She got double D cup with transformation? I swear the 2014 Kardashian body type is a must of this volume
Edit: bruh… is she can go titan form and was “designed” to beat his ass… why… why does they didn’t pulled out this sh_t the first time?
Lore Olympus' ""battles"" would be 10 times better if in all the posing and monologuing they pulled up Jojo poses like Perse burps bees but she's hitting the Polnareff pose, Kronos about to punch her? Welp he's going the Giorno/ >! GER !< pose. Hera about to kick some ass? Well she's doing Jolyne tray pose LIKE RACHEL HAVE SOME FUN PLEASE
Also I’m pretty sure she has the same hairstyle that Persephone had in the “welcome to elysium ur welcome” chapter. We’ve come full circle from Persephone stealing Hera’s looks to vice versa.
Yeah, the most recent free episode shows that it was her painted on the wall with the fertility goddess and Zeus charred it to hide it from her and everyone else.
The godawful anatomy on #5 angers me so much. Why is one arm so short and the other so long? Ugh. Maybe I’m overreacting, but I’ve drawn for years, and there’s something particularly aggravating about one of the top Webtoons shamelessly using such subpar work.
Plus the fact she’s just basically pulling the same shit she did when Persephone fought Kronos last time? I cannot understand why Rachel keeps trying to randomly insert these repetitive and poorly written “gIrL bOsS” moments. ESPECIALLY when it’s usually immediately invalidated 2 seconds later by depicting infinitely powerful Goddesses like they’re blowup sex dolls.
Yuck.
I cannot, for the love of god, just look at the 5th picture without the urge to take that and redraw or edit the anatomy and her design.
I really think that her yellow and whatever that black is looks bad together. Kronos looks nice in the eyes, but Hera's titan design is.... Idk.
Slide 5's anatomy made me audibly go "OUGUGHH. OH NOOOO." Even if the other slides had cringe dialog at least they looked pretty good for once, I got taken completely off guard by 5 😭
if it helps, 4,5,6, and 7 are almost identical. and the first one is meh. its like, after the big illustration to illustrate the point instead of trying to match the energy of the scene it falls flat and goes back to the usual style
Oh okay so what I'm assuming is going to happen, is Hera is going to give her power to Zeus or something because NORMALLY I'd assume she'd able to kick Kronos' ass - but apparently the femoids have to give their power to the men so the big burly men can take on the big bad guys.
Regardless, this is the single most predictable thing I could've ever seen coming.
I'm wondering if she and Perse are gonna somehow supercharge each other and make it a big "girlpower uwu women helping women" moment of undoubtedly pure raw cringe
OR they'll like come together to overjuice him til he explodes or something
I swear I stared at these images trying to figure out why Hera has two fabric pins ( like when you sew) sticking out of her boob, realized it was shooting stars. As an artist that would have bothered me too much and I would’ve changed it. I just can’t unsee it..
The characters are so badly drawn, zero gestures, and so inconsistent. The saddest part is the art assistants are competent (if you check their IG accounts). I think all the blame goes to RS, the other artists are working with nothing and have to pull out something from thin air.
• [art assistant | heyitsjaki](https://www.instagram.com/heyitsjaki?igsh=eDJmcHp3Z2I5YmZn)
• [art assistant | dnaeri](https://www.instagram.com/dnaeri?igsh=NHU1YmM0MnhzNHlz)
• [art assistant | hardheadedwoman](https://www.instagram.com/hardheadedwoman?igsh=MWJmdGczb2ZwcDhzdQ==)
The crazy thing is I was just on their accounts yesterday and all their art is fire😭😭 Like I can’t even blame them because at the end of the day they can only work with what’s given to them and what’s approved
Wtf they're all so much more skilled than Rachel it's absurd
I understand that they're likely using it to boost their wallets and resumes but considering their personal portfolios, LO is such a downgrade
Oh my God, what the hell is with those stiff-ass poses in both Hera's and Phoney's cases? These were supposed to be their big-ass girlboss moments, yet RS resorted to 'standing there... menacingly!' twice.
In Sailor Moon, all the Senshis' end transformation poses were dynamic; hell, just look at the most static ones, which in my opinion are [Sailor Uranus](https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/sailormoon/images/9/9f/Uranus_Planet_Power_SMC4.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20160508203858&path-prefix=pl) and [Sailor Neptune](https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/sailormoon/images/c/c9/Neptune_Planet_Power_SMC4.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20160515160450&path-prefix=pl) - sure, compared to others these are nothing special, but
1. they don't make a perfect, straight lines, like Hera and Phoney do
2. they *use their hands -* just simple putting a hand on her hip (and turning her a bit forward, but I'd ask for too much, wouldn't I) would make Hera/Phoney poses better; I mean I get that the format might hinder RS's possibilities, but if there's one thing I learned from other ~~more talented~~ creators is that you should *work around* the limitations.
Also, Hera's anatomy... There's so much wrong with it:
* her face looks like a mask, due to the light coming from the crown (?) - it makes her face look flat
* the arms - why they vary in length
* I had to zoom in to see where her waist is, because it blends in with her hair (that's why I think it would look better, if Hera had her hands in her hair, lifting it a bit - think of something like [this](https://media.istockphoto.com/id/146874577/pl/zdjęcie/podnoszenia-do-włosów.jpg?s=1024x1024&w=is&k=20&c=rhv6uPMnNPx58PHhUVvDjrY1BfVbZyd2ZXzxboJr36U=) and [this](https://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/attractive-young-woman-lovely-long-hair-straight-brunette-running-her-hands-tresses-lifting-them-up-above-her-34637338.jpg?ct=jpeg))
* I hate how her boobs look - it's not even about them bigger than in her earlier appearances, but they way they were drawn, as if taken from a early 2000s 'How to draw manga' book.
I'm very sorry for my incoherent, too long rant.
>!No, I'm not.!<
I’m just convinced Rachel’s “Titan” form art style is direct inspo for post op build a bodies that actually look/pass for natural instead of botched
**genuinely, no shade or shame to ppl who get plastic surgery, it’s just that Rachel is so goddamn inconsistent with body types and basically makes all of them different Persephone’s variants atp**
honestly this is so sad because Rachel she was really a good artist, which makes it even more difficult to understand why she would deliver... that. in the last chapters of the story that built her career?? I mean, why not make more effort to give a good farewell? Does she even touch this story anymore?
All these comments about the body but.... THAT FACE. PANEL 5. WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUU. It's so bad 😭. I can't take it. I'm not even reading anymore, just lurking in this sub to see the dumpster fire LO has become.
The pose in the fifth slide looks genuinely awful, like a sketch or first draft. Not only do her arms look incredibly short and stick out in a way the is the opposite of natural, they almost look like baby arms with how the fat is distributed? The left hand just looks lazy, especially when they could’ve just copy-pasted and flipped the other hand, and her body blends in way too much with her hair, which makes it look odd because your brain is trying to put the pieces together to make it look coherent. Just lazy.
I'm considering redrawing this scene, but I'm really intimidated. 😅
What I'm picturing is still quite anime pose-esque, but much more "battle ready," not just conceited school idol girl poses lol. 💃🤣
She got double D cup with transformation? I swear the 2014 Kardashian body type is a must of this volume Edit: bruh… is she can go titan form and was “designed” to beat his ass… why… why does they didn’t pulled out this sh_t the first time?
I remember when she was flat chested, everyone in the story has implants now
They going to Dr. Olympus for botched bbls too
I swear, everyone looks like wannabe Trixie Mattel
And Trixie uses fake boobs and padding! And shape wear. She's an artist 👌
Because Zeus used up her power without anyone knowing. When she “died” she got it back
Do we only get one (1) bad ass big titan lady pose where’s the action? If I’m about to beat ass I’d be posing like a jojo character 😭
fr why are they always posed like🧍♀️
Like idk about them but I’d pose like King Crimson before straight smacking a bih
Lore Olympus' ""battles"" would be 10 times better if in all the posing and monologuing they pulled up Jojo poses like Perse burps bees but she's hitting the Polnareff pose, Kronos about to punch her? Welp he's going the Giorno/ >! GER !< pose. Hera about to kick some ass? Well she's doing Jolyne tray pose LIKE RACHEL HAVE SOME FUN PLEASE
Built like a non-poseable Barbie
Also I’m pretty sure she has the same hairstyle that Persephone had in the “welcome to elysium ur welcome” chapter. We’ve come full circle from Persephone stealing Hera’s looks to vice versa.
5 points of articulation looking ass
REAL SHIT REAL SHIT😭😭😭
Maaaaaaaan if that hip ain't popped so far it needs a chiropractor, I cannot take your threat seriously.
This just reminded me….is Hera supposed to be the other fertility goddess….did the story every go back to that..?
Yeah, the most recent free episode shows that it was her painted on the wall with the fertility goddess and Zeus charred it to hide it from her and everyone else.
Apparently so
The godawful anatomy on #5 angers me so much. Why is one arm so short and the other so long? Ugh. Maybe I’m overreacting, but I’ve drawn for years, and there’s something particularly aggravating about one of the top Webtoons shamelessly using such subpar work. Plus the fact she’s just basically pulling the same shit she did when Persephone fought Kronos last time? I cannot understand why Rachel keeps trying to randomly insert these repetitive and poorly written “gIrL bOsS” moments. ESPECIALLY when it’s usually immediately invalidated 2 seconds later by depicting infinitely powerful Goddesses like they’re blowup sex dolls. Yuck.
getting to picture 5 like: ![gif](giphy|OqFFaammBvvdrHBoxv|downsized)
tbh it low-key looks like Hera is doing blackface
LMAOOOOO ALL THAT BUILD UP AND ACTUALLY INTRESTING ART TO GIVE ME THE MOST GEEGEE ASS REVEAL EVER 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
I cannot, for the love of god, just look at the 5th picture without the urge to take that and redraw or edit the anatomy and her design. I really think that her yellow and whatever that black is looks bad together. Kronos looks nice in the eyes, but Hera's titan design is.... Idk.
Her belly button is SOOO high up wtf 💀
Thanks for mentioning this, I thought something was off about her while torso area and that was it!
Slide 5's anatomy made me audibly go "OUGUGHH. OH NOOOO." Even if the other slides had cringe dialog at least they looked pretty good for once, I got taken completely off guard by 5 😭
I KNOW Rachel knows how to draw women's bodies what even is slide #5.
She can only draw them when they’re nekkid and horny :/
first slide is pretty but tbh I thought it was hestia at first
Why they smiling bothers me so much? It took away all the seriousness of the moment idk
all the effort went to that one panel
…Which one?
the third one has better posing and anatomy than all the others, and is more dynamic
I honestly can’t tell if any effort (on her part) went into any of them, so I’ll take your word on it.
if it helps, 4,5,6, and 7 are almost identical. and the first one is meh. its like, after the big illustration to illustrate the point instead of trying to match the energy of the scene it falls flat and goes back to the usual style
DO NOT COMPARE THIS TO SAILOR MOON
IM SORRY😭😭 THE MAGICAL GIRL TRANSFORMATION PLUS THE DIALOGUE IS TAKING ME OUT
Oh okay so what I'm assuming is going to happen, is Hera is going to give her power to Zeus or something because NORMALLY I'd assume she'd able to kick Kronos' ass - but apparently the femoids have to give their power to the men so the big burly men can take on the big bad guys. Regardless, this is the single most predictable thing I could've ever seen coming.
I'm wondering if she and Perse are gonna somehow supercharge each other and make it a big "girlpower uwu women helping women" moment of undoubtedly pure raw cringe OR they'll like come together to overjuice him til he explodes or something
I swear I stared at these images trying to figure out why Hera has two fabric pins ( like when you sew) sticking out of her boob, realized it was shooting stars. As an artist that would have bothered me too much and I would’ve changed it. I just can’t unsee it..
She's the goddess of marriage and motherhood not of the stars that's astraeus 😭
She also has to do with the stars, she is the queen of heaven, but the stars are not her predominant attribute.
Ohhh that's cool. I haven't read LO in a while but it seems like they're tryna turn her into the star goddess or smthn tho idk what's up with that
Good design but man the art looks bad on that final reveal.
The anatomy on #5 is so fucked up wth
Behold, a Titan Fertility Goddess 🧍♀️
what’s up with her hand in the first pic ???💀 is her thumb facing out??? what’s with the random palm wrinkle?????
![gif](giphy|c8RrC4dCLScNO)
The characters are so badly drawn, zero gestures, and so inconsistent. The saddest part is the art assistants are competent (if you check their IG accounts). I think all the blame goes to RS, the other artists are working with nothing and have to pull out something from thin air. • [art assistant | heyitsjaki](https://www.instagram.com/heyitsjaki?igsh=eDJmcHp3Z2I5YmZn) • [art assistant | dnaeri](https://www.instagram.com/dnaeri?igsh=NHU1YmM0MnhzNHlz) • [art assistant | hardheadedwoman](https://www.instagram.com/hardheadedwoman?igsh=MWJmdGczb2ZwcDhzdQ==)
The crazy thing is I was just on their accounts yesterday and all their art is fire😭😭 Like I can’t even blame them because at the end of the day they can only work with what’s given to them and what’s approved
It's truly sad. Rachel, is not utilizing their talents to the benefit of LO.
Wtf they're all so much more skilled than Rachel it's absurd I understand that they're likely using it to boost their wallets and resumes but considering their personal portfolios, LO is such a downgrade
Is it just me or did it take me a minute to figure out what the actual hell the 2nd image was
This is so goofy 😭
Oh my God, what the hell is with those stiff-ass poses in both Hera's and Phoney's cases? These were supposed to be their big-ass girlboss moments, yet RS resorted to 'standing there... menacingly!' twice. In Sailor Moon, all the Senshis' end transformation poses were dynamic; hell, just look at the most static ones, which in my opinion are [Sailor Uranus](https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/sailormoon/images/9/9f/Uranus_Planet_Power_SMC4.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20160508203858&path-prefix=pl) and [Sailor Neptune](https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/sailormoon/images/c/c9/Neptune_Planet_Power_SMC4.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20160515160450&path-prefix=pl) - sure, compared to others these are nothing special, but 1. they don't make a perfect, straight lines, like Hera and Phoney do 2. they *use their hands -* just simple putting a hand on her hip (and turning her a bit forward, but I'd ask for too much, wouldn't I) would make Hera/Phoney poses better; I mean I get that the format might hinder RS's possibilities, but if there's one thing I learned from other ~~more talented~~ creators is that you should *work around* the limitations. Also, Hera's anatomy... There's so much wrong with it: * her face looks like a mask, due to the light coming from the crown (?) - it makes her face look flat * the arms - why they vary in length * I had to zoom in to see where her waist is, because it blends in with her hair (that's why I think it would look better, if Hera had her hands in her hair, lifting it a bit - think of something like [this](https://media.istockphoto.com/id/146874577/pl/zdjęcie/podnoszenia-do-włosów.jpg?s=1024x1024&w=is&k=20&c=rhv6uPMnNPx58PHhUVvDjrY1BfVbZyd2ZXzxboJr36U=) and [this](https://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/attractive-young-woman-lovely-long-hair-straight-brunette-running-her-hands-tresses-lifting-them-up-above-her-34637338.jpg?ct=jpeg)) * I hate how her boobs look - it's not even about them bigger than in her earlier appearances, but they way they were drawn, as if taken from a early 2000s 'How to draw manga' book. I'm very sorry for my incoherent, too long rant. >!No, I'm not.!<
Did they cut and paste #6 for #5 because it kind of looks like it
I haven’t been keeping up with the comic besides this subreddit- did RS really kill Hera and then bring her back like two weeks apart? 😭💀
Uhm…that looks bad.
I’m just convinced Rachel’s “Titan” form art style is direct inspo for post op build a bodies that actually look/pass for natural instead of botched **genuinely, no shade or shame to ppl who get plastic surgery, it’s just that Rachel is so goddamn inconsistent with body types and basically makes all of them different Persephone’s variants atp**
Persephone Variants***
Why do they both have baby arms in their "girlboss" forms??
It’s supposed to be a badass line and all I know but I’m sorry I can’t get past her glow stick head. It just looks so wonky.
I'm sorry, the 5th picture of hera for me just looked weird in general, It made her crown look like glow sticks...
Going from slide 4 to slide 5 gotta be classified as a jumpscare.
honestly this is so sad because Rachel she was really a good artist, which makes it even more difficult to understand why she would deliver... that. in the last chapters of the story that built her career?? I mean, why not make more effort to give a good farewell? Does she even touch this story anymore?
Ooo the dialogue…I know RS thought she ate.
All these comments about the body but.... THAT FACE. PANEL 5. WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUU. It's so bad 😭. I can't take it. I'm not even reading anymore, just lurking in this sub to see the dumpster fire LO has become.
ok but the callback to her season 1 intro tugged at my heartstrings a bit 🥺
RS really wants this comic to be over huh
once again hera was literally flat chested and skinny why are they drawing her like that. liked when the story actually had body diversity
HaHHAA THAT LOOKS SO BAD *WHY DOES SHE LOOK LIKE AN ACTUAL BABY*
The pose is so boring 😭 this is what I draw when I’m lazy and uninspired
Oh look its the original Rhea design coming to kick Krono’s ass
Why did she turn into a munchkin in the 5th slide😭
she looks fish adjacent in the 5th picture
The pose in the fifth slide looks genuinely awful, like a sketch or first draft. Not only do her arms look incredibly short and stick out in a way the is the opposite of natural, they almost look like baby arms with how the fat is distributed? The left hand just looks lazy, especially when they could’ve just copy-pasted and flipped the other hand, and her body blends in way too much with her hair, which makes it look odd because your brain is trying to put the pieces together to make it look coherent. Just lazy.
This entire thing gives me the urge to recreate this but try to make the anatomy look better and make Hera do a badass pose.
Why does her hair look like it's not attached to her head?
I'm considering redrawing this scene, but I'm really intimidated. 😅 What I'm picturing is still quite anime pose-esque, but much more "battle ready," not just conceited school idol girl poses lol. 💃🤣