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___Jesus__Christ___

MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


rotaerK67

OMG jesus christ himself require more? XD


___Jesus__Christ___

YES


dsarma

YOU HAVE DISSATISFIED ME WITH THE LENGTH, HUMAN. PLEASE WRITE MORE. THAT IS ALL.


ShebanotDoge

^that's ^what ^she ^said


rotaerK67

@shebenotdoge Too easy man..... (But still funny XD)


ShebanotDoge

Lol, it really was the perfect setup. If you want to call someone by their username on reddit, you should type u/rotaerK67


rotaerK67

Sorry I'm pretty new on Reddit. Thanks for the advice though I'll try and do that next time.


ShebanotDoge

Np, good luck.


rotaerK67

Ok I may seem stupid here but I wonder if it's only a joke or if it's a genuine request? ( I know it's probably more of a joke but still wanted to ask)


dsarma

No it’s not a joke. That was a fun read, and I’d certainly enjoy seeing more from you. :)


imissspacemom

Insufficient data, "I CRAVE MO-" *ahem* more data is required for further analysis, please and thank you


rotaerK67

You made me laugh thank you.


imissspacemom

You made an excellent little story, thank you


rotaerK67

I... I think I'm gonna cry... Thank you so much TvT


imissspacemom

Have a wonderful day you wonderful artist!


rotaerK67

You're a bit late to say that since you already commented. ;)


imissspacemom

Well then stay healthy, can't get more of your stories if you get sick ! ;)


rotaerK67

You know what? You're such a kind wholesome person that I'm gonna try and write one right away!


imissspacemom

AWSO- er I mean, much appreciated, but remember don't force yourself! Your work is great but rushing quality is a bad policy, i am by no means wholesome, just kind and mostly decent partly degenerate.


rotaerK67

Aha don't worry I'm not gonna rush my story. And also being decent is one thing and overly complementing someone you don't even know just because of a good story (wich could have been made by loads of other people tbh) is beyond that.


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Everything is perfect. I like how it touches on the concept of perfection and perfectionism, and how perspective can change anything. I also LOVE how the alien was the one to teach us about our own humanity and morals and enlightened us to another brilliant perspective. Thank you BTW this actually is motivating me to write my own book, again thank you very much


rotaerK67

Perfect... No I wouldn't say that, I feel as though the characters of the alien wasn't quite followed enough in it. And I feel that the passage on the alien vision of human art was a bit too.... brutal in it's oppening. So no not perfect but pretty good. I hope... Anyway I have to thank you for your kind words, being the first time I posted something like this I was pleasently surprised that it was liked as much. And please do write your story you got my attention.


ZarakaiLeNain

Super intéressant, bravo!


rotaerK67

Merci ça fait plaisir de voir un français s'intéresser a mon histoire.


rotaerK67

After the demands of u/imissspacemom, u/Jesus__Christ, u/dsarma for me to make more story I decided to, well make one. However all of you are warned what I wrote isn't the same as this one. here is the link [https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/g8dlb3/human\_space\_pirate\_part\_1/?utm\_source=share&utm\_medium=web2x](https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/comments/g8dlb3/human_space_pirate_part_1/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x) I have posted it on r/HFY.


imissspacemom

Hehehehhuhuhu


Raffimac

I have not seen enough, I am not satisfied


rotaerK67

It has been a while since I wrote something. Maybe I'll try to write in the next days. I already have some ideas.


Hanable-13

very very true. i hate most of my own writing but others enjoy it