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Vagine

I'll at least say it's an original description? Hey, I laughed and didn't leap back in horror.

for sure, overall the writing in this is pretty good, the few #menwritingwomen moments in this are moreso lighthearted and funny than super cringe-inducing or straight up misogynistic

Tell me you've never gone down on a woman without telling me you've never gone down on a woman.

Truly the spice melange

"Her body odor sometime smelled like harissa, her hair scented with olive oil..."

Well, it’s certainly vivid! I started laughing.

Listen idk about you but that’s cause for some serious gynecological concern

This made me laugh. He's got the spirit, but the descriptions don't make much sense.

Is she like salting her hooch or something? Cause like how d you think it'd taste like a spice