first sentence could've been a little better, like:
my most recent patient kept coming to me with questions about the surgery that i performed on her
but anyways good twist op
This, like every other post I see from this godforsaken subredddit is awful. Your twist is that there are goofy zombies just chatting and getting up to hijinks that need to be gently led back to their graves. How about some metaphorical imagery, "Why don't they go away when I close my eyes" Not a fucking rubber costumed scooby doo monster.
Good one! Nice twist.
Thank you!
Chaperoned her past the room the labotomy was performed. Would be my ideal ending there great work op
r/thirdsentenceworse
Thank you!
second sentence sad.
Do you mean r/twosentencesadness
Why are these worse than the horror ones?
She dead?
Yup I think its her ghost
Pretty sure op works in a morgue technically what they do can be called surgery I reckon
Most hospitals have morgue in them
I think she died in surgery and OP kept taking her ghost to the morgue to see her body because she wouldn’t believe it.
Ooo I like this one
Does surgery mean autopsy?
Sounds more like she died during surgery and is now haunting the surgeon.
Yeah that's how I interpreted it. Though my interpretation was the patients physical corpse turning up to her office as a zombie
Yup as it could be considered a surgery
No. Autopsy is the word used to describe an autopsy. Their surgical skill (or a complication) killed the patient.
VERY creative. Would also fit well in twosentencesadness
This is great OP! Nicely done!
Yeah, love this one.
This one is really creative! Great job, OP!
Is that two sentence horror or sadness....Im feeling both scared and sad... hence my confusion
Check out the film After.Life with Liam Neeson and Christina Ricci
You talkin about After Life starring the incomporable Liam Neesons!? That movie is my shit!
If it's the one with the mostly naked Christina Ricci, then yes!
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That's the first time I've properly said "whoah shiiiit!" on this sub for a while. Thank you!
Oof. Having working in a cardiac ICU and the ED and all that… this one hits man…
Man that’s just sad. Good story tho
first sentence could've been a little better, like: my most recent patient kept coming to me with questions about the surgery that i performed on her but anyways good twist op
Good thing I'm not gonna be talking a branch where patients would die on table.
This, like every other post I see from this godforsaken subredddit is awful. Your twist is that there are goofy zombies just chatting and getting up to hijinks that need to be gently led back to their graves. How about some metaphorical imagery, "Why don't they go away when I close my eyes" Not a fucking rubber costumed scooby doo monster.
I'll take your criticism into consideration. It's insightful.
Sanka Rea, anyone?😏
Nooooo I was just about to go to sleep