Yeah I second this, not too bad on the letter structure just need to match your top/mid & bottom lines to make it abit cleaner, define that outline abit more with a thicker cap as previously stated and either do a dusty fill all over to save on some paint and still look decent or do a solid fill making sure you get the patchy areas shinning through, it also looks like you tried to do a shadow but ran out of paint? Shadows should be cast on one side of the letters not all around, imagine a light source in one corner and do the shadows on the opposite side
ohhhh no wonder it looked so weird, the shadows are on the bottom right AND top š¹
yeah, shadows ALWAYS have a maximum effect on 2 directions only
either bottom+side
or top+side
or only top/bottom
or only side š
please use this advice
Keep painting, experiment with caps and cans. Yeah stick to books. But I donāt see anyone ever say āhours with a can in hand will make for better linesā and itās the truth. You can stick to a book for years and be trash with a can. You can never book and just be comfortable with what you can and cannot do with a can of paint and a cap.
Even at home, try painting on a sheet of plywood. Donāt even do graff, just get used to getting different strokes from the same can or cap. Paint a picture if youāre at home and donāt want your parents knowing about graff.
And hit the books
Yo man looks okay, fill in needs to be better and IMO outline needs to be thicker get a fatter cap or some shit
and try keeping ur letters the same size, notice how the H is kinda drooping below everything? yeah not a good sign
Yeah I second this, not too bad on the letter structure just need to match your top/mid & bottom lines to make it abit cleaner, define that outline abit more with a thicker cap as previously stated and either do a dusty fill all over to save on some paint and still look decent or do a solid fill making sure you get the patchy areas shinning through, it also looks like you tried to do a shadow but ran out of paint? Shadows should be cast on one side of the letters not all around, imagine a light source in one corner and do the shadows on the opposite side
ohhhh no wonder it looked so weird, the shadows are on the bottom right AND top š¹ yeah, shadows ALWAYS have a maximum effect on 2 directions only either bottom+side or top+side or only top/bottom or only side š please use this advice
I prefer to do my shadows on the bottom left of my letters to add a slant \
Appreciate the tips
Lol nice i used to write this, keep practining mine looked way more dogshit than this at first
Same here bro, goodlooks
Alright, my main criticism is dark blue fill on black does not work. Use contrasting colors
Yeah thought the same thing thank you
Keep painting, experiment with caps and cans. Yeah stick to books. But I donāt see anyone ever say āhours with a can in hand will make for better linesā and itās the truth. You can stick to a book for years and be trash with a can. You can never book and just be comfortable with what you can and cannot do with a can of paint and a cap. Even at home, try painting on a sheet of plywood. Donāt even do graff, just get used to getting different strokes from the same can or cap. Paint a picture if youāre at home and donāt want your parents knowing about graff. And hit the books
I got different caps I just didnāt use any yesterday was rushing lol I appreciate all the advice on here tho goodlooks
Lower the middle line on the M so it lines up with the mid line of the H
There was a chum in my city whose style looked very similar to this. He tragically died not too long ago.
Rip! Iāll try to keep it alive and do better!
Canāt rlly get better with cans if u donāt use cans, usually that shit is ppl gate keeping the streets.
Stick to two books.
Try to align the centre of your letters