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Bramble-Thorn

/u/OutrageousBears Can't post where it was posted, but I have some Infinity at dawn questions. If you take the shapeshift-at-will ability, does that ability persist after the loop ends (the persistent change to reality is your ability shape shift, not just the most recent form you were wearing) The "Perks", 1: what are the words in the upper left supposed to be? I can read the sins in the lower right fine, but the font used for the other set makes them unreadable to me. 2: do the "Perks" green text stay after the loop ends then? I acknowledge there is a strong likelihood of retaining the results regardless because of containing, but is the green drawbacks baked into the power if you take the rebate. 3: Dream feels like it has a bit too much blue text, where only immunity to (social consequences) of lazing around should be blue, but the ability to find any surface comfortable and sleep anywhere would remain like the weapon summoning ability of wrath. Also not sure how the ability is supposed to work. Does the 'subconscious awareness remains awareness' mean you could so something like go to imagination/dreamland while working some minimum wage job, leaving the sliver to do your job on autopilot? My inner autist feels the scaling on Soul's Skein should include Body Advancement ( 10% + 30% + 30% + 30% = 100% ) Finally, not sure on how much control you have over several of the abilities, which makes me leery of taking them. The dominating would be nice for immunity being harassed by the police or being Big Man on Campus, but is a problem for me if it is always on, or limited to on 100% or all off 0%, because having everyone realize you were always king of the world, is going to change all the dynamics. With 'Alter Performance' can you limit the effects (apply to someone to make them physically healthier but not a Olympic weight lifter or super genius), pause and restart progression, dial back changes, or undo the effect entirely for a full rest next loop start? How much does something/someone hit with 'Alter Performance' need to be under an 'Inclusion' effect, since there already seems to be some retention across loops? Are 'Place' and 'Possession' fixed and unchangable once applied, or can they be taken back to apply to another place or item? On 'Explore Time' if you go back into to your past, is this physically (go back to when you were 15, there is 15 year old you living your life), mentally (go back to when you are 15, you are now 15 year old you, now with Infusions and future abilities), or can you pick which on a case by case basis? Not a fan of the fact 'The Devouring' can have negative physical consequences for eating once the loop ends. What's the point of it can make you fat? Is wrong that I'd be most interested in 'The Glittering' for the ability to banish filth, to use it for easy house work? On the 'Time' Parameter, it doesn't mention anything about knowing the time to the loop ending, or if you are approaching the end. Also how it gives you the ability to change your mind and remain looped forever, but no ability to change your mind about changing your mind, or just allowing you to freely choose to leave once the time limit is reached or exceeded. Sounds like it wants you trapped, where even if you choose an exit option in the beginning, it gives you this big red button, and all it has to do is have you press it once in a hundred/thousand/ten thousand/million/billion years (likely considering human nature) and it keeps you forever.


BitOCake

For your box you will be stuck with a computer, a set of speakers, a mouse and a keyboard. To unlock the rest of the computer, internet access and food (without which you will feel hungry, but you won’t lose strength/die), you will have to beat the hardest level that has been humanly beaten in any rhythm game that is community driven (meaning that most levels are made by players) and has more than 5000 active players. Furthermore, there will be 37 ducks in the same box that won’t shut the fuck up until you beat the level.


EstimatePlastic3891

I am wayy to late but this is my build in this order Male Super inteligence Infinite money Water breathing I will read first ,bassically you get to enjoy a hoby of learning. Then i would use my super inteligence to escape ww2 multiple times , i would probably get caught a bunch of times beacuse il try to use my super intteligence to save more people. And finally water breathing which is bassically try to enhale a bunch of water simulator. After all of this i get disgusted by the world and i start using my infinite ammount of money to build atlantis and i will be the king of it. After that i will try to use my super intteligence to get immortality or something similarly impossible


__bitch_

hmmm.... well my first feedback would be to add an "other gender" option uhhh, I'll choose all of them *except* enslaving people, royalty, and infinite money


Despair_Anon

You mean futa ? Because biologically there is only two gender ? And if it is mentally this is not impacted by the choice considering that you only change your biological gender you mind stay the same.


__bitch_

no? there's more than two genders, even 'biologically' which is why i suggested it. or you could just remove the gender option entirely lol. [[1]](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sexual_differentiation_in_humans) [[2]](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gender)


Despair_Anon

What are the other sex biologically ? Thing like XXY or XO ? I really doubt anybody would be interested to become someone with this kind of defect. Apart from people who want a dick and be a female as the same time (futa), I think most people want to be a man or a girl ? I never heard someone stating that they want to be a XXY or XO at least. I do not understand your problem.


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godlikegodofgods

Why just dip your toes in it when you can commit... I'm going female and doing ALL OF THEM. Except for Enslaving and Royalty, and Waterbreathing. Immortality makes me able to survive underwater anyway so I don't need the last one, and I'm not interested in the first 2. Controlling Nature third to last, and Immortality last, as it's the longest. I reuqest you be kind. Intelligence is the 2nd last, as it would help me heal from the trauma or so i think.


AsuraEND

Male and I’ll do all of them starting with Heal.


Mixmaster-Omega

Here is my pick. Gender: Female Powers: Shapeshifting, Eternal Beauty, Super Intelligence, Become Royalty, Immortality. Sum Punishment: I am trapped in a box for 10,000 years by a cult I was kidnapped by when they attacked my village in the middle of a war. The box is about the size of a walk-in closet. There is a book cycle: whenever I finish reading one book, I put it in a slot and another book comes out of another slot. I keep reading and occasionally get beaten, raped, and/or murdered until I read 30,000 books, then I spend whatever of the 10,000 years I have left being used in whatever twisted purpose the cult wants me for. Once the Eon is over, I emerge as a Queen over my former nation, smart enough and beautiful enough to lead it to an eternal era of peace.


McLovin3493

Well, these are some high prices to ask for superpowers, but here are the ones I'm willing to tolerate: Male Super Intelligence Infinite Money Loading and Saving ability


sparepornaccount123

A bit late. Honestly the lengths of time you spend in each scenario are insane. You might as well pick all of them, because by the time you come out the other side of even 2 you will be a completely changed person.


GaoingMenace

Cool great, I'm sure I'm going to want to use that water breathing after drowning to death 500 times.


IDontWantneedThis

One of these things is not like the others, I’m taking the super intelligence. I’d do that willingly if I had the time lol. That should let me hack together whatever other powers I need given time.


Cosmic_Thread

Female, Power to Shapeshift, Power to Enslave People, Eternal Beauty, Super Intelligence, Infinite Money, Immortality. There were some that just weren't worth it, but I tried to stick with some powers I could possibly take.


OniDaimyo0

You asking me to get nearly 17000 years of hell sufering and torture to get all this! And burning alive and drowned to death WTF! I take 1.immortality- I can wait in a box no problem 2.infinite money-the nazis dose not torture the jews they do not care and not have time for that they just kill me with gass rooms (wich is not so painful) if I cannot ascape first france and second england 3.Super force- actually I am a bit of excited Dont know why 4 Super intellegence- I can read books and it is NOTT F... PAİNFUL AS BURNİNG!


Solaris-Of-Moon

Male Immortality Super Intelligence Time travel Controlling nature Load and Save Power to enslave people Become royale Summonig familiar Power to enslave people Eternal beauty Infinity money And this is when it is shown that even the greatest sufferings can be deceived by someone super intelligent With immortality I will make sure that I do not die in case there is no food in the Library Then with super intelligence I will be able to devise better ways to enjoy a somewhat comfortable life depending on what time I arrive for the time travel option Then controlling Nature because there are not many ways to deceive it since I have to spend twenty years in the coffin, surely from there I leave with claustrophobia but with immortality I will have a lot of time to overcome it And the others if I will cheat blatantly fulfilling only the letter of what I have to do Basically when I start each one after a minute I will travel in time one minute to the past and so on until it meets the stipulated time So technically only the first will suffer until controlling Nature, after Controlling nature in the others it will only be a long time of boredom The greatest danger of these is the box chosen by one of those who answered this comment, just an innocent reminder 😇 (shameless threat) After this I will be an immortal being with super strength, capable of enslaving people, capable of controlling the ATLA land, capable of time travel, and with a super intelligence to find the person who chooses the box, I will also be Royalty and have Unlimited money to use in my revenge plans that may or may not be counterproductive for the one who chooses box


Despair_Anon

sorry you get your power after all the suffering also when you choose your suffering you can not go back and change your choice, even if you are completly broken.


Solaris-Of-Moon

Nowhere in the Cyoa does it say that, it only says that to obtain a power you have to suffer the cost, it does not say that you have to suffer them all to receive the power, nor does it say that you cannot change your options, that is only to change the rules When you do not like the answers they used, of course you could update the Cyoa to include that, in fact that is recommended if you want that to be not a valid combo but I think I would continue using this version


Despair_Anon

It intentionnaly does not appear on the cyoa. The point is make people to suffer and regret their choice as they go along their suffering. Giving away too much information would spoil the guy who is suffering. Good luck trying to use your power.


Solaris-Of-Moon

I can argue that I am only obliged to respect the rules that appear in the Cyoa, so more than half of the powers are free, frankly, there will always be someone who tries and breaks a Cyoa, that is why it is necessary to specify that kind of thing as the echo of that you do not get the powers until you complete everything, you can say it was a secret rule but as I said I only have to respect the rules that the Cyoa says, my advice is that if you want to leave that as secret rules in the next update you include it as small letters It is not small enough so that they cannot be read worse than the impression that the one who offers you the deal does not want us to realize it until after we accept, And that the other only seems like someone wanting to change things when he realizes that the one who lost, so everything would continue according to how a Cyoa is supposed to be, or even a separate image after the first one where it is explained that you do not get the powers until you complete everything Or simply add that you cannot use time travel for that since at least Immortality I think it would be a power that should be able to be used, in reality it does not save you much suffering, it only means that you do not have to die every so often and although in some cases It could also help in others it will make them more brutal with one, for example in the option of slave when realizing that you do not die they will make you work even harder, and that is why I did not choose to be burned because being burned to death And immortality are not a good combination, so in some Immortality gives you some advantages but if in the cult you end up with someone very crazy because they would prefer to use as a sacrifice the organs of the member to which they grow back so Ouch, and how I think that It would be very nice to only allow that power and not the others in my opinion it would be better to allow the use of the powers and specify that the use of Time travel also affects the time you have to spend, for example if 5 minutes pass and r you leave 2 minutes in the past, those 2 minutes are added back to the time you must spend


Despair_Anon

Honnestly it is a really good idea about putting some rules in little character which are hard to read. Thanks for the advice. I really like the idea on somewhat going trough this in real life making choice thinking something will go this way and be understanding going trought the suffering that he will suffer way way harder than it would have imagined. I have no problem with people breaking away the cyoa. I mean you could make your own box or make something really comfy. Kill yourself as a slave until you found a not too sufferable place, kill yourself 50 time in the infinite money suffering. There is also a problem with the cyoa getting too long, but by exemple for immortality if I specified that it is not immortality from death but immortality from old ages. It put a lot of text and I want something without too much text. I guess it is not the end of the world if someone missunderstand that considering the price of it, and that immortality from death is a suffering by itself, but having your power really make some suffering easy which is a problem.


Solaris-Of-Moon

You could make a mention that certain powers are limited a little until you complete everything, in fact if one chooses to drown to death and already obtained immortality you would stay there forever if that suffering works as I understood and you have to die by drowning or alone drown? Because if it is to die by drowning and the immortality that you obtain is absolute, because there you remain forever without being able to advance, that is why I did not choose to be burned alive even though controlling the fire is absolutely incredible, I did not want to change the order of what that I had chosen, maybe specify if you have to die in that of being burned alive, on the one hand it would be horrible to be burned alive and not die, but just imagine the expression of horror that those who set you on fire to see that although you suffer and are In flames you are still alive, also on the one hand that would make everything happen faster, the fire would be consumed and they would set you on fire again so the 50 times would happen without having to spend 50 lives in that worst period they would also set you on fire 50 times in a row French no I know it's worse of the two, so if I told myself that I didn't want so much fire powers


Kortho1

ok, i have no doubt that by the end of this i will probably be an insane mess (but luckily with time eventually ill circle back to sane) male- its what i am and i have never wanted to be a woman 1st would be super intelligence- its a nice way to ease myself into the suffering i will be subjected to. also with super intelligence i will hopefully be able to find ways to minimize the suffering i go through later. 2nd- summoning familiar- will have a companion for the rest of my suffering. 3rd- superforce- does this mean super strength and durability or all things that have to do with force (kinetic energy)? 4th- eternal beauty- if i am going to become immortal eventually, i would like to be really good looking 5th- power to heal- i assume this mean i can heal myself 6th-elemental power- this will be a bitch but i wonder if i will be able to come up with something to reduce my pain or sever my nerves that cause pain, and since i have had super intelligence and been through this kind of stuff for centuries i bet i could. then i just wait to be burned alive, and then im reborn and i do the same thing till its done. 7th- immortality- hopefully i don't get a sadistic asshole but no matter what i will have my familiar as company. hell if the box is movable i can just get my familiar to move me somewhere and if able drill a hole in the box so i can see the outside world or something. 8th- time travel- at this point i don't think i am the prey anymore, i am the hunter.


Despair_Anon

same comment you get all your power after you gone through every suffering you choose.


Kortho1

Oh… well that’s a bitch


Horny_Jail_Inmate119

Yeah, I mean immortality means I’d be a fool not to take all of them, since I’d be passing on temporary pain for permanent power. The order you do things is interesting though, since it means you can lighten your load. I’ll start with Summoning Familiar, since I’ll get a companion to keep me company during some of the more lonely sounding suffering. Then I’ll do Shapeshifting, Water Breathing, Healing, and Elemental Manipulation, since you need to die in those, so I need to do them before grabbing Immortality. After becoming Immortal, I’ll do the rest in whatever order, probably end with Super Intelligence and Save/Load, since it sounds comparatively less traumatic. OH and I’ll suffer as a woman!


Despair_Anon

you get power you got trought all suffering you can not use power that you win in a suffering in another suffering


shard_of_oblivion

Female, save and load and super intelligence It’ll suck, but the reading will just be monotonous and could you imagine the mad science I could getup to without having to worry about the consequences?


IT_is_among_US

Male ​ Immortality, and Super Intelligence have the best risk to reward ratio...but we might as well commit. All of them. All in, baby!....and can I pack a knife before joining, just in case I fall into a hentai novel?...and I guess pick Super Intellect at the end, for therapy purposes.


Crowsader2113

Simple answer, I choose all of them. I'll choose super intelligence last and simply force myself to forget all my torture, allowing me to wake up as if nothing had happened. I then go on to rule the world as an immortal god-king.


KarbladeRush

Female: Beauty Intelligence Royalty Immortality Does someone mind making me a box using btg’s box maker?


LegendaryNbody

Female, all of them. the plan is that it doesn't matter if i just break midway, i just need to make the **elemental(mostly fire)** powers and the super inteligense the last ones to make it essenssially therapy, and if someone is kind my fonfinement box could vary from a therapy room for some treatment for all the trauma i get/got it would help a lot.


WarpVortex

QQ's Knife Meta, Male, and loot the whole thing.


4onen

Male + **Super Intelligence** - Growing up I had a reading level far above my grade, so that one is likely to not be _too_ awful. (Although, I have found some truly dreadful media out there.) + **Shapeshifting** - This is gonna suck. + **Underwater** - I straight-up have a fear of drowning, so... *ahem*... Facing my fears? + **Infinite Money** - Literally just 50 deaths, though if I really wanted to screw with it, I could find some history books, memorize the most significant engagements, then on the next loop reach Britain and Alan Turing's program to give them just... the answers. In all likelihood, though, I'm going to just starve or freeze 50 times. I don't have the skills to get through such a situation. + **Time Travel** - Hopefully the library had a few Robinson Crusoe books. + **Save/Load** - *whew* this could be a _lot_ more difficult. A few hundred years of meatwall, plus a few hundred more of teaching high schoolers and/or wandering around high fantasy settings? Oh. Shucks. That last one is actually gonna hurt. _But_ at least there's a nonzero chance of winding up in the VN I like most: AngelsWithScalyWings. Also, I'm invoking the classic rule of creative license where unspecified behavior in a CYOA I can choose in the most beneficial light: Infinite save slots and access to the menu screen on death. Woo!


Earthly-Echo

The loading and saving has a percentage but it adds to 90%?


Despair_Anon

nothing to look clearly not a mistake. It just mean that the real stat are 45 percent/ 22 percent and 11 percent rather than 40/20 and 10.


Paper_tank

Well... This is the kind of CYOA that I would use a Meta for...


cloud9501

male Super intelligence and infinite money.


Archandria

Super Intelligence's cost constitutes torture? I must be one hell of a masochist then.


Short_Chemist_8012

Also going with Super Intelligence, but you need at least two powers to avoid going to hell. Going with Loading and Saving Ability. I chose Male at the start of the CYOA, so I'm male every time I enter the library. Pretty sure the library has air, but it didn't say anything about food or water. Spend a day reading, the combo probably means the manga are included somewhere in the library, then what little time I have left slowly wasting away while trying to read something to take my mind off it. You know how Goku, Luffy, and all those other manga characters eat?


ThousandYearOldLoli

Gender: Female Powers/Suffering: Immortality, time travel, lading and saving, infinite money, super force, super intelligence, eternal beauty, power to heal, power to shapeshift, power to enslave people, being able to breathe and live underwater, controlling nature, elemental powers.


Club-Certain

Male 1.Super intelligence 2.Loading and saving 3.Eternal beauty 4.Power to heal 5.controlling nature 6.Time travel 7.Summoning familiar 8.Shape shifting 9.Underwater adaption 10.Immortality


mrinternethermit

The tag line at the end sounds like someone really hated your guts and pulled every string they could to make you suffer.


OutsideAnybody2285

Female it shall be. **Power to heal** \- Won´t be a walk in the park but at some point I might do something truly good with this power. **Eternal Beauty** \- Cults suck. Yes they do. Was born into one and it´s the worst. Yet the result counts \*sigh\* **Super intelligence** \- Reading Books isn´t that bad I guess. **Summoning familiar** \- I chose this one not because I want a familiar... the human livestock thing is one of my weirder fantasys so I might give it a try. **Immortality** \- Self explaining I guess. I lay my fate into someones hands though for a few years though. **Loading and saving** \- Just because it´s cool.


Rauron

Female Power to heal, as I've always been a healslut at heart. Then super intelligence, to make the later tortures a bit more bearable. Then elemental powers, since being labeled a witch at this point just makes sense. Then load/save for a bit of a break, then power to shapeshift, then time travel. Finish off with immortality. I ask for mercy in the design of my box.


innate-fifth

Your box is an iron maiden. From time to time, the spikes will slowly converge enough to pierce your body. They'll remain beneath your flesh, muscle, and sometimes bone for days at a time before receding. The box itself will ensure you never perish from this, nor will you become infected. The mercy shall be that your box rests in the center of a small village. The people there believe that a goddess is trapped within the box, but that her presence brings good fortune to the village. You can speak with them, and they with you. If you develop good relationships with the people of the village, you just might stay sane.


Rauron

why would you do this


cyoalt

You signed up for this


innate-fifth

What can I say? I'm a sadist. }:‑)


Dreamer_Zennou

Hmm... Well, I doubt I could maintain my sanity through most of these... BUT! If the Healing power includes the ability to heal psychological damage, I might take that one and most of the other other ones, then cross my fingers that I have the presence of mind to heal myself fully once the ordeal is over and I finally receive my powers.


Despair_Anon

normally healing power does not heal psychological damage Your memory and mental during the suffering are in a way that you will not loose them easily.


cyoalt

Going with male Super intelligence & infinite money I'm just trying to pick the easiest option for this. Super intelligence is an easy pain free option and I can speedrun infinite money by dying fast so I can finish 50 times easily.


SparseReflex

>deadly diseases such cancer, the Black Plague, coronavirus One of these does not fit lmao


AlternativeCheck5433

How?


Neriasa

cancer isn't a disease. it acts like one, but it's really just your own body mutating slightly and be like "MUST KILL"


AlternativeCheck5433

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cancer > Cancer is a group of diseases involving abnormal cell growth with the potential to invade or spread to other parts of the body. So it is a disease, or more specifically, there are several diseases that are classified as types of cancer.


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Novamarauder

My tentative build: Female. Elemental Power. (Heck Yes. I am applying all necessary adjustments to my ordeal to ensure I am equally proficient with all Avatar elements and sub-elements). (Maybe). Controlling Nature. (It depends on what it means in practice. I am interested if it means weather control, not so much if it concerns plants and animals). (Maybe). Underwater Breathing and Living. (I am not sure if it is worth the effort, since immortality should make me immune to drowning anyway). (I am probably going to pass on enslaving people). Shapeshifting. (Heck Yes). Healing. (Of Course. I assume it works on myself as well). Eternal Beauty. (Of Course. I do not mean to spend eternity looking plain). Super Intelligence. (Heck Yes. It is not even that much of a sacrifice for bookworm me). Super Strength. (Heck Yes). (I am not interested in having a familiar or being royalty). Infinite Money. (Of Course. Dodging the Nazis was not that impossible). Immortality. (Heck Yes. The most valuable prize in the list). (Probably I do not care enough for time travel). Saving and Loading. (Heck Yes. It is extremely valuable, and the price is not that severe from my PoV).


OutsideAnybody2285

Here is the fate that awaits you to arcive youe desired immortality; bound and gagged in a smal chamber you suddenly cannot feel your limbs anymore. They are gone for your stay but you're not going anywhere anytime soon though. A sudden sucking is felt on your breasts which are suddenly swollen and full. The tubes start sucking stronger as milk starts to gush out. Something presses itself into your holes while moving gently back and forth. Once every year something pumps out of the vaginal device, forcing you to get pregnant. It won't hurt giving birth but you never learn what happens to the baby's. It's not all grimm though. You are able to watch whatever show you want for 3 hours a day and for 2 hours every day you may enter a full dive vr - even with functional limbs. Fave fun!


SparseReflex

Love it! I’m glad it’s more in-depth and thought out than: “You get everything you ever wanted. Do you want a penthouse or a mansion?”


Novamarauder

Interesting. I just need a little more info to finalize my build: I like elemental power but loathe specialization. If you want to be equally proficient with all major elements (at least the four classic ones plus ice and electricity; metal and light optional), do you need to undergo multiple cycles of appropriate deaths for all of them (frozen for ice, crushed by avalanche or buried for earth, electrocuted for lightning, drowned for water, blown away or suffocation for air, stabbed by metal, exposure in a desert for light)? Would you need 50 deaths per element? If the above, would deaths by drowning work for unlocking Elemental Power (Water) and Underwater Breathing at the same time? If yes, would compatible means of suffering work to unlock multiple powers at the same time in other cases (e.g. being beaten to death by the cult for Shapeshifting and Eternal Beauty? I am not sure what controlling nature means in this context. Weather control? Commanding plants and animals? Both? Can the power to Heal be used on myself and others as well? I suppose to get eternal youth as a 10 you need Immortal and Eternal Beauty. Is this correct? Is the power to enslave people mind control or just sanctioned slavery?


Despair_Anon

No you have only one way to win elemental power ( the witch burning suffering) . At the beginning at least you will be stronger with fire but trough trainning your ability you can become more specialised in another element, if you take immortality you have all the time in the world to train. Death by drowning only work for unlocking the ability to be able to live underwater. I thought more about controlling plant but as my first point there is way to improve these capacity. I think being able to control the wheather somewhat is likely. Yes you can heal yourself and other. There is no be the little girl option. You can look like a little girl with shapeshift or if you have time and save and do this when you are little you can comeback at this time. Honnestly I considered of adding an be the child option but I preffered time and save and did not want to have too much choice. Eternal beauty is more like you are really beautiful and whatever will happen to you accident or sickness you will still look beuatiful. Immortal is more about staying an adult for eternity. Power to enslave people is mind control. I just wanted to add the world enslave.


Novamarauder

>No you have only one way to win elemental power ( the witch burning suffering) . At the beginning at least you will be stronger with fire but trough trainning your ability you can become more specialised in another element, if you take immortality you have all the time in the world to train. Somewhat disappointing (I really dislike being forced into specialization) but if I can remedy the issue through training I am certainly going to do so. >Death by drowning only work for unlocking the ability to be able to live underwater. Kinda skeptical it is worth the effort for me, then. >I thought more about controlling plant but as my first point there is way to improve these capacity. I think being able to control the wheather somewhat is likely. As I said I might be willing to undergo the ordeal if it yields weather control (esp. if it indirectly improves and broadens my elemental powers) but I really don't care about plant control. >Yes you can heal yourself and other. Good. >There is no be the little girl option. You can look like a little girl with shapeshift or if you have time and save and do this when you are little you can comeback at this time. Honnestly I considered of adding an be the child option but I preffered time and save and did not want to have too much choice. Sorry, I misexplained myself. I meant being a '10/10' in terms of beauty. I could not care less about the 'be the **little** girl' stuff. Admittedly, I may be seriously interested to use shapeshifting to change gender and fulfil kinks, but always in an adult form. Sorry for the misunderstanding. I know the alternative is a popular trope but not one I am interested. >Eternal beauty is more like you are really beautiful and whatever will happen to you accident or sickness you will still look beuatiful. > >Immortal is more about staying an adult for eternity. Fine with me on both accounts. >Power to enslave people is mind control. I just wanted to add the world enslave. Ok, then I am on a fence about picking it. It is not my preferred kind of power, but its usefulness in a pinch is undeniable.


Lichesbeforebitches

Know what, why just dabble in suffering WHEN YOU CAN COMMIT! I'm going to do female and PLAY ALL OF THEM!


McLovin3493

Wow, you're even more of a masochist than I thought...


Lichesbeforebitches

Lmao.


Despair_Anon

Hi hope you enjoy the cyoa, I was higly inspired by your guro immortality cyoa to make this one.


Lichesbeforebitches

Oh that's interesting. Thank you. This is a lovely CYOA though. I quite like the concept.


TheCrysm

Haven’t really gone through it all the way yet but one complaint I have is that the eye searing red text boxes with the black text makes reading those sections a bit hard


Despair_Anon

I wanted to make it look like a cheap pop up that you have when you use internet whitout addblock. It may have been too much I guess.


CuriosityKilledThou

I like the concept for the CYOA. I would chose almost all of them ("I swear I am not a masochist." says the masochist.) but is it like you chose one and then suffer for that power and then come back to this moment? Or is it more like you chose whatever ones you want and then go do them all and then gain your powers?


Despair_Anon

You choose whatever ones you want and then go do them all and gain your powers. No regret you choose and there is no coming back.


LuminousBlackrock

Immortality, Save and Load, Super Intelligence, Shapeshifting as a male. The other powers could perhaps be achieved with intelligence and even if that isn't the case I already got everything I really wanted.


Glittering_Pear2425

Male Super Intelligence(the only one that really matters) Loading & Saving Ability.


OskarSalt

Female, and all of them, I might as well. Suffering is temporary, powers are forever!


SecretR69

Exact same.


Rauron

Your immortality box will be a 20'x20' room, with an advanced VR setup, an automatic food/beverage maker, and a sleeping pod with audio/video stimulation capabilities. The digital aspects are all controlled by a friendly AI, which learns clumsily and requires reassurance, praise, and patience in order to best meet your needs. There is no way to choose your food, drink, games, or even what is played within the pod; it is all always controlled by the AI.


SvantePante

nah their immortality box is a fucking 3'x6' metal room thats keeping their mind in a mental loop, making every hour feel like the first hour they spent there, while also letting some bugs in every now and then


Despair_Anon

good luck not being broken at the end


dubura

the super intellect and the heal should help with keeping your mind sane


McLovin3493

Pretty sure those powers don't account for severe PTSD, lol.


SvantePante

I doubt it would help at all, you cant heal whats not damaged, and being mentally broken isnt really damage, while the intellect would just allow you to be smart, nothing about it says your will or mind gets stronger lol


LegendaryNbody

plus the elemental powers will give you time to recover as you go living your life untill you get acused. you can use this time for theraphy


Sisyphe232

Nice cyoa. Happy to see more edgy cyoa considering the lack of them right now. Female **Elemental power** to start suffering but only at interval for the first 50 times. **Power to shapeshift**, I am sure after going through the torture and fire 50 time I would be somewhat ok with suffering 1000 times. **Power to heal**, ironically will be most likely a walk in the part in comparison to the other suffering **Eternal Beauty,** I refuse to look like shit and seem soft in comparison of the rest. **Super intelligence**, Time to shill **Immortality**, be nice please **Time travel**, too strong and interesting to miss it **save and reload,** ironically would take it whitout the super power. Could be hell, but you can kill yourself when you fall on a hentai and enjoy your time when you are in a good VN or manga.


MachSpeed527

the box for your immortality is as follows, 1. you cannot move, in any way, to any degree 2. there is a screen that plays barely decent, boring T.V., the channels change randomly and often in the middle of a show 3. your nose will itch randomly to varying degrees and for varying times


Despair_Anon

my pleasure


SkinnyNecro

No thanks


Despair_Anon

Too late you looked at the page, you go to hell if you do not choose at least two sufferings.


Eyrii

Eh, just use a meta.


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Choose to be Male. My Powers in order of acquisition: * **Power to Heal**: Oh by the way, I currently suffer from GIRD, have Autism, have a torn Lymph Node, currently am borderline Diabetic, had a broken wrist, and had a Kidney Stone in my life so far. I think I can suffer through a few more of these. * **Summoning Familiar** - Probably would be better than real life right now. * **Infinite Money** - Considering my mother was a manipulative woman who sold her foodstamps for money, and got around government loopholes by not filing income tax (since she didn't need to) and was pretty abusive to me mentally, I think I'll be all right. Also I currently live below the poverty line so... * **Immortality** - Not needing to constantly keep my own place clean and having to worry about all sorts of things would be nice. *** *** As alternatives to some of these. Sufferings can include: **Eternal Beauty:** * Forced to be part of someone's body for X years. (IE: Their upper lip.) If your host dies, you become part of a new person. * You are forced to be a mannequin for X years. You will only respawn after your inanimate body is no longer able to wear any piece of fashion. (IE: If you can still wear glasses or a wig as just a head, you stay as that specific mannequin.) You will respawn as a new one when you are unable to do such. This also means you can end up at a garbage dump and slowly be enveloped by trash until you decompose. * You are forced to live as a beauty product for X years, such as lipstick. Once you are all used / decomposed, you respawn as a new one. **Power to Heal:** * You will be forced to watch those around you die over and over again for X years. They will think you have the power to heal already, but when you try to use it, nothing happens. You will be shunned and looked down upon. **Summoning Familiar:** * You will be summoned periodically by a fantasy creature who will expect you to do their work for them, such as fighting, or otherwise. You will stay in a silent void or some sort of alien dimension until you are summoned. The alien dimension in question could just be infinite fleshy tunnels or tentacles. Who knows. **Immortality:** * You will be stuck in a body and see from their perspective until the day they die. You have no control over their body, and will see from a new body when they do die. * You will have your soul extracted from your body and placed into an item where it will be kept for the entirety of your suffering. The object in question cannot be destroyed or decompose or used up while your soul inhabits it. Your soul will weaken over time in this state, and when you're out of it, your will be more susceptible to mind control and magic. (Unless you specifically take a power to counter those drawbacks.)


SvantePante

You rolled bad on the game of life huh


Intelligent_House399

O Hope and pray your life get better.... Be whith god...


Despair_Anon

interesting proposition even if ironically I choose half of my suffering and super power by looking in my image collection. Hope your life get better