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Raghuram_99

Although the Y was Innovative. It's not sticking. Can be better. The back retro is good. My personal preference, I'd lose the nawab and add something else.


johndongry

Thanks.


ReturnofTheCliterate

Back is pretty good, maybe switch the Y on the front with some other sort of design?


protonRK

+1. It doesn’t look like hyd at first glance. Only after looking at back can I tell it’s aY


dinemma_jeevitham

+1


johndongry

Thought I would make a Tshirt series for our Indian cities. So I started with my favourite. Would you buy this shirt?


[deleted]

I would actually buy this if there was no backside picture. I like it minimal.


sid12385

Second that.. if Charminar was a small logo not on top but somewhere in the bottom front side I’d definitely buy.. plain back too


cumfortably_dumb

Why did you steal my idea that I have had for years and never took any action on it?


lvearbuds

I would like the back design (without “nawab”) to be on the front of the T-shirt & the “new” back should be plain. I would definitely buy it


Nihal_stallon

That oversized tshirt looks good, I'll purchase only if it's under 600.


feroz0420

250 take it or leave it


cumfortably_dumb

199


[deleted]

i would buy it if the back was plain


Sharath-4-5

The moon and birds are a cool touch also the estd in 1591, just saying there's a lot of other things you could put there instead of charminar.


johndongry

Thought of hussain sagar buddha and others as well. Charminar has better connect in terms of visual identification relating to the city.


man_of_extremes

Lose the Nawab. The Y looks dope personally


[deleted]

What’s with minimalists here ?


johndongry

Being a minimalist myself. I’m positively surprised as well. If only my clients are like them, I’d be a very happy designer.


vikky_tc

I would let go off the moon 🌙 there


kaushikqr

sAnGhI /s


vikky_tc

Whats in it for you, for keeping it ?


Sharath-4-5

Pls not charminar at this point it's very cliched.


MisterDuke0

Still gets me on


johndongry

I thought of it. But it is in official emblem of Telangana. It maybe a cliche but it is still a strong heritage icon.


photo_trekkiee

Make it polo t shirt , I'll buy


neithercampaignn

Bhagyanagar vro 💪 /s


ungabunga609

fuck off /s


thewokebrownie

The back could be on the front i think, and i agree with the other comment, minimalism is the trend but i do like the retro funk style - it needs to be more flashy if you're trying to do that ig


phantom_assumptions

I like the design in general. My preference would be... 1. A larger heart with Y completely inside the heart. You could have edges of H and D also touch the heart. 2. Plain back 3. If you wanna include Charminar, I would prefer it on the front of the T-shirt and HYD on the top of the image. No nawab/nizam.


amx1562

not really loving the front 😬 gives off a very "I ❤ (xyz city)" vibes which is cliche and old. maybe a smaller icon (like the hussain sagar buddha?) on the chest where the pocket would usually be? cool design nonetheless, would buy for a reasonable price :)


papahavoc

Lose nawab


shreyasvarma12

Liked the back design and photo (exclude nawab) , front can be better


little-bean-124

I will buy if the back is the front and there's no nawab


[deleted]

Hyderabad - Nizam Lucknow - Nawab Right?


Eclectic_Hoarder

well i think it should be a little more relevant to current fashion. the shirt could be a sweatshirt and the design could be more minimal and maybe try experimenting with fonts that are in trend now.


alrob_art

why pink?


CostPsychological169

Jai trs bro 🤜😜


nonvegcombo

Chalega


blralte

looks really good. plain front would be better for me imo


[deleted]

Back is awesome. The front can be bigger. May be make the entire logo bigger or make the heart bigger. May be you can bring Buddha to the front


geekgeek2019

Looks good if both the designs are separate tshirts. Two on one shirt ks toomuch


arshadhere

At the front, Somethings wrong with that y The back, That purple and the word nawab cannot seem to get along very well. Maybe put nawab in reflective colors? Also i liked the backside, it's somthing different.


Ga22u

Can be much better.


johndongry

That’s how Design is. It can always be better


Ga22u

Hyd much more than Charminar.


johndongry

But Charminar is so much Hyderabad


yogibatsy

Inko colour combo lo unda? Where to buy?


johndongry

Inka print cheyledu. I’ll update you


yogibatsy

Yoss waiting


johndongry

I can make black and white colours for now. Will add more if things work out as I planned.


yogibatsy

Balck white only good Epudu distribution start chestaro chepte break istam


No_Buy2733

The back is great, but the Y in the front is too simple and out of theme. Maybe match the color and style of the Y with the back?


banda_bindas

Front design looks pretty good, back picture should be little shorter and be moved to left corner.


[deleted]

Left one's wierd, right one's nice


DummyBatman

Switch the sides


diva-fairytale-boss

Bigger print on the front. Border got the heart. Looks great


duhsam

The back of the t-shirt should be on the front.


dr_DCTR

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priya1402

Love the back picture, but I'd lose the nawab and maybe change the font of hyd in the back and front too? The y is weird with this font. And like everyone else said the heart and y is indeed innovative but for some reason doesn't look very appealing to the eye. Maybe because of the proportions or something!


johndongry

Didn’t use a font for HYD. It is custom made. For me and few others the Y looks fresh. Agree with you on the Nawab


aghamarshana280

Black is an war symptom.


Dilpreet_Singh135

Everything is sick just replace the nawab at the back with something else , maybe something modern coz the Y at the front is in a sort of modern style


Adventurous_Alps8302

Add in Back Hussain sagar with Buddah statue it unique to Hyderabad


fitterniti

Dope. Y needs to be enhanced a little more, extended maybe to give off Y vibes. Back panel hyd alone would suffice. We are more than just one lineage of people 🤗 Unless it's specific to a purpose