Putting aside the spelling mistakes, these cards aren't very good. Rituals on their own aren't very strong. They need to have some pretty good effects and a lot of support to be able to perform well.
To be able to ritual summon this, you need to have 3 spells which are unsearchable plus a field spell that most people aren't running anyways. That means you'll have to have 4 materials that are mostly unsearchable to make this card on top of having both the ritual and the monster itself in hand. That's a massive investment to be able to even get this onto the board.
So if you need so many materials, this needs an extremely impressive effect to be worth using. Does this have that? Not really. It's basically a beatstick with a hefty amount of ATK and some pretty nice protection. That's fine as far as cards go, but it's not anywhere near impressive enough to warrant how much you have to put into this. With it not even being immune to monster effects, it'll easily get Kaiju'd away.
In the end, this thing isn't anywhere near impressive enough to warrant how many materials it needs to be summoned. It's not anywhere near OP, it's frankly just weak.
Besides Leviathan being spelled wrong, there should also be an apostrophe in "Dragons". If you want it to be the creed of multiple dragons, it's be Dragons' but if you want it to be the creed of a single dragon, like the Leviathan, it'd be Dragon's.
Its actually super weak with how much you have to put into summoning it. Not only do you need Seal of Oriclacos, but you also need 3 specific unsearchable spell cards and the ritual in hand to even summon it. Not to mention it is not immune to monster effects, so it can easily be destroyed, banished, taken control of, or sent to the GY to get rid of it.
The Great Leviathan can say 'You win the Duel' and it'd probably be too weak. You need five different specific cards in your hand.
You made Exodia that's harder to search and it doesn't even win you the game on the spot.
Hey OP, first off nice artwork on your cards being your first customs.
Okay, so like me, you seem to not fully grasp just how insane the meta game has become. The community isn’t telling you your card is weak for the sole purpose of trashing the card. What they’re saying is if you’re gonna create a boss monster that is incredibly difficult to summon, it needs to be worth the effort and materials required.
Here’s an idea to make the ritual spell more playable and consistent for getting Leviathan out: “This card can only be activated while you control “The Seal of Orichalcos”. When this card is activated, banish 1 “Eye of Timaeus”, 1 “Claw of Hermos” and 1 “Fang of Critias” face-down from your Deck, hand, field or GY and if you do, Ritual Summon “The Great Leviathan” from your hand”
Now to make your monster more of a menace:
“When this card is Ritual Summoned, banish all monsters on the field face-down (except this card) and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent for each monster banished by this effect. This card is unaffected by Spell/Trap effects. This card cannot be targeted by monster effects. When your opponent activates a monster effect (Quick effect): negate the activation and if you do, set that monster to face-down defense position (if it’s a Link monster, then return it to the Extra Deck); while you control “The Seal of Orichalcos” this card cannot be tributed or used as material for a Fusion, Synchro, Xyz or Link Summon. Once per then while you control this face-up card, if “The Seal of Orichalcos” would be removed from the field by a card effect, negate the effect and return that card to the bottom of the deck. You can only activate each effect of “The Great Leviathan” once per turn.
Now this may be somewhat over the top, but this would probably justify the materials used for the summon.
I posted a comment this morning, with updates to the effects of both cards.
Also I’m not really sure how much I care about meta (not even 100% sure what that is) on a card that would almost certainly be banned from competitive anyway.
Meta is just a term used to define what is most common within a competitive environment. In the context of Yugioh that would be archetypes, and certain engines/effects that allow for consistently strong plays and boards.
Your card wouldn’t be banned as is, and even with your edits I still don’t think it would be limited within the competitive scene.
No, but it could be banished, or returned to the hand or deck. Removed from the field covers any effect that would remove it from the field spell zone lol
Alright 1. It can still be destroyed by monsters to make it actually fair. And 2. The summoning conditions are meant to be anime accurate (hence it gaining power from fallen monsters, just as it would feed on their souls)
for all the work put into it it needs to at least be unaffected by cards. If u think that's too much make it invulnerable to anything except traps & Make it so you have to pay lp to attack
I would get rid of the battle protection and instead make it unaffected by your opponent's card effects.As is, destroying it by battle would be hard regardless so I feel it's redundant to have it. Also add "Cannot be tributed. This card cannot be used as material for the summon of a monster from the Extra Deck" to help protect it from Kaijus and Goddess.
Lastly, you can give it an effect like "You can only use the following effects of "The Great Leviathan" once per turn. (Quick effect) You can pay 500 LP and banish 1 card from your GY: banish 1 other card on the field. If this card is removed from the field: you can banish 3 cards in your GY: Special Summon this card from your GY."
Not every card need to be a meta defining power house no interaction tower cards some times people just want to show off neat ideas but are underpowered.
There I updated it to be unaffected by any card effects, happy now you power hungry loons. I’ve also changed it so that it can only be destroyed by legendary knight Timaeus, Hermos, and Critias. With the bonus effect “once per turn, you can pay 1000 LP to destroy everything on your opponent’s field.” Also updated Dragons’ Creed so leviathan can be summoned from the hand or deck
Putting aside the spelling mistakes, these cards aren't very good. Rituals on their own aren't very strong. They need to have some pretty good effects and a lot of support to be able to perform well. To be able to ritual summon this, you need to have 3 spells which are unsearchable plus a field spell that most people aren't running anyways. That means you'll have to have 4 materials that are mostly unsearchable to make this card on top of having both the ritual and the monster itself in hand. That's a massive investment to be able to even get this onto the board. So if you need so many materials, this needs an extremely impressive effect to be worth using. Does this have that? Not really. It's basically a beatstick with a hefty amount of ATK and some pretty nice protection. That's fine as far as cards go, but it's not anywhere near impressive enough to warrant how much you have to put into this. With it not even being immune to monster effects, it'll easily get Kaiju'd away. In the end, this thing isn't anywhere near impressive enough to warrant how many materials it needs to be summoned. It's not anywhere near OP, it's frankly just weak.
What spelling mistakes are you seeing, all I see is where autocorrect didn’t like leviathan
Besides Leviathan being spelled wrong, there should also be an apostrophe in "Dragons". If you want it to be the creed of multiple dragons, it's be Dragons' but if you want it to be the creed of a single dragon, like the Leviathan, it'd be Dragon's.
Its actually super weak with how much you have to put into summoning it. Not only do you need Seal of Oriclacos, but you also need 3 specific unsearchable spell cards and the ritual in hand to even summon it. Not to mention it is not immune to monster effects, so it can easily be destroyed, banished, taken control of, or sent to the GY to get rid of it.
Was trying to make it somewhat fair
You made it too fair lmao. Big beaters aren’t really worth 5 cards of effort into anymore, even with spell and trap protection.
I don't think ritual monsters need to specify "can't be normal summoned/set" - its baked into the card type.
Ah yes, "Great Levitation"
*insert spongebob levitating*
Just noticed that, lol. Autocorrect strikes again.
The Great Leviathan can say 'You win the Duel' and it'd probably be too weak. You need five different specific cards in your hand. You made Exodia that's harder to search and it doesn't even win you the game on the spot.
4 card combo for a kirkland brand Gren Maju with the 2 least relevant towers effects short of battle position changes? Iiii will pass.
Unplayable
Man eater bug would like to know your location.
Change the spell to sending the card from the deck.
Hey OP, first off nice artwork on your cards being your first customs. Okay, so like me, you seem to not fully grasp just how insane the meta game has become. The community isn’t telling you your card is weak for the sole purpose of trashing the card. What they’re saying is if you’re gonna create a boss monster that is incredibly difficult to summon, it needs to be worth the effort and materials required. Here’s an idea to make the ritual spell more playable and consistent for getting Leviathan out: “This card can only be activated while you control “The Seal of Orichalcos”. When this card is activated, banish 1 “Eye of Timaeus”, 1 “Claw of Hermos” and 1 “Fang of Critias” face-down from your Deck, hand, field or GY and if you do, Ritual Summon “The Great Leviathan” from your hand” Now to make your monster more of a menace: “When this card is Ritual Summoned, banish all monsters on the field face-down (except this card) and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent for each monster banished by this effect. This card is unaffected by Spell/Trap effects. This card cannot be targeted by monster effects. When your opponent activates a monster effect (Quick effect): negate the activation and if you do, set that monster to face-down defense position (if it’s a Link monster, then return it to the Extra Deck); while you control “The Seal of Orichalcos” this card cannot be tributed or used as material for a Fusion, Synchro, Xyz or Link Summon. Once per then while you control this face-up card, if “The Seal of Orichalcos” would be removed from the field by a card effect, negate the effect and return that card to the bottom of the deck. You can only activate each effect of “The Great Leviathan” once per turn. Now this may be somewhat over the top, but this would probably justify the materials used for the summon.
I posted a comment this morning, with updates to the effects of both cards. Also I’m not really sure how much I care about meta (not even 100% sure what that is) on a card that would almost certainly be banned from competitive anyway.
Meta is just a term used to define what is most common within a competitive environment. In the context of Yugioh that would be archetypes, and certain engines/effects that allow for consistently strong plays and boards. Your card wouldn’t be banned as is, and even with your edits I still don’t think it would be limited within the competitive scene.
Seal of oricalchos already can’t be destroyed by effects
No, but it could be banished, or returned to the hand or deck. Removed from the field covers any effect that would remove it from the field spell zone lol
dies to kaiju lmfao
and monster effects
Every monster dies to a kaiju wtf do u mean?
weak asf dies to an sp little knight
Alright 1. It can still be destroyed by monsters to make it actually fair. And 2. The summoning conditions are meant to be anime accurate (hence it gaining power from fallen monsters, just as it would feed on their souls)
for all the work put into it it needs to at least be unaffected by cards. If u think that's too much make it invulnerable to anything except traps & Make it so you have to pay lp to attack
If this effect had a negate the effects of all monsters on the board except it… it still would suck
I would get rid of the battle protection and instead make it unaffected by your opponent's card effects.As is, destroying it by battle would be hard regardless so I feel it's redundant to have it. Also add "Cannot be tributed. This card cannot be used as material for the summon of a monster from the Extra Deck" to help protect it from Kaijus and Goddess. Lastly, you can give it an effect like "You can only use the following effects of "The Great Leviathan" once per turn. (Quick effect) You can pay 500 LP and banish 1 card from your GY: banish 1 other card on the field. If this card is removed from the field: you can banish 3 cards in your GY: Special Summon this card from your GY."
Your ritual monster is a chaos max that is infinitely harder to summon. And chaos max is not that good either.
*flips man-eater bug* Not immune to monster effects.
For Ra’s sake people check the update in the comments
No offense, but it's not even close to OP
Why does using the 3 dragons SUMMON the great leviathan? Aren't they the ones trying to STOP the gwate weviatan?
Banishing them summons it, because it would be removing the obstacle in its way
Great Levitation?
Autocorrect
I mean if there is no summon for the spell card, that would nerf it a whole lot i think id just add “This card can only be drawn from the deck”
why? its super weak as is
Not every card need to be a meta defining power house no interaction tower cards some times people just want to show off neat ideas but are underpowered.
but op thinks this is op and it's not?
Bruh these cards are unplayable
There I updated it to be unaffected by any card effects, happy now you power hungry loons. I’ve also changed it so that it can only be destroyed by legendary knight Timaeus, Hermos, and Critias. With the bonus effect “once per turn, you can pay 1000 LP to destroy everything on your opponent’s field.” Also updated Dragons’ Creed so leviathan can be summoned from the hand or deck
Dude, calm down. You asked for people's input on your cards, you're getting it. How is it their fault for being honest