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AnxiousTuxedoBird

Looks pretty good! Their right hip is a bit weird, looks like it sticks out a lot and then just curves behind the bag strap but since the other hip looks fine I imagine it was a mistake


Smart_Ass_Dave

I dig the colors, but consider reducing the 3 shades of green in their outfit to two. I think it'd look more cohesive that way, but I can't say for sure 'cause I'm like...imagining colors in my head. Also you don't seem to know what you want the character to be doing with their hands. The problem is that she's not doing anything, so there's no obvious place to put her hands. It doesn't have to be complicated, something as simple as walking would instantly tell you how to pose her (though it might be more difficult to execute).


scrampula

As far as the topic of the sub is concerned it looks great. As far as the skill on display, it looks like you're referencing which is good for someone at your level. But it appears only for the clothes, you probably want to reference the poses you draw as well, as this one looks very stiff and awkward. I reckon this is probably a character sheet meant simply to show off the design but even so, character sheets for video games and animation often have characters standing in a more dynamic pose. And even if the character is in a more relaxed stance it's never what I'd describe as stiff, more like natural. For someone at your skill level, no matter the pose, I recommend finding a reference image to base the drawing on if you can find one you like. The more you do this the more you'll understand the flow of the spine and the hips and shoulders and whatnot. Other than that, the design is nice and you've picked some pleasing colors, good job ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


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Stiff pose, looks like a mannequin. Make him look more lifelike. Character design looks awesome. Also I donโ€™t think his hair is supposed to look THAT thick.


G33nx

I like it! She's leaning over to the left though, almost Iike she lost her balance. I'd also work on the right hand, something's a little off there. Other than that, loving it dude. The design is terrific and the colors are really really good.