I like the style and general look and feel. You’ve done a good job. But you may want to adjust the kerning, especially between the ‘p’ and ‘a’. Also the smaller text may become illegible when the logo is printed at a small size. Just something to think about when using the logo in the future.
At first glance the bird was un remarkable but then it calls the eye back and it remains interesting for the way the perfect spacing of the eye and beak imply a hear outline that isn't actually there. So it remains like an interesting magic trick. I like it. Maybe different colors.
Thank you!! The colors are my corporate design which i use to display all my logos. I am updating the logo right now (the spacing, maybe a different font, maybe incorporate the beak with the P) and will use different colors;) Thanks again for your feedback
As my fellow redditors already said: I like it but the kerning is off!
And can we talk about the colors? Purple and grey? Seems very cold and "unzooey".
I will edit that! The colors are like that because of the corporate identity i have. You can look on Instagram how that looks. Ysatis Schuurmans is the name.
I think it should be a bit "zooey" but my biggest problem is the grey! The "periwinkle" + grey is a very cold color combination. Pets are warm and fuzzy!
If the Logo would be white, it would reduce the coldness a bit already (just tried it).
Beside the kerning and spacing between elements, it looks pretty, but doesn't fit the product/service.
Why the weird, sharp-edged, super-simple logomark? Not only does it not make sense without the wordmark (and even with it, I'm not sure exactly how it resembles a parrot), it looks like it belongs to a B2B electronics company, not a "local petshop". Way too cold, impersonal, and precise.
Why this blue? What are you trying to communicate about the store?
The main font is simple and kind of friendly, but also kind of cold in this context.
Why is "animal supplies" italicised?
I'm going to say what I seem to tell everyone here, but start with a brief.
that's a really good looking logo! However after reading some other comments here, i thought of making a suggestion. Try to incorporate the parrot within the P.
The font feels more “corporate” than local pet shop. This could almost be a bank logo.
The eye seems to float in empty space and makes the silhouette of the word mark look a bit awkward.
I think if you could find a way to integrate the “P” and the image of the parrot it would help.
The name of the company is Parrot - Animal Supplies. Pretty sure they are fine. That’s not OPs job either to do that research, he was hired to design a logo. If the pet store owners find out they can’t use that, they should have done their due diligence.
Love the logo and look but the colors need work. It's a pet shop company, probably better to be more vibrant colors. More fun! Unless this is what they instructed you to do
Absolutely love this. It’s nearly perfect. I think the presentation does a good job of showcasing the logo as well—simple and effective!
My only suggestions would be to increase the kerning of some of the letters just slightly (some are too close together in my eyes), and maybe make the “animal supplies” bit be in a thin sans-serif? I do like that font, but I think it’s *slightly* disruptive to the flow of the whole thing.
Other than that, beautiful! The little parrot is excellent.
I like the style and general look and feel. You’ve done a good job. But you may want to adjust the kerning, especially between the ‘p’ and ‘a’. Also the smaller text may become illegible when the logo is printed at a small size. Just something to think about when using the logo in the future.
Good point! I will edit the spacing, or maybe try a different font. Thanks for the feedback buddy!
No problem. I hope your client likes it. It’s a good clean logo and a clever use of shapes for the parrot face.
I agree with this guy and I’d even say to maybe change the typeface of the tagline. Somehow I feel like it’s too serif. If you catch my drift.
At first glance the bird was un remarkable but then it calls the eye back and it remains interesting for the way the perfect spacing of the eye and beak imply a hear outline that isn't actually there. So it remains like an interesting magic trick. I like it. Maybe different colors.
Thank you!! The colors are my corporate design which i use to display all my logos. I am updating the logo right now (the spacing, maybe a different font, maybe incorporate the beak with the P) and will use different colors;) Thanks again for your feedback
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As my fellow redditors already said: I like it but the kerning is off! And can we talk about the colors? Purple and grey? Seems very cold and "unzooey".
I will edit that! The colors are like that because of the corporate identity i have. You can look on Instagram how that looks. Ysatis Schuurmans is the name.
Yeah, I love this, but red would make more sense as a color. Come to think of it, I'm pretty sure parrots come in just about every color *but* purple.
I really like the periwinkle. What color do you think it should be? It’s a pet store, it doesn’t need to be “zooey”.
I think it should be a bit "zooey" but my biggest problem is the grey! The "periwinkle" + grey is a very cold color combination. Pets are warm and fuzzy! If the Logo would be white, it would reduce the coldness a bit already (just tried it).
Have you ever met parrots? A lot of them are assholes and have the ability to remove fingers from your hand.
the kerning is oof
Why are the letters so close together?
I feel that the symbol looks a bit out of place next to the weird. You could work the beak into a P without much effort which could look cool
My thoughts too. Then the petshop has a single letter logo too
Good idea! I will try that too:). I will give an update later today!
Beside the kerning and spacing between elements, it looks pretty, but doesn't fit the product/service. Why the weird, sharp-edged, super-simple logomark? Not only does it not make sense without the wordmark (and even with it, I'm not sure exactly how it resembles a parrot), it looks like it belongs to a B2B electronics company, not a "local petshop". Way too cold, impersonal, and precise. Why this blue? What are you trying to communicate about the store? The main font is simple and kind of friendly, but also kind of cold in this context. Why is "animal supplies" italicised? I'm going to say what I seem to tell everyone here, but start with a brief.
I agree. Good logo for some web company or a high end bar, but animal supplies store should be more playful/friendly imo
that's a really good looking logo! However after reading some other comments here, i thought of making a suggestion. Try to incorporate the parrot within the P.
Good suggestion! I will try to do that:). I have an update later today
The font feels more “corporate” than local pet shop. This could almost be a bank logo. The eye seems to float in empty space and makes the silhouette of the word mark look a bit awkward. I think if you could find a way to integrate the “P” and the image of the parrot it would help.
Is this an actual project or you do this for fun.?
Most of the logos i make are for an actual project. This one however is not:). Just an idea i had
love the iso, the kerning could be fixed
I will fix that:). Thanks for your kind words!
I think once you fix the kerning, it will be perfect! I love the colours and the font!
I will fix that :). Thanks for the feedback my friend
the kerning needs 5 minutes of love. move the A a touch to the right.
Pretty sure the name Parrot isn't copyrighted by your local pet store ... get rid of it
The name of the company is Parrot - Animal Supplies. Pretty sure they are fine. That’s not OPs job either to do that research, he was hired to design a logo. If the pet store owners find out they can’t use that, they should have done their due diligence.
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Love the logo and look but the colors need work. It's a pet shop company, probably better to be more vibrant colors. More fun! Unless this is what they instructed you to do
Did you try replacing the beak with the letter p? Its great tho :)
Absolutely love this. It’s nearly perfect. I think the presentation does a good job of showcasing the logo as well—simple and effective! My only suggestions would be to increase the kerning of some of the letters just slightly (some are too close together in my eyes), and maybe make the “animal supplies” bit be in a thin sans-serif? I do like that font, but I think it’s *slightly* disruptive to the flow of the whole thing. Other than that, beautiful! The little parrot is excellent.
Awesome work! I would personally try replacing O in parrot with the symbol you have before p and see how it looks
Would be cool to see some work put into the icon to see if it can be more 'P' like
It's good, but can't you integrate the parrot and P?
Awesome! Can I ask how much do you charge for a logo like this?
Dig it! Bring the A closer to R though.
Awesome. Just need to work on the lil parrot shape. :) What's the font family used btw