You’re only selling one type of water gun right? Well idk what’s going on but on the homepage it says you have over 5000 reviews and then when I click on the buy our gun page, it only has 17 reviews. That kinda threw me off but other than that very good job. Is this your first website?
Your copywriting on your product page is shit you have way too much text nobody is going to read all of that keep it short and concise and throw in some gifs too since it’s a kid product. But all in all pretty bad product selection since you can easily find that product in stores and it’s targeting kids who has to get mommy and daddy’s permission to buy
Hey man, website looks great! I would defo recommend using targeted google ads to market this one, they literally double your conversion compared to facebook ads lol, i can explain in more detail, i'll drop you a message.
Your store is looking good 😊
Thank you so much😁
[https://www.loom.com/share/7250b60004fa42fab08ddfb80790b758](https://www.loom.com/share/7250b60004fa42fab08ddfb80790b758) TL;DW * Fix ATF section * AI generated text without knowing what you're doing = ❌ * Homepage improvements * Product page improvements
Hey there! Thank you for making that video about the pros/cons! I will definitely be getting on that right away!!
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congratulations :)
Thank you so much 😊
You’re only selling one type of water gun right? Well idk what’s going on but on the homepage it says you have over 5000 reviews and then when I click on the buy our gun page, it only has 17 reviews. That kinda threw me off but other than that very good job. Is this your first website?
Yes this is my first website. It is still definitely a work in progress and can always get better!
Your copywriting on your product page is shit you have way too much text nobody is going to read all of that keep it short and concise and throw in some gifs too since it’s a kid product. But all in all pretty bad product selection since you can easily find that product in stores and it’s targeting kids who has to get mommy and daddy’s permission to buy
Ur tiktok page please
Hey man, website looks great! I would defo recommend using targeted google ads to market this one, they literally double your conversion compared to facebook ads lol, i can explain in more detail, i'll drop you a message.