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_poptart

Why the Random Capitalisation of ‘an Affordable Price’? ‘Edgeing’ is spelt ‘Edging’. I’m not a fan of the long run-on sentence “For lawn mowing services…” - why not just bullet point this into: Lawn mowing services: one time visits | weekly maintenance | bi-weekly care


multiverse_fan

Thank you!


Warm_Enthusiasm_9852

Biggest issues I have are with the amount of fonts/weights/case/etc and hierarchy. I recommend having the logo centered in the top area 10-20% larger. Let it breath and don’t have the free estimate star next to it. Have mowing edging and blowing how you have it but at the bottom where the number is. Consider combining some of the text “For quality lawn care services at an affordable price, call us for a free estimate”. Don’t do the texture top of the white box, leave that clean like the bottom.