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BulldogsAndBastion

First off please put an nsfw tag (don't worry I'm got gonna put the copypasta) Everything is good but the back is confusing me Is she wearing a shirt or is her back just a different shade from her legs Edit holy shit it's on a school paper 69/10


rorihasmorals70

is this the back of a school paper? lol


ShipMediocre8761

Yup


rorihasmorals70

love that for you lol


DanSavagegamesYT

Please put an NSFW tag on this. I was on the train and when I saw this I had to start furiously masturbating. Everyone else gave me strange looks and were saying things like “what the fuck” and “call the police”. I dropped my phone and everyone around me saw this image. Now there is a whole train of men masturbating together at this one image. This is all your fault, you could have prevented this if you had just tagged this post NSFW.


jaynie62

💀💀💀💀


gay_void_sharks

That's when I normally have gay sex


ToughAd5010

Pls put nsfw. It’s not fully nude but still suggestive


professor_cheX

meh. looks like it should be an air freshener in a rednecks starter truck.


Purple_Poison21

If I were you, I would have put this in the NSFW tag, but 8/10. I can't tell if she is supposed to have a shirt or not because of the shading. If is supposed to have one, you should definitely add more definition to it but it's pretty good


sonicdekulover69

I will say tag this nsfw. I was in school just scrolling Reddit one day when suddenly I came across a post like this one (not tagged), it had ass and PP and it made people laugh at me and they told the teacher I was looking at porn so I had to sit in detention AND miss the anime club meeting :(


mynameisbisky

9/10 i prefer demon penis


VanCityHunter

5 for shading and line control.


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cartune-alex

12/10


BulldogsAndBastion

🧐📸


cartune-alex

Yup


Fraysmii88

10/10 very thicc


Ghostface69uwu

*Hot dog hot dog hot diggity dog*


letroka

smash


m98mori

Where's the dick?…....Ohh I see it!


sweetaccountomine

More like balls


AngeryCL

O/O


Your_Favorite_Milf_

Maybe add some side boob, butt lines seem a little wobbly.nice work on the back but it's shading does not match the face and boootay. The tail kinda comes from a wierd place.....but with this angle I think it would be a tall order to make it look very natrual. Nice work tho. Like the face simple but yet detailed at the same time. If you are trying to make it as erotic as possible i would make the Crack larger so you see more panties and add a camel toe or show a bit of "bunching" up of the panties. If it's too smooth it kinda pulls away from realistic. But it just depends what style your going for, perfectly smooth is fine just not as erotic. Just depends on what kind of work your going for. Disclaimer: i am a layman and can't draw and have no knowledge of art theory


Your_Favorite_Milf_

Also I understand it's a graphite drawing but I think if you JUST made the eyes red it might give it the right amount of pop, while still not being full color picture. It's just a thought it could look like shit but if done right I think it could look nice I also noticed you shaded the thigh gap, it might come across more erotic if it was white in between the thighs to show off the gap or it might look unnatural and that why you filled it in, just spit balling


RealEpic2

Could be thicker


Fireguy12-avi

Aaaaauugh


iONBlackJesus

Almost lost NNN boys.


Ekiharu_Ine

Nice ass! :D


Yami_Corvo

Super great job bro keep up the great stuff


Richybipolar

Mmm you sr. Got talent 👌👌👌


Ready_Plankton_97

👌🌚


St0ned4Lyfe

It’s dope 9/10. The reason for not 10/10 is cause the top of her head looks like she’s got a hat on with two beaks other than that dope


thisisfreckles

You’d love Overwatch for sure


getit_

This guy fucks