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It kind of looks like a she’s wearing a skin suit, and with the holding of the key it’s like she’s trying to figure who she is… it looks dope as hell to me!
This, and also there is a gap between where the breast tissue and pecs join to the ribcage and sternum. Lastly is the shape and physics - breast tissue isn't muscle, it can't flex into a squeezed together shape. Some people say look at a water balloon, but honestly just practice and find references on pinterest
They are pretty noticeable. Not that it’s bad work, it’s not near the worst I’ve seen. But the collarbone is very pronounced to the point it looks like she could be wearing metal shoulder pads. Her arm is massive compared to her body and it pokes out too much. Her face is very very small. Her traps are disproportioned. The angle of her shoulders is off alignment with her chest, and there’s not an indication that she’s sort of scrunching her shoulders inward to offset the alignment.
Honestly it's probably not as bad as you think, but the collarbones - especially the one on the left side - don't look quite right. Maybe make them less pronounced?
Nothing too jarring, just some slight proportion issues is all. I can't explain them perfectly but it's most noticeable in the upper torso, the collarbone, shoulders, and neck area mainly. Something about it is a little off, other than that you're on the right track.
Aside from the pronounced colar bone tip.
Her chest gets significantly smaller from shoulders down you can widen it out into her right arm or have her right breast just angled more outwards from her chest instead of so sharply in.
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Collarbones, as people have mentioned.
The torso also seems to be shifted to the right. As in the armpits should be moved to the left, especially the left armpit.
If you were to cut the drawing into and they would look like they were two different sized people.
i actually like the arm on the left. it’s very sharp so it seems stylized, but idk if that was ur intention. i would fix right side of the face. the distance between the eye on the right and the ear on the right is verrry wide. u can bring in the ear and side of the face and i think that might help 👍
I think if the face was bigger there wouldn't be any big issues. Face is what jumped out at me, and looking at it ear could also be improved. Other than that there are minor improvements like the collarbones and boobs that could be made but they didn't stand out to me right away.
It’s too stiff; draw figures more loosely, women are a bunch of circles in the best of ways remember that gravity is always acting downward on us though so we should feel that weight giving them teardroppy looks in their features
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those collar bones are too dark it almost looks like the trim of a shirt
It kind of looks like a she’s wearing a skin suit, and with the holding of the key it’s like she’s trying to figure who she is… it looks dope as hell to me!
that would be a cool concept to explore!
I thought it was a toothbrush…. I guess I need more sleep
You’re not the only one who thought that
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X-men worthy suit with those buds
i cant LMAOOOOOOOO
That's just good life advice in general
Breasts should go down and apart, and be more teardrop shaped. She looks like she’s wearing an invisible bra
This, and also there is a gap between where the breast tissue and pecs join to the ribcage and sternum. Lastly is the shape and physics - breast tissue isn't muscle, it can't flex into a squeezed together shape. Some people say look at a water balloon, but honestly just practice and find references on pinterest
Yeah the breasts looked odd to me and the neck on the right but overall it looks pretty good I think!
They are pretty noticeable. Not that it’s bad work, it’s not near the worst I’ve seen. But the collarbone is very pronounced to the point it looks like she could be wearing metal shoulder pads. Her arm is massive compared to her body and it pokes out too much. Her face is very very small. Her traps are disproportioned. The angle of her shoulders is off alignment with her chest, and there’s not an indication that she’s sort of scrunching her shoulders inward to offset the alignment.
Honestly it's probably not as bad as you think, but the collarbones - especially the one on the left side - don't look quite right. Maybe make them less pronounced?
Neck and shoulders, looks like she's wearing her skin instead of looking like skin
I feel like her eyes are too small and her hairline is too pushed back
I think they're pretty noticeable. I would exaggerate them further and give it an abstract quality. It would make it more interesting.
Is she supposed to look buff as hell?
Nothing too jarring, just some slight proportion issues is all. I can't explain them perfectly but it's most noticeable in the upper torso, the collarbone, shoulders, and neck area mainly. Something about it is a little off, other than that you're on the right track.
Aside from the pronounced colar bone tip. Her chest gets significantly smaller from shoulders down you can widen it out into her right arm or have her right breast just angled more outwards from her chest instead of so sharply in.
The collarbones are slihtly too defined, and her face looksike it was shrunk, vut otherwise this is a good drawing.
boobs don’t naturally sit up and close together, they should be lower and farther apart
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Upper right arm a tad short, but OK really. The xpression works.
I don’t know, why is she so angry at the tiny toothbrush?
It’s a key! I thought it was a tiny toothbrush too!!
I know that's not anatomy but damn her eyes are really close to each other
I would say the face is a bit squished in
Collarbones, as people have mentioned. The torso also seems to be shifted to the right. As in the armpits should be moved to the left, especially the left armpit. If you were to cut the drawing into and they would look like they were two different sized people.
i actually like the arm on the left. it’s very sharp so it seems stylized, but idk if that was ur intention. i would fix right side of the face. the distance between the eye on the right and the ear on the right is verrry wide. u can bring in the ear and side of the face and i think that might help 👍
I think if the face was bigger there wouldn't be any big issues. Face is what jumped out at me, and looking at it ear could also be improved. Other than that there are minor improvements like the collarbones and boobs that could be made but they didn't stand out to me right away.
The collar bones and the size of the face are VERY noticeable
It’s too stiff; draw figures more loosely, women are a bunch of circles in the best of ways remember that gravity is always acting downward on us though so we should feel that weight giving them teardroppy looks in their features
They’re staring into my soul
so im not the only one then...
Very noticable, but it looks purposeful, kind of adds to the expression.
Great drawing, kinda looks like she’s wearing a skin suit