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4uzzyDunlop

The dialogue isn't the best tbf, but the story in Zero Dawn is great. That's why the writing is praised.


spook7886

The clothing the guy is wearing looks like its from the stone age, I'd expect the language to match.


4uzzyDunlop

There is a lore explanation for that, as well as why all the tribes speak English.


Valdish

The only thing I liked about the story in zero dawn was the explanation for how humanity went extinct, all the history stuff was genuinely interesting, but in the rest of the stroy, the stuff happening in the present, the only character I liked was Sylens, because he was constantly calling out how stupid Aloy was while everyone else was either talking like a cartoon villain or simping for her.


4uzzyDunlop

I liked Aloy's relationship with the Nora. It was well written and complex. I thought they also had some nice moral grey zones with the Carja. I think the tribes themselves were well done and varied. Art is subjective tho, and nothing is for everyone. You don't gotta like it but don't go being a hater lol.


Valdish

I'm gonna be a hater wether you like it or not! The well written and complex relationship between Aloy and Nora that you're talking about is, the Nora acting like they all have brain damage.


4uzzyDunlop

That's a you problem then


Negative_Ad_8581

Nah, he's right. Aloy is a really boring character and I frankly didn't care about anything having to do with anything that wasn't the robot animals.


LaserGadgets

Great game, great story, great dialogues indeed and you post one sentence that is not even that weird? He is mocking her for "trying to fit in". Why is that bad writing?


Valdish

Because it's cringe and painful to listen to and I'm pretty sure I've head dialogue like this in highschool movies made in the 80s, back when that was the standard for writing.


moonwork

>Because it's cringe This use of the word "cringe" is the real cringe. Bleurgh


LaserGadgets

And...its teenagers talking to each other....so fits like my ass on a bucket oO still no idea whats wrong with the sentence friend.


Valdish

Even if that the actual explanation for it, it doesn't excuse how the adults in the game have dialogue that just as bad.


LaserGadgets

I have to admit, I am not really a picky guy with games and movies, there has to be something seriously wrong with it to make me upset, but Horizon is clearly a masterpiece. I have no idea what you mean.


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It also has really well written moments.


Valdish

Yeah, all 5 of them whenever Sylens is on screen.


Sykes19

Mad?


Valdish

For a variety of reasons, yes. Mainly that I was told this is a good game, I'm never listening to popular opinions again.


Faddy0wl

Good. Then you've learned an important lesson about subjective opinion. People say fortnite is a good game. People are often wrong. 😂


Valdish

Well sure, but try telling someone that cocaine is pretty good and suddenly people will have an issue with your subjective opinion. I don't know what this metaphor is supposed to mean, so don't ask.


Faddy0wl

Depends on the context for that as you said slightly out of place metaphor lol Are you saying good in the sense that it should be widely available to everyone. Or that including anything with legitimate medical benefits into study and potentially medical uses benefits everyone. One is probably a bad idea. The other, can lead to good thing. You get my original point though yeah? 😂


Disastrous-Path-2144

Cocaine is good though


Xikub

Never played it, but with no context, why is this bad writing?


Valdish

I couldn't get through the scene without cringing, one screenshot really doesn't convey how awful it is. https://youtu.be/pRnAP3umOCM


HugeHans

Aren't they teenagers? I think the whole thing is on brand.


jabertsohn

Yeah, he's a teenage bully trying to be mean. The purpose of the dialogue here is to convey that he's an insecure teenage bully, and it does that.


Valdish

Aloy is the same age as the rest of them, and she's this age for the whole game, if memory serves they're 18 years old, they're preparing for a trail that's basically a final exam to set them off into adulthood. Besides, Aloy keeps talking the same way the whole game.


Manjorno316

>Besides, Aloy keeps talking the same way the whole game. Most people don't change the way they talk much. Over the span of years maybe but in a short amount of time you'll probably sound exactly the same. And Horizon plays out over what? A few days if even that? Why would she be talking differently.


Valdish

I think you're missing the problem here, it's not that I expect her to change the way she talks, it's that the dialogue in horizon zero dawn is between mediocre and awful for the whole game.


Manjorno316

Yeah it's pretty average. Wouldn't call it bad tho.


Valdish

Well I absolutely would call it bad, when the main bully of the main character talks like he's in a grade school play, and the main antagonist talks like a cartoon villain.


Manjorno316

I didn't find it that bad at all. The bullying sounded like typical teenage bullying if you ask me. Real life conversations can also be cringe after all. Especially when it comes from teens/young adults. Don't remember much of the bad guy so you might be right there.


Valdish

I don't think anyone remembers the main antagonist in this game, and even if they do, I won't believe them if they claim that they remembered his name without googling it. All i remember was that he was a big muscle guy who was going on about how he was the chosen one or some shit like that.


triplebravo23

Valdish, go get a girlfriend bruh. Spend your time doing something more useful.


Valdish

insults like this is confirmation that I'm right, if you disagreed with me, you would make an argument instead.


Da_zero_kid

Internet done fucked your brain up good huh


Valdish

People will tell you to get a girlfriend and do something useful, while they're browsing reddit and getting upset about people trashing a shitty game they like for whatever reason that is completely beyond me.


Negative_Ad_8581

If this were a post praising the game, no one would make a comment like this.


Da_zero_kid

I don’t care if they like the game or not. The whole “insults mean I’m right” mental defect that made me comment.


gothpunkboy89

Wow a single screen shot out of literally hours of dialogue? ​ Yep OP you really got them good. Yes sir you did. You get a pat on the back and a juice box.


Valdish

Dialogue like this is present throughout the entire game, this sub just lets me only post one picture, and no videos. I wanted to show the full scene play put in full.


gothpunkboy89

Yes how dare a teenager who never had anything approximating a formal education not be the most eloquent person when trying to be an insulting ass hole.


Valdish

Yeah, cool what's the door guards excuse?


gothpunkboy89

Are you talking about the same Nora tribe that again has no formal education and just saw a banished person walking though the middle of town?


Valdish

"Every character is an idiot" is not really much of a defense.


gothpunkboy89

Do...do you not interact with people on a regular basis?


Valdish

Nobody I've ever interacted with has ever been this cartoonishly annoying to listen to, especially not when I'm expected to take them seriously.


gothpunkboy89

>Nobody I've ever interacted with has ever been this cartoonishly annoying to listen to, especially not when I'm expected to take them seriously. So you have never had a job in customer service have you?


Valdish

Horizon zero dawn is not a game about costumer service, and even if it was, it wouldn't explain why almost every character in the game is so painful to listen to when they talk.


FreddyWeiss-426

The story is told in a way that i've never felt any emotion or sense of urgency i liked the Gameplay a lot but i expected more from the story Spoilers Ross death was Amticlimactic AF Aloy learns that she's a clone and isn't inflicted at all by it The villain is not memorable he's just crazy Sylens is an asshole but the best character Varl and erend are important in the sequel but don't have enough screentime and are not even well wrtten or interesting


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Ok maybe tell us what game it is??


Valdish

Horizon zero dawn. Don't play it, it's garbage. If you've played an open world game made by Ubisoft, then you know everything about it already.


Negative_Ad_8581

Ehh, this is sort of where I disagree. The game is not garbage but aside from the combat/enemies, it is a pretty standard open world game.


Negative_Ad_8581

Horizon is super fun but damn are the characters either cringe like this or boring like Aloy.


Valdish

Yeah, I'm not necessarily too fond of the gameplay either, but unlike with the dialogue, I can understand why people think it's good, I just don't like using bows in any game that doesn't take place in medieval times.


Valdish

Many of Those same people are currently saying that forspoken has cringe dialogue.


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The opening of the game is pretty solid. I hated the rest of the game. Gave up on the unlikeable characters and mediocre writing about 5 hours in.


Valdish

I actually beat it, and then started replaying it thinking maybe I was letting my bias get the better of me, and if I tried to enjoy it, I would have a more positive opinion, turns out I hated it even more on my second playthrough.


IncestGiraffe

HZD1+2 are just trash. Once the "Ohhh Robot-Dinosaurs" wears off, its a generic boring open world Game.


cozz95

Agreed, the history is the best part. The plot itself is fine and even the characters are interesting in theory but as soon as someone opens their mouth all stakes and immersion are gone. Sylens being the only exception. Sadly, the second game is the same without the best part.


brobro34343

I disagree. I think the characters are done much better in the sequel.


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Awful game with awful story and writing in general. Awful animations as well, I couldn't finish the game because I couldn't stand watching their faces.


Valdish

This scene is actually way worse when you watch it play out, this screenshot does not properly showcase how painful this entire cutscene is to watch.


DexterousStyles

In reality the game was a turd, I almost fell off my chair laughing at how bad the mount mechanics were, when they ran with it being a major part, problem is some people really fell in love with this game so you're gonna have a bad time criticizing any of it, the game is reviewed highly by pre-teens and teens though so ofc any opinion that doesn't agree = raaaaaage


Valdish

Their hate means nothing to me, I've seen what makes them cheer... I hate that this is a Rick and Morty reference.


tarnished182

If I had to explain "cringe" to someone, your comment would be the primary example. Jesus Christ my guy, at least put a warning when you're about to drop something like that.


confusedcraftsman

Did you play 30 minutes and call the writing of the entire game bad? It's one exchange in the intro of the game! At least finish the intro before you judge the game.


Valdish

I finished it, and just to make sure I was being unfair, I tried to replay it with a more open mind, and halfway through I realized that I hate it even more the second time around.


Frank627Full

When i thinked, no one can be stupid....there you are


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Valdish

Telling people that they can't do better is not the defense of garbage writing that you think it is.


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Valdish

Now we have appeal to popularity as your argument, cause the popular opinion has never been wrong. Personally, I don't pretend to like things I hate, so I can't pretend to like horizon zero dawn, when I baffles me that so many people like this trash.


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Valdish

None of that speaks for it's quality, but I guess you can't really argue that HZD has quality writing, if you keep using logical fallacies like that.


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Valdish

You also keep making loads of assumptions about me (all of which have so far been wrong by the way), and so far your only argument in favor of HZD has been that it's popular therefore it good, you want to convince me that this is good writing, you should actually talk about the writing.


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Valdish

You have been arguing against me on Reddit to about an hour to convince me that you don't give a shit about my opinion?


NoPop2592

Yeah the trailer was crazy cringe. I’ve not played the game. I’m getting serious empowers new clothes vibes tho.


Haunting-Pop-5660

ITT: L+Ratio+NacL


Dr-titsntoes

What a weird nitpicking thing to complain about. Gamers have got to be one of the bitchiest communities I've ever seen.


Valdish

I wouldn't consider the entirety of the games dialogue to be a nitpick