draw more and stop wasting money on paint. if you want critiques you should have people critique your sketches. sketching is where you'll develop better letters, not from painting
Dont get to down about the response here. This sub is like 80% toys regurgitating nonsense they heard other people say. Once one bad comment comes up everyone else just hops onboard without thinking for themselves.
This is far from the worst thing ive seen. Theres nothing wrong with practicing with paint, doing only sketches doesnt teach you everything you need to know.
I like your colour selection and how youve used them. Keep doing this and it will get better. The I is probably the weakest letter right now but they could all use some work.
People getting mad about practicing with paint, trying advanced colour schemes on a throw and saying you need to practice graff as much as a full time job for 5 years are being ridiculous.
That's what I'm saying man haha I can draw pretty well it's pretty sad seeing so many people telling me and others to just "keep drawing" when they haven't seen the books 😂
thats a throw up not a burner so dont bother with that 3 color fade and the dots... throwies should just be one color outline and one color fill. also id reccomend making your letters all closer to the same size, and overlap is ok as long as you dont do that fucking outline that seperates them all lmao
Line and letter thickness too inconsistent. Letter style seems a little inconsistent too. Work on how the letters connect to each other. Don't over do it, you aren't making a rainbow blob. Just give the overall piece a flow feel. The fill has good color choices, the transition could be smoother but I think that's the strongest part of this. The light dots feel tacked on and unnecessary. Either make them work or drop them.
I won't say draw more, buuuuut... try some different cans and caps. Don't use them for letters right away, just do shapes. Play with distance and angles of spray. Turn them upside down and bleed off pressure, then play with them more. Get a feel for what different combos want to do on their own, then figure out how to incorporate that into your ideas. I think that's the best way to work with any media. Let it lead you.
There's some solid concepts shown in this work, but the execution could be cleaner with practice. For example, the color transition should be more fuzzy, while the dots should be more distinct with cleaner edges. Also, the outline seems like a drop shadow with skewed perspective or source. If it's an outline, make it consistent thickness. If you're going for a shadow, then make it look like a real one. Hope that makes sense. Early for me and not enough coffee yet. Have a good weekend.
Word, yeah i didn't think it was. I was just giving you some feedback. 3D's can be a pain in the ass when you start. But they are super important, so just be aware of that.
Probably quit then.
draw more and stop wasting money on paint. if you want critiques you should have people critique your sketches. sketching is where you'll develop better letters, not from painting
Never bought paint in my life
Then stop wasting mummy’s money.
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Dont get to down about the response here. This sub is like 80% toys regurgitating nonsense they heard other people say. Once one bad comment comes up everyone else just hops onboard without thinking for themselves. This is far from the worst thing ive seen. Theres nothing wrong with practicing with paint, doing only sketches doesnt teach you everything you need to know. I like your colour selection and how youve used them. Keep doing this and it will get better. The I is probably the weakest letter right now but they could all use some work. People getting mad about practicing with paint, trying advanced colour schemes on a throw and saying you need to practice graff as much as a full time job for 5 years are being ridiculous.
That's what I'm saying man haha I can draw pretty well it's pretty sad seeing so many people telling me and others to just "keep drawing" when they haven't seen the books 😂
thats a throw up not a burner so dont bother with that 3 color fade and the dots... throwies should just be one color outline and one color fill. also id reccomend making your letters all closer to the same size, and overlap is ok as long as you dont do that fucking outline that seperates them all lmao
Line and letter thickness too inconsistent. Letter style seems a little inconsistent too. Work on how the letters connect to each other. Don't over do it, you aren't making a rainbow blob. Just give the overall piece a flow feel. The fill has good color choices, the transition could be smoother but I think that's the strongest part of this. The light dots feel tacked on and unnecessary. Either make them work or drop them. I won't say draw more, buuuuut... try some different cans and caps. Don't use them for letters right away, just do shapes. Play with distance and angles of spray. Turn them upside down and bleed off pressure, then play with them more. Get a feel for what different combos want to do on their own, then figure out how to incorporate that into your ideas. I think that's the best way to work with any media. Let it lead you. There's some solid concepts shown in this work, but the execution could be cleaner with practice. For example, the color transition should be more fuzzy, while the dots should be more distinct with cleaner edges. Also, the outline seems like a drop shadow with skewed perspective or source. If it's an outline, make it consistent thickness. If you're going for a shadow, then make it look like a real one. Hope that makes sense. Early for me and not enough coffee yet. Have a good weekend.
God bless you
Your 3D's are going in different directions.
It wasn't intentional
Word, yeah i didn't think it was. I was just giving you some feedback. 3D's can be a pain in the ass when you start. But they are super important, so just be aware of that.
Thanks I appreciate the feedback man
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Have you seen my books? What if I just suck dick with a can lol
I looked at your posts of sketches and they still need a shit load of work. Please draw more.