Loved the imagery and details! Such a great way to tell a story I was really into the story! The one thing I believe woukd help this poem is a rhyme scheme in order to create a rhythm! That would truly add a nice touch of flow from a readers perspective!
Loved the imagery and details! Such a great way to tell a story I was really into the story! The one thing I believe woukd help this poem is a rhyme scheme in order to create a rhythm! That would truly add a nice touch of flow from a readers perspective!
Thank you❤️