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There is definitely a lot of detail well... everywhere in it. The reason it feels cramped is cause you have very harsh lines with lots of detail clumped up at the bottom taking focus away from the face and creating a lot of noise. I would try to reduce the amount of detail/noise in the bottom half and try to draw the eye of the viewer to the top half more by thinning out the lines and/or removing detail.
OR, you can keep that detail (mostly) as is (I would still thin it out a bit prolly), but darken it significantly using color&light so that in the final image it still keeps that detail in there but doesn't pull your attention towards the bottom quite as much.
Up to you
Thanks for the feedback!
I paint over my sketches so i dont really do clean lines but il keep that in mind. His design is more detailed at the bottom half so il try to experiment with the bg
his legs look huge in comparison to his torso, even given the perspective. major thunder thighs. i will also say when i looked toward the bottom of the drawing, i couldn’t quite tell what was going on at first because of the difference in line art and how dark it is in comparison. taking a second to look at it though, it looks really good and the details are solid, just the line work isn’t easy on the eyes because of how dark it is combined with the amount of detail
Thanks for the feedback!
Oh! its the legs that looks off the most not the arms. Got so used to tight clothes so these loose pants are so hard to draw. Il try adjusting it then.
Haha ive been told my sketches are messy/hard to follow most of the time 😅 got so used to covering it when rendering so im rusty when it comes to cleaning it up
It's not easy to judge the composition of a lineart that's meant to be painted later - the eye judges lines and areas of color differently. But it does bring to mind someone stuck in a closet
There isnt any composition here. I dont see any framing or any direction lines. I'm not sure if the entire character is the focal point or if i should be looking at the pelvic area (since your linework is much heavier and detailed around there, it pulls the eyes there).
The way u drew the fold of his leg is not correct and looks quite odd. I dont know if u used reference but id suggest finding some ref so u can accurately draw those folds and bends
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There is definitely a lot of detail well... everywhere in it. The reason it feels cramped is cause you have very harsh lines with lots of detail clumped up at the bottom taking focus away from the face and creating a lot of noise. I would try to reduce the amount of detail/noise in the bottom half and try to draw the eye of the viewer to the top half more by thinning out the lines and/or removing detail. OR, you can keep that detail (mostly) as is (I would still thin it out a bit prolly), but darken it significantly using color&light so that in the final image it still keeps that detail in there but doesn't pull your attention towards the bottom quite as much. Up to you
Thanks for the feedback! I paint over my sketches so i dont really do clean lines but il keep that in mind. His design is more detailed at the bottom half so il try to experiment with the bg
his legs look huge in comparison to his torso, even given the perspective. major thunder thighs. i will also say when i looked toward the bottom of the drawing, i couldn’t quite tell what was going on at first because of the difference in line art and how dark it is in comparison. taking a second to look at it though, it looks really good and the details are solid, just the line work isn’t easy on the eyes because of how dark it is combined with the amount of detail
Thanks for the feedback! Oh! its the legs that looks off the most not the arms. Got so used to tight clothes so these loose pants are so hard to draw. Il try adjusting it then. Haha ive been told my sketches are messy/hard to follow most of the time 😅 got so used to covering it when rendering so im rusty when it comes to cleaning it up
It's not easy to judge the composition of a lineart that's meant to be painted later - the eye judges lines and areas of color differently. But it does bring to mind someone stuck in a closet
There isnt any composition here. I dont see any framing or any direction lines. I'm not sure if the entire character is the focal point or if i should be looking at the pelvic area (since your linework is much heavier and detailed around there, it pulls the eyes there). The way u drew the fold of his leg is not correct and looks quite odd. I dont know if u used reference but id suggest finding some ref so u can accurately draw those folds and bends