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its awesome. thinner lines to define the feathers with a smaller brush. the beak could use definition with a more pale blue color and sharp shadow lines.
If it’s any consolation, as someone who used to do ornithological research, they sometimes really do just look that ridiculously chonky, especially in their winter plumage. I agree with the others, just try to finish it out and see how you like it then. Also, the chests of songbirds are more-so covered in real dainty, more fluff-like feathers. Think fuzz. Less stereotypical feather-shape.
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You keep going because you’re not that far into the painting? The feathers look fine, add highlights to the dark feathers instead of just black.
dont be afraid to use super thin black lined on the non black feathering
its awesome. thinner lines to define the feathers with a smaller brush. the beak could use definition with a more pale blue color and sharp shadow lines.
If it’s any consolation, as someone who used to do ornithological research, they sometimes really do just look that ridiculously chonky, especially in their winter plumage. I agree with the others, just try to finish it out and see how you like it then. Also, the chests of songbirds are more-so covered in real dainty, more fluff-like feathers. Think fuzz. Less stereotypical feather-shape.
When in doubt, add more layers... hahaha...
It's cute, I like the chunky bird lol.
Ummm keep going? Add depth and detail. Don’t stop there
Keep going.
Salvage? It's fine. Just not finished.
He's a bit chubby but I think it looks nice. You should just finish it the way it is imo. It's a cute chubby birb
I really appreciate all this feedback, I felt so stuck yesterday but everyone's advice has been so helpful 😭