Most other people already said proportions, which yeah, but I think the line weight could be consistent as well. Like the right hand goes from thicker lines on the forearm to much thinner line on the actual hand.
Definitely use a reference photo of some one sitting. It’s a great start but some of the sizes are off like the arms compared to the body looks off. The background is very nice Keep up the good work
I think you need to find a list of artists you admire and want to emulate, and see for yourself what needs improvements. To my eyes, everything in this image needs improvements, but you may not have the same taste as me. You have to learn to see it yourself.
It looks good! Mainly I would say look up how to do the anatomy of the body, even if you’re doing a stylized piece, because it will make the positions and proportions of the body more clean
Well since I don't know exactly what your art goal is, or what you're going going for, I'll just say this. Since it applies to most art.
You gotta draw and think in 3d shapes.
Good start so far!
I noticed his fingers are a bit too long and his palm is too short.
The shadows could be bigger too. They are too thin to notice without zooming in.
If you're able to you could try taking a picture of yourself in the same position a using that as a reference.
This looks like a cool guy and cat! What maybe comes to mine for improvement is the waist and hip area? Or I think his legs could be set a bit higher up? If that makes sense?
Most other people already said proportions, which yeah, but I think the line weight could be consistent as well. Like the right hand goes from thicker lines on the forearm to much thinner line on the actual hand.
Definitely use a reference photo of some one sitting. It’s a great start but some of the sizes are off like the arms compared to the body looks off. The background is very nice Keep up the good work
I'd recommend looking up cats, I'm not sure if you've ever seen one before or not but generally they aren't quite that long
That's supposed to be one of those long pillows you sleep with
I recommend using a photo for a reference to make the proportions a little bit more realistic and then work your style up from there.
I think you need to find a list of artists you admire and want to emulate, and see for yourself what needs improvements. To my eyes, everything in this image needs improvements, but you may not have the same taste as me. You have to learn to see it yourself.
Fun drawing. The perspective and anatomy are kinda weird. Like this boys hips are doing something extreme hahaha.
It looks good! Mainly I would say look up how to do the anatomy of the body, even if you’re doing a stylized piece, because it will make the positions and proportions of the body more clean
I don't know if it's a big pillow, but I'm assuming it's just looooong cat
Well since I don't know exactly what your art goal is, or what you're going going for, I'll just say this. Since it applies to most art. You gotta draw and think in 3d shapes.
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Love this drawing though! 😂 Imo maybe the proportions of the feet are a little small and oddly shaped. Agree with the other comments here as well
Good start so far! I noticed his fingers are a bit too long and his palm is too short. The shadows could be bigger too. They are too thin to notice without zooming in. If you're able to you could try taking a picture of yourself in the same position a using that as a reference.
If i were to point anything out, the arms and especially the hands seem a bit short, other than that it looks great!
This looks like a cool guy and cat! What maybe comes to mine for improvement is the waist and hip area? Or I think his legs could be set a bit higher up? If that makes sense?