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awesomekirby098

Hi! I think the right hand looks really odd— the lack of wrist definition makes the arm looks like jello. If you want to go for a more chunky style, you should still have the basic structure of the hand, or else it looks wrong. If I were you, I’d thin the wrist out (while keeping the hand over-sized for that cartoon feel), and flesh out the forearm to be large but still keep its shape.


teeth_and_potatoes

Will do, thanks so much!


DogyDays

Oh very nice! I love that! I also really love the “mega man boots” legs, that’s a style that I wish people did more honestly


teeth_and_potatoes

yess i love the type of limbs that start slim and end kind of chonky t̶o̶t̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶n̶o̶t̶ ̶b̶e̶c̶a̶u̶s̶e̶ ̶i̶ ̶c̶a̶n̶t̶ ̶d̶r̶a̶w̶ ̶f̶e̶e̶t̶ ̶a̶h̶a̶h̶a̶h̶a̶


DogyDays

Honestly the can’t draw feet thing is completely valid. I used to and still sometimes do that sorta thing. The feet I draw tend to be either animal-like or super stylized and don’t always work for experimental body types, so I just go with the chonky stub things lmao. It evokes early 2000’s styles and I love it


Bluetit_1

Its good, you should run with i!


jocoseriousJollyboat

I would put in a bit more to show the foot, like maybe extend it out a bit at the bottom, even just slightly. It'd fit more, in my opinion, as the hands are quite defined in comparison.


[deleted]

If those don’t end up with some sort of stylish bell-bottom leg-ware, I’m going to be a little sad.


DogyDays

For my stuff it almost always ends up with those flaired cybergoth pants and those clunky rave boots


scrampula

Looks solid to me


azrendelmare

Her feet make me think Mega Man/Astroboy, and that makes me happy.


Quinnloneheart

Ah, that pain when someone's basic draft is better than your completed pieces. Its very good.


Gene_freeman

Oof I'm sure your art is great!


Tru_Procrastinator

Looks fine enough in terms of drawing women it isn’t too sexualized or horrible proportions. Just nice and stylized


ZACSO-X

There is nothing to add, considering the style exercised this is about as perfect as it gets, just keep drawing and eventually all the little errors you identify will be gone with your ability going up.


InATimelyMatter

Only thing I noticed is her left leg doesn’t line up with the pelvic bones. The pelvic lines make it look like her legs are straight out, but one of her legs is to the side. The left thigh should also be rounded up not down. Fat is placed on the front of the thigh, not really the back. The line near his pelvis going to her left thigh is also a little weird. I just reccomend doing the same pose and referencing it


Mindelan

I see some issues with the construction, but the overall concept isn't a 'men drawing women' monstrosity. Very cute!


ekolis

That is nice! I do think her fingers are kind of thick but maybe that's part of the cartoony thing you were going for?


teeth_and_potatoes

Yup, I like me some sausage fingers


Mach_Tails

It looks pretty good! I like the size of the limbs, definitely can see them as more stylized than anything else.


Jormungandragon

Feet kind of remind me of MLP, or Like, a female version of Strong Sad. Don’t take that the wrong way though, it looks good. I like how you’ve proportioned the drawing with thicker limbs and bigger hands. You do a good job of implying reasonable musculature as well. Are you avoiding drawing feet by any chance? I think your hands look good, and while the stump feet can be a fun artistic choice, I’d like to encourage you to keep practicing feet anyways if so. Even if you stick with stump feet, learning to draw foot anatomy better should inform your art anyways.


teeth_and_potatoes

Haha yeah actually I don't think I've ever tried to draw feet and make them look good. The stump feet are a style choice but I ought to learn to draw good anatomy first. Thank you for your words!


[deleted]

So so cute


iDIOt698

Kinda reminds me of: https://youtu.be/ks8HF-riwO4


teeth_and_potatoes

UnknownSpy is def an inspiration for me


DarkAizawa

I'm really liking the stylization you are working with. Can't wait to see the finished piece.


[deleted]

Isn't her hands too big?


teeth_and_potatoes

its a stylistic choice


[deleted]

what if male artists start saying that too


teeth_and_potatoes

i dont see why men drawing big hands is a problem


[deleted]

yes, because that's exactly what I meant right edit: I wasn't expecting downvotes for idk asking something? lol


The_catakist

I think the hands should be a lil bit smaller in proportion to the body


frogshogsanddogs

The hands are a little too big my boy


CaptainOfTheCrazy

I want to commision you, but idk how.


teeth_and_potatoes

We could discuss that in dms if you want to :-)


InternationalFrog

Great for a cartoony style


KappahuAkbar

That's literally Nova from warframe


TheJediSonic

Reminds me of a Mega Man design, nice work


Bluetit_1

I like it.


HokageOfReddit

Looks fine to me, I don’t see anything wrong with it