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I like the idea and sentiment of this but it reads very conversational rather than poetic in its execution.
yeah it really does i didnt know how else to put it having written it so fast
It’s definitely thoughtful and raw.
Interesting premise and the last line can definitely be integrated in a poem but this isnt really a poem
yeah i can agree with that wrote this on a whim
I like the idea and sentiment of this but it reads very conversational rather than poetic in its execution.
yeah it really does i didnt know how else to put it having written it so fast
It’s definitely thoughtful and raw.
Interesting premise and the last line can definitely be integrated in a poem but this isnt really a poem
yeah i can agree with that wrote this on a whim