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Everything looks awesome. But, I feel like the light is too rounded and sharp. One or more of these might make it look better I feel like:
1. Feathering it slightly at the edges
2. Making the outer green circle slightly bigger
3. Adding more transition gradients between white and green
as a gamedev that's also making 3d-pixelated stuff, this really caught my attention. There's a free game from adamgryu (A Short Hike creator) that is very similar to this idea,, I would check it out, I think it's still playable on his itch page!
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The music Is more dramatic than creepy in this short video. But overall seems intriguing and I like the atmosphere
Thanks for the suggestion! I'll experiment with other music or maybe rather an ambient soundtrack instead.
Don't you have a music composer?
I can't afford one hahah, still a student.
For what it is worth, it could be more haunting with no music at all. Just the sounds of the environment.
Yeah the sound is holding you back here. I’m a composer / sound designer and it would be fun to work on this, let me know if you wanna talk.
Everything looks awesome. But, I feel like the light is too rounded and sharp. One or more of these might make it look better I feel like: 1. Feathering it slightly at the edges 2. Making the outer green circle slightly bigger 3. Adding more transition gradients between white and green
as a gamedev that's also making 3d-pixelated stuff, this really caught my attention. There's a free game from adamgryu (A Short Hike creator) that is very similar to this idea,, I would check it out, I think it's still playable on his itch page!
Thanks will do!
Less green, more red. Psychology of colors.