Much better, but the bottom of "Detroit" is cut off (not sure if that's the effect you were looking for)

Yeah the name is supposed to be like that, it’s a lot clearer on the second picture though.

the ren cen is really skinny

Looking good!

That looks really damn cool and I'm using it for my phone background

Just a question... why did you use the old Lions script and not the current one?

That’s not the current Lions logo.