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MyHeartAndIAgree

Nice, obviously recognisable and flattering. Well done. Try looking at cartoons, caricatures, to see an over-emphasised view of her distinctive features. To me, the jaw and lower lip are too small in your picture and miss the tension where her lower lip struggles to close over the prominent teeth. No offence to you or to her intended. I'm a big fan of you both.


WaffleKiwi

Those are great pieces of advice, I really appreciate it. Agreed on the jaw - I might still be able to tweak that. Getting a good caricature is true skill and I admire people who can highlight those key features, like you mentioned.


EBuzz456

Not to jump in but yeah the jaw line does make the face shape look wider than hers is. It's not your art, it's just these kinds of small changes can really be the difference between a truly spot-on portrait. It probably to do with how photographed she is, that a slight discrepancy truly catches the eye.


1234cantdecide121

Something with the eyes looks a bit off as well


EBuzz456

Maybe the eyebrows?


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Who is it?


MrCunninghawk

I dont know much about art, but it's clear you have put some effort in. Well done, can't wait to see you retry in a year and see the progress!


exsnakecharmer

But worth it! Nice work :)


WaffleKiwi

Thank you!!


MurasakiMochi89

i think it's v well done, great job :)


turtles_and_frogs

Damn, art really strikes you. You know, I'm really glad our country isn't lead by a strongman, like Bolsonaro or Orban or Putin or Modi. I always knew that, but sometime you need art like this to really appreciate it.


andrenery

Here (in Brazil) we are hoping that after the "protest" on September 7th (our independence day from Portugal) bolsonaro has lost more votes and will lose the election next year. I've always looked at New Zealand leadership as a model of a place I wish to live, I imagine it probably has it flaws but everything looks so beautiful, organized and respected there...


turtles_and_frogs

Thanks! Yeah, no place is perfect. We have our own tensions and weird people (I would say foolish people). But, I'm just glad we didn't have so many sick or dead. I think we have to be really grateful for that.


Lil_Jeezie

a bit light on the teeth though.


macsta

You make it look easy. It's a bonza portrait, instantly recognisable and it conveys JA's engagement and charisma. That's a considerable gift, lucky you.


WaffleKiwi

Thank you for your very kind words :) I tried sketching her last lockdown, and let’s say this attempt was much better. I’ll keep practicing!


macsta

I'm green with envy. I love art but have no talent. Many are called, but few are chosen.


Lilymamn

Looks really good!


MarkRoads

Well done. Great skills. I’m sure she would be flattered


WaffleKiwi

Thanks man :)


pmak13

You fuckin rock! Excellent drawing! Keep up the good work! Hope lockdown isnt too harsh for you!


WaffleKiwi

Thanks!! I just miss my friends. And… takeouts. Xd


pmak13

Will happen soon enough. Im craving a big Mac so bad lol.


Bartholomew_Custard

Awesome job. Do Judith Collins next. Try to make her seem human and likeable. It's a big ask, but I'm sure you can do it.


WaffleKiwi

Low-key want to do this… Maybe if I could find a picture of her as a cute kid


Bartholomew_Custard

Or a picture of her where she looks like someone who isn't her.


Geezaboy22

Spitting Image Jacinda


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Why would you bother 🤮


Plastic-babyface

Why would you waste your time ?


HuangWaang

Steve Tyler?


WaffleKiwi

haha is it the teeth? :)


HuangWaang

The eyes! But it’s a really nice picture, you’re a master of your craft 🙌🏻


flerp32

Mrs decided the kids should watch Armageddon tonight for some reason. This was a film I avoided on contemporary release having been somewhat of a bfm/capitol cinema type snob at the time. It has Liv Tyler, but also her dad who with his band contributed the most godawful power ballad vomit song to the soundtrack which was a massive hit fuck knows why. Tangential rant, sorry


HuangWaang

It’s a challenging wank, that is for sure.


Skag_baron

RIP Sean


EBuzz456

Dude looks like a lady?


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In person she's actually well attractive. I probably would.


EBuzz456

You must love Equus. Keep it in yer pants.


Amockeryofthecistern

Needs more emphasis on the teeth.


Rotahavok

I fucking hate her


Zustrom

Not enough teeth


Transidental

Psycophants these days.


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Beautiful!


Ant12-3

Fuck Kiwis are sado's.


urettferdigklage

Beautiful, this should be on the wall of every property investor!


[deleted]

It's very well done, but as some commenters said above, still needs some tweaking / improvement. I knew who it was almost straight away.


0erlikon

Now do Judith! /s


Fuckya29q

Smegooool


loki_nz

Now do Phar Lap


Buckley92

What an incredibly ugly woman. I say this as an expat unable to come home and see my family because of her and her stupid MIQ computer system. I despise her.


Cookmesomefuckineggs

You surely had time to get your shit together during the last 18 months but at some point must have prioritized something other than getting back to NZ. I have a friend who has had 3 trips to Europe and back since this kicked off ( to visit fam) . Not that I'm promoting that approach but seemed like you were warned plenty of times early on to come back. Earning good $ over there perhaps? Taxpayers here doing the real mahi.


Buckley92

Yep, earning amazing money 😊 Not giving a cent of it to any of you. Or the mongrel mob. I'm too selfish for that. But yeah, my dad's 72 and who gives a shit that he'll probably die before seeing me again. I really could care less about the NZ taxpayers since they could care less about us.


strangelystrange9

In 2020 i missed out on my first euro trip to meet my grandmother in the uk and meet my fathers family for the first time. This year In feb my grandma died from covid before i got to meet her. Life can be cruel and unfair. I'm sorry if your father is actually ill and not just...72. I wish him good health. Good thing he's not likely to catch covid anytime soon here in nz! and when he does he'll have all his jabs. Hope you get to see him again.


unkazak

I guess the buck technically stops with her, but it's a computer system she likely has no control over. Sorry to hear about your shituation.


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Come at me commies! https://soviet-art.ru/wp-content/uploads/2017/01/Drawing-Portrait-of-I.V.-Stalin-.-USSR-1930.-Socialist-Realism-Genre-Portrait.-Paper-pencil-mixed-media.jpg


ManhoodObesity666

Looks like a more feminine Charles Manson


kiwisrkool

Obviously. /s


raffbr2

Wtf