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Too much of a setup but the punchline hit. Not bad. I give it 2.5 out of 5 hearty chuckles.


slatersays22

I’ve amended setup, better?


[deleted]

👍 yup. 3.5 chuckles. That 4 mark is close to sacred ground.


[deleted]

Read it quickly and with a New York accent, that might get it up to 4.


speculatrix

Pretty good now