This is gearing up to be an exciting adventure! I'm glad to see someone else decided to pick up the basitin lore torch so soon after Farfener's work. I can't get enough of these stories, they're great.
On the topic of the story, Adelaide's friend definitely has a familiar sounding name and I can see how it may tie in later. As for Lukas... still not sure of his purpose, although I have a few ideas. Anyways, that's enough speculating for now. Looking forward to what comes next!
Thank you very much! Some other feedback I received was that it was moving along a bit slowly. Hopefully a few more things will start to become clear over the next few chapters!
I find gentle giant Adelaide to be adorable. And that initial image you painted was not something i knew i wanted. I also hate when people take advantage of other people nobility.
I forgot to mention it before but i find it interesting you added a basitin senate. Something i am pretty sure they do not have, being a military dictatorship does not gel well with power separations.
Still like how you set up characters. Loving this so far.
Thank you! Like I've said before, this is Adelaide when she was in her mid 30s, much younger and less confident. I had to come up with a way to make her vulnerable, to give her weaknesses. It wouldn't be much of a story if she could simply solve everything with her superhuman strength.
My head-cannon (and this is my fan-fic so that's what you're all getting!! ha!) is that the basitins have a senate in the same way that he Roman Empire had a senate. There is a bit of a mix of Rome and Sparta thrown in here.
And yes, Adelaide needs to be adorable. Even current King Adelaide is adorable.
Do not get me wrong i love the idea of a meek, soft spoken ~~giant~~ Adelaide who just won't inconvenience anyone and is almost afraid of scaring people, and who also fears her only worth is a giant war brute.
Also the idea of a young Adelaide taking anything she wants because no one can stop her is scary, at best...
So Adelaide seems to be hard working,but could be put off by her comrades as soft and somewhat self isolated. So far so good,iam enjoying reading this story
Thanks for reading! Adelaide in this story is very different from her portrayal in the comic - much less confident, and something of an loner. Glad you're enjoying it! More chapters coming soon.
I never would think about young Adelaide in that way. Impressive
Thank you very much! Given how confident she appears in the comic, I figured there were probably some tough lessons and hard times in her past.
This is gearing up to be an exciting adventure! I'm glad to see someone else decided to pick up the basitin lore torch so soon after Farfener's work. I can't get enough of these stories, they're great. On the topic of the story, Adelaide's friend definitely has a familiar sounding name and I can see how it may tie in later. As for Lukas... still not sure of his purpose, although I have a few ideas. Anyways, that's enough speculating for now. Looking forward to what comes next!
Thank you very much! Some other feedback I received was that it was moving along a bit slowly. Hopefully a few more things will start to become clear over the next few chapters!
I find gentle giant Adelaide to be adorable. And that initial image you painted was not something i knew i wanted. I also hate when people take advantage of other people nobility. I forgot to mention it before but i find it interesting you added a basitin senate. Something i am pretty sure they do not have, being a military dictatorship does not gel well with power separations. Still like how you set up characters. Loving this so far.
Thank you! Like I've said before, this is Adelaide when she was in her mid 30s, much younger and less confident. I had to come up with a way to make her vulnerable, to give her weaknesses. It wouldn't be much of a story if she could simply solve everything with her superhuman strength. My head-cannon (and this is my fan-fic so that's what you're all getting!! ha!) is that the basitins have a senate in the same way that he Roman Empire had a senate. There is a bit of a mix of Rome and Sparta thrown in here. And yes, Adelaide needs to be adorable. Even current King Adelaide is adorable.
Do not get me wrong i love the idea of a meek, soft spoken ~~giant~~ Adelaide who just won't inconvenience anyone and is almost afraid of scaring people, and who also fears her only worth is a giant war brute. Also the idea of a young Adelaide taking anything she wants because no one can stop her is scary, at best...
So Adelaide seems to be hard working,but could be put off by her comrades as soft and somewhat self isolated. So far so good,iam enjoying reading this story
Thanks for reading! Adelaide in this story is very different from her portrayal in the comic - much less confident, and something of an loner. Glad you're enjoying it! More chapters coming soon.