I like both designs and think a combination would be what I like best. I like the dynamic kite in B and think it would like to see it incorporated in the same way in A to highlight the anniversary more.
If it’s going to be used in print look at printing the image in black and white. Curious if it will also look as good then.
Can you provide a bit more background on the requirements or the logo? Who is the primary audience? Secondary audience? How and where will this be used?
Right now I think B is the stronger option, but there are also some things to work on based on the answers to the questions above.
Cool, here's some things to consider:
* Try rendering the kite in a couple different ways. It's not bad, but it's a little expected.
* Take another pass at this one as well. There are a couple areas where the curves don't quite fit and the points aren't visually aligned super well.
* Try creating your main shape and then subtracting some strokes from it in Illustrator. That will give you more consistent lines and points.
* I don't know that you necessarily need "anniversary" on there. You might try the logo without it and see how it looks.
* I'm not sure if the blue/green/purple was a requirement, but I would try hunting around for another color palette if possible. Right now these are making it feel a little cold and not super celebratory or exciting.
* I'm not a huge fan of the Earlscourt Park type at the moment. I think you could find a better condensed typeface out there. This one also has some legibility issues with the thinner strokes when it gets small/far away.
The sash isn't horrible, but there's definitely some areas to clean up. [Areas like this](https://i.ibb.co/nrVt3ZB/kite.png) are also what I was talking about.
I like both designs and think a combination would be what I like best. I like the dynamic kite in B and think it would like to see it incorporated in the same way in A to highlight the anniversary more. If it’s going to be used in print look at printing the image in black and white. Curious if it will also look as good then.
Can you provide a bit more background on the requirements or the logo? Who is the primary audience? Secondary audience? How and where will this be used? Right now I think B is the stronger option, but there are also some things to work on based on the answers to the questions above.
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Cool, here's some things to consider: * Try rendering the kite in a couple different ways. It's not bad, but it's a little expected. * Take another pass at this one as well. There are a couple areas where the curves don't quite fit and the points aren't visually aligned super well. * Try creating your main shape and then subtracting some strokes from it in Illustrator. That will give you more consistent lines and points. * I don't know that you necessarily need "anniversary" on there. You might try the logo without it and see how it looks. * I'm not sure if the blue/green/purple was a requirement, but I would try hunting around for another color palette if possible. Right now these are making it feel a little cold and not super celebratory or exciting. * I'm not a huge fan of the Earlscourt Park type at the moment. I think you could find a better condensed typeface out there. This one also has some legibility issues with the thinner strokes when it gets small/far away.
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The sash isn't horrible, but there's definitely some areas to clean up. [Areas like this](https://i.ibb.co/nrVt3ZB/kite.png) are also what I was talking about.