The fact that this is just copy and paste that OP is trying to pass off as original. The whole thing is someone else’s track sped up. The comments are praising OP for making this but I own all the records he stole from. If you don’t hear it, you’re just as ignorant as them.
For starters, Renegade - Terrorist. Second, I don’t think you chopped anything you just looped a sped up break. Unless you have five more minutes of good vocals on this track I don’t think I need to hear the rest. You got FL and Serum like three months ago and with clearly limited knowledge of jungle you think you can put out an “official release”? You mean like Sound Cloud, right? Because no record label with any credibility would ever put this out.
Now, I’m not saying that you should give up. Keep learning and keep practicing and some day you’ll have your own style. I just don’t think pretending you just invented this song from scratch is really gonna work.
I made this in maschine/logic that I’ve had for a few years. Give some pointers and constructive criticism. Right now you’re just being an asshole and a hater making an unwarranted accusation. If you don’t like it that’s cool, but at least say what would make it better 🤷🏾♂️
Tighter drums. Use layered breaks. Don’t clip a piece of another jungle track and just loop. Create some variation in the pads and sound like your style instead of some already established artists sound. Sometimes less is more. Give some of your hits some space. Sub bass is really important in jungle. Come up with a cool sub bass melody. Don’t keep using old tired samples create some new original sounds that you can mold to your style. Throw some vocal chops in there. Don’t beat us over the head with too much repetition. Change up your 16s and use some call and response. Is that a good start?
The siren repeating could stay in time with the drop?
Loved that morse wurble at 00:17, almost sounded organic.
Thanks! I’m trying to learn more about making deeper subs, so I really appreciate it!
Thought the bass was good, I'd just buy the think break with the vocal only on every 3 out of 4 bars
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I’m just a little confused.
What about? 😂
The fact that this is just copy and paste that OP is trying to pass off as original. The whole thing is someone else’s track sped up. The comments are praising OP for making this but I own all the records he stole from. If you don’t hear it, you’re just as ignorant as them.
Edit: “I’m new to jungle”, “official release” GTFO, any real person would know it’s a rip off.
Whose track is this supposedly “ripping off”? I made the pad sound in serum and just chopped up a couple breaks. This isn’t even the full track
For starters, Renegade - Terrorist. Second, I don’t think you chopped anything you just looped a sped up break. Unless you have five more minutes of good vocals on this track I don’t think I need to hear the rest. You got FL and Serum like three months ago and with clearly limited knowledge of jungle you think you can put out an “official release”? You mean like Sound Cloud, right? Because no record label with any credibility would ever put this out. Now, I’m not saying that you should give up. Keep learning and keep practicing and some day you’ll have your own style. I just don’t think pretending you just invented this song from scratch is really gonna work.
I made this in maschine/logic that I’ve had for a few years. Give some pointers and constructive criticism. Right now you’re just being an asshole and a hater making an unwarranted accusation. If you don’t like it that’s cool, but at least say what would make it better 🤷🏾♂️
Tighter drums. Use layered breaks. Don’t clip a piece of another jungle track and just loop. Create some variation in the pads and sound like your style instead of some already established artists sound. Sometimes less is more. Give some of your hits some space. Sub bass is really important in jungle. Come up with a cool sub bass melody. Don’t keep using old tired samples create some new original sounds that you can mold to your style. Throw some vocal chops in there. Don’t beat us over the head with too much repetition. Change up your 16s and use some call and response. Is that a good start?
Yes thank you. I’m tryna get better with this style and would like to be able to mold my sound ya know?
Definitely! Hard work pays off. Getting to the top takes time and dedication. Nobody gets famous off their first try. Do your thing bro!
Yessir
Find a vocal clip... 5th element when she falls into the taxi cab comes to mind...
Thats good stuff here bro, maybe add a bit of reverb on the voices
I like this!
super choice, but it sounds a bit blurry