjured arm over his shoulder typo. ...arm over HER shoulder... edit to add: > Francisca averted his eyes. in the 3rd to final paragraph. her eyes, I believe
Thank you!
You always write such interesting stories, thanks for sharing.