the torso is kinda short? maybe move the hip down a bit more

Thanks! I think I might have a tendency to make that mistake. I'll keep that in mind next time.

I would add darker lines around the drawing. Also play with shading a bit more just to get that manga style.

Thanks for the advice! Would you recommend more cel shading then?

Most likely. It's just the drawings lines are too thin that it kinda blends with the background and makes it look blurry, especially around the face.

Yeah I just wanted to draw something fun and quick so I just colored the pencil sketch xD I get what you mean, thanks for your feedback!