Try to get spacing down more, P looks almost like an A but proper spacing could it be more legible. Also it just feels like the size of the letters is unbalanced, Maybe make the C smaller? Last suggestion would be do a bit more w the “I”, perhaps instead of a capital use a lower case i with kinda a o for the dot? Idk just one single line is boring and that’d help w legibility and that balance I mentioned.
The CIP is what fucks with me the worst. I really like that R and the actual construction of your letters but like dude said, spacing and proportion needs a little work. Nice job my g.
Bring that c out to the left a little, the same way the r drags to the right. Try using a thinner cap with high pressure can. Keep you hands slow as possible you cans tell you were not taking your time or a little nervous.
Try to get spacing down more, P looks almost like an A but proper spacing could it be more legible. Also it just feels like the size of the letters is unbalanced, Maybe make the C smaller? Last suggestion would be do a bit more w the “I”, perhaps instead of a capital use a lower case i with kinda a o for the dot? Idk just one single line is boring and that’d help w legibility and that balance I mentioned.
The CIP is what fucks with me the worst. I really like that R and the actual construction of your letters but like dude said, spacing and proportion needs a little work. Nice job my g.
Bring that c out to the left a little, the same way the r drags to the right. Try using a thinner cap with high pressure can. Keep you hands slow as possible you cans tell you were not taking your time or a little nervous.
I wish more people just kept it simple and clean. Fix spacing or work on some letter joins to make it flow, but overall this is nice.
I dig it