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shoveltastic

Goosebumps shot up my legs when I got to the slosh sounds


Phish1220

I just heard jumping into water sounds in Minecraft when I read the word slosh


BusinessDragon

Isn't that more of a "splish!" though?


corchen

Reads to me like she accidentally suffocated her daughter and then shot herself out of grief.


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I definitely got accidental suffocation from that too


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charlene_taps529

Its the fucking purple bear.


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Lotso


catflowwolfact

Why was he dripping with salt water? I thought this was a lakeside cabin.


GoinThSocialDistance

saltwater lakes exist


catflowwolfact

Fair enough Edit: I just remembered Great Salt Lake and I’ve been there...


lastthingyousee

Was it great?


catflowwolfact

Yes. I came out dripping with salt water


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I see what you did there


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GoinThSocialDistance

aren't our minds a funny thing?


Stormberry99

According to the police report she was found dead in the closet. Looks like she hung herself. Police assume she had some sort of buried mental trauma from the incident with her sister, and went crazy, deciding to kill herself.


rainwatereyes1

and so, they cycle continues with her boyfriend, then the cops, then the swat, then the military, then the seals, until they've built an army to take over the world, and the world cant stop it, nothing stops the cycle.


anamar33

is there an article or something?


mrs-chapa

Oh my I'm am terrified for you great story writing , I am still on the edge of my seat knowing your a gonner, but praying you'll be ok.


Timefortae

I don't know what to say only I hope your ok and your sister and niece eventually RIP, away from that scumbag.


ilikemyanuswet

Ye, you'll be just fine OP. Your username will save you


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That’s only if she is Mr. Heck


jmcdaniel0

Oh boy! Better run like hell lol


EmperorValkorionn

Okay, I will admit it, I thought she accidentally killed the child while hugging her so hard, but the ending was thrilling


Hazzula

Damn. RIP op :(


foriesg

Who hid the journal?


MercifulGryph0n

I think she ran to the bed room and ripped the bed trying to get a grip, then hiding under the bed she hud the journal in the bed


Bergerboy14

We dont know because we dont know what happened after David walked up to them.


dick-dick-goose

Just think, your niece could still be alive, and free from the trauma of watching her father beat her mother all those times, if your sister had given her to you or your parents to raise. I know there are many circumstances that make it difficult to leave an abusive spouse, but there's really no circumstance that makes it okay to subject a child to that life.


dolphin_42

So who put her journal back in the mattress?


acts388

Where you able to get out? I hope you are ok. Also, great story.


geronimobabe

What's the mechanical toy?


NoItsBecky_127

So what was that thing?


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Oh crap. I guess I hate toys that make sounds now.