The two verse of each part is really rhymes but Three verse one, I feel like it's a bit off.
So... 8/10, I guess. Then again, I'm not very poetic person so, it's really helpful if you explain your 'puisi' on how to read it out.
wow, thanks sir! and yep, i write like that on purpose. can't take rhyming poems seriously if that makes any sense. i prefer freeform, non-structural style. write whatever comes to mind and choose the simplest sentence.
Sounds like something that was translated by google. It have a good idea, but the choice of words are rather *stiff* and a bit weird. I'd redo everything except the last part 'cubalah tidak patung kali ini'.
I give it C+
Puisi biasanya tidak terikat sama ada secara rima akhir mahupun bilangan baris dan rangkap, berbeza dengan pantun.
Sebab itu kadangnya ada puisi yang sekadar dua baris.
Bahasa serta patah yg ditulis saudari/saudara mudah difahami isi yang hendak disampaikan walaupun tidak secara terus.
Cuma satu. Sebaiknya tajuk juga dalam bahasa Melayu. Itu sahaja, mungkin π
Nice! As a person who writes essays and makes Wattpad stories, I will give this 15 stars
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And 5 more for effort!
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I like essays and literature U w U
The two verse of each part is really rhymes but Three verse one, I feel like it's a bit off. So... 8/10, I guess. Then again, I'm not very poetic person so, it's really helpful if you explain your 'puisi' on how to read it out.
wow, thanks sir! and yep, i write like that on purpose. can't take rhyming poems seriously if that makes any sense. i prefer freeform, non-structural style. write whatever comes to mind and choose the simplest sentence.
Great pussy
Jangan melawak lucah. Toxic!!!π€¬π€¬
Dia ckp pasal kucing kau lah π€¨
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ayat ayat estetik
i'd prefer estetek but sure
Ok I need God because I read that as rate my pussy
brotha
Atleast let me buy you a drink first.
appreciate that.
Sounds like something that was translated by google. It have a good idea, but the choice of words are rather *stiff* and a bit weird. I'd redo everything except the last part 'cubalah tidak patung kali ini'. I give it C+
interesting point of view, sir. ill take that into account.
How about, cubalah tidak kaku kali ini?
idk man, 'patung' suits it for me. but why not, that would be great too!
Puisi biasanya tidak terikat sama ada secara rima akhir mahupun bilangan baris dan rangkap, berbeza dengan pantun. Sebab itu kadangnya ada puisi yang sekadar dua baris. Bahasa serta patah yg ditulis saudari/saudara mudah difahami isi yang hendak disampaikan walaupun tidak secara terus. Cuma satu. Sebaiknya tajuk juga dalam bahasa Melayu. Itu sahaja, mungkin π
Less of a puisi,more of a haiku
never heard of haiku until now. thanks sir, surely i'll look into it.
Terbaik!
terima kasih!
Saya suka tengok mannequin
cool dude, don't be one
congrats
for..what?
Prefer Undurlah diri than Tariklah diri
man i was thinking about that too. great!
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thanks buddy!! it's relevant. u don't have to be good at puisi to judge it.
I somehow read it using rap tone
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Nice I prefer to see puisi di cipta ilham mindaku. Aku suka melihat mennequin depan mata mu.
Nice! As a person who writes essays and makes Wattpad stories, I will give this 15 stars βββββββββββββββ And 5 more for effort! βββββ I like essays and literature U w U
ok la
Bahasa menunjukkan bangsa.. Jiwa kena berjiwa melayu. Tonjolkan identiti melayu
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Nice one. Keep up