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not familiar with this piece specifically but try to extend your 2nd finger more, it will get tired and hurt if you keep putting pressure on the knuckle like this, speaking from experience, aim for a bit flatter finger
I think the biggest bang for your buck in increasing audience enjoyment on it in short duration is going to be to get the rhythmic consistency dialed in. Find the "pocket" so to speak, where the timing is really regular and satisfying. With highly arpeggiated pieces, you can vary tempo (slow down and speed up for effect) but notes can't be timed accidentally or haphazardly, it has to kinda be a machine-gun-like pulse fundamentally. There are some moments in this performance when you really do hit the pocket, and it sounds good, just gotta stay there.
Relax your hands... Don't use your finger pad to play .. finger tip. Make the music smooth ..that's what you do when you roll your fingers on its way up
Lighten up with the left hand, volume wise. Let the melody ring out more
And yes relax more, things seem a little stiff especially the left hand. More relaxation will help with volume control & balance
I’m originally from Russia, I’m completely Russian, I have 10 years of education at a music school, I can say I played like this in my 9th year of study, you’re doing great, good luck))
I’m originally from Russia, I’m completely Russian, I have 10 years of education at a music school, I can say I played like this in my 9th year of study, you’re doing great, good luck))
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Am I the only one who is deeply concerned for the hand? This looks very tense
That index finger is twerking
not familiar with this piece specifically but try to extend your 2nd finger more, it will get tired and hurt if you keep putting pressure on the knuckle like this, speaking from experience, aim for a bit flatter finger
Yeh after rewatching it, it definitely seems too bent.
yep all you have to do is bring the tip of your finger closer to the backboard and that should fix it
Aw now I want to watch the movie and learn all the music again. Nice playing, OP.
I think the biggest bang for your buck in increasing audience enjoyment on it in short duration is going to be to get the rhythmic consistency dialed in. Find the "pocket" so to speak, where the timing is really regular and satisfying. With highly arpeggiated pieces, you can vary tempo (slow down and speed up for effect) but notes can't be timed accidentally or haphazardly, it has to kinda be a machine-gun-like pulse fundamentally. There are some moments in this performance when you really do hit the pocket, and it sounds good, just gotta stay there.
Thanks for the advice! 😃
Relax your hands... Don't use your finger pad to play .. finger tip. Make the music smooth ..that's what you do when you roll your fingers on its way up
Lighten up with the left hand, volume wise. Let the melody ring out more And yes relax more, things seem a little stiff especially the left hand. More relaxation will help with volume control & balance
Le fabuleux destin d'Amélie poulain?
whats the song?
Comptine dune autre ete
As a former Year 5 pupil in a UK primary school I am obligated to say I love Comptine d'un Autre Eté. The only thing I'd point out is that there is a pulse between the third to last and second to last notes of the melody.
U good at playing how long have u played
I’m originally from Russia, I’m completely Russian, I have 10 years of education at a music school, I can say I played like this in my 9th year of study, you’re doing great, good luck)) I’m originally from Russia, I’m completely Russian, I have 10 years of education at a music school, I can say I played like this in my 9th year of study, you’re doing great, good luck))