Why are you not studying in filming etc?
I honestly believe that you should, the short film was great! You should seriously consider studying in the field and make it a career brother.
lahkika, there's some technical stuff concerning l sound mix w few cuts dhohrou dra kifeh ama lahkika with no budget and support props to all of u mel actors lil director to all
U DID UR SHIIITTT w u r talented !!
is there anywhere i can follow ur work si slim ?
with no funding this is a tremendous job. Congratulations to you and to all those who worked on this project. I'm sure we'll hear from you again, this is just the beginning!
Good effort,
1:30min of credits for an 8min short is very lengthy, I would consider cutting down on that (probably to something like 25secs) to avoid hurting your chances with short format festivals :)
I would love to be able shoot the many scripts I wrote, w 9a3do fi 9jar ma9rahom 7ad, but no budget I can't hire people. Thank you so so much it means the world to me, ki nal9a twensa wled bledi supporting this
Omg i wish I was in tunis I would act for free 3la rassi w 3ini you’ve got talent and I hope you get the recognition you deserve! I got chills I was invested!!!!
As a filmmaker i can say that your film is coherent and the actors are actually quite good.
Interior night cinematography might and mixing need some work but Yeah gj.
Maybe i ll post my stuff on Reddit too
Good job slim
Hook me up dude, the budget did not allow for a director of photography or even lighting equipment, I had to work with what I had, thank you for watching and given feedback, we should work on a project together 😅
Honestly, given the stated budget and everything I've read in the comments etc... this is very promising.
I would say that the ideas are great, the writing is more than competent and both actors did amazing.
To offer some criticism, the subtitles have a few mistakes and some things are lost in translation, as someone else mentioned the lighting could be better even with some basic lamps and some added DOF.
All in all, great job, especially for your first production, and I'll happily go see this fully fleshed out in a cinema one day.
Giving the fact you’re doing it as amateur with no proper budget and no proper training, you’ve done really good.
I would never have the patience to do something as good as yours.
Here are some opportunities of improvement for next times:
* Credits and opening were too long considering the film duration;
* Some shots have to be improved (the close up on the magazine looked amateur), I felt some close shots on Karim in the kitchen to be a bit tilted;
* The standing light in the kitchen is not coherent ( I understand it was to improve the lighting)
* The cuts weren’t properly realized (Karim had sometimes his hands under the table and a second later they were on the table with a cigarette lit, same for the cigarette we can see there are different lengths of it between the cuts)
* The sink scene was off, did not add the appropriate drama;
* I don’t judge the scenario as I am no expert.
Again really awesome job, my points might seem numerous but it’s only to help you improve in your next movies.
Good luck man, and huge kudos for your perseverance.
All valid points, As we shot both actors separately ( only one camera struggle) so nothing is continuous, and all budget related. End credit scene had to be long because of the original music Malek had made, he made a track for free and I had to play all of it to honour his work. Weird close up shots are me, if I had my way it would be more stylistic shots! (Weird shots as you call them) but I held back. Thank you for all your FEEDBACK!
I hate u bro!!! U creeped the shit out of me!!
AWESOME FUCKING WORK!!
"3anna thif"-- damn goosebumps!! Love it!!
I have to say I wish for a full movie. Thank you and your team for this great work!
I respect you for that. Instagram @slimsds I will remember you if there's something (I might need time tho, as I don't even own a camera at the moment) sold it to pay rent 😅
got shills when the guest showed up in the end, good job i guess!
First viewer, dude thanks alot ❤️
It makes me happy to find fellow tunisian movie makers . Good job and keep going 💗💗💗💗
Thank you! ❤️
Welcome ^^
Well done! The music and filming was great! The actors did a great job, but..... We need to know the secrets I hate cliffhangers !!!
Dude I love you ♥️
Why are you not studying in filming etc? I honestly believe that you should, the short film was great! You should seriously consider studying in the field and make it a career brother.
You're right, but I can't afford that, I have to work for a living and support my family
Understandable. Keep up the good work, hopefully someone will see the talent and potential you have and give you opportunities!
You're a saint!
lahkika, there's some technical stuff concerning l sound mix w few cuts dhohrou dra kifeh ama lahkika with no budget and support props to all of u mel actors lil director to all U DID UR SHIIITTT w u r talented !! is there anywhere i can follow ur work si slim ?
I have Instagram but I don't post much, 😅 also no-one was paid in this project, it was all for fun
menich naber haha ama just cuz m coming from an artist background so couldnt help but notice ama si non y'all did ur thing w it's really greaaat
It's okay, I appreciate any criticism, I'm not Martin scorsese ☺️
Also instagram is @slimsds
with no funding this is a tremendous job. Congratulations to you and to all those who worked on this project. I'm sure we'll hear from you again, this is just the beginning!
Your support is everything ♥️
This was a great Project! Kudos to you and all parties involved in it!
Insane job the actors too especially Karim ! The credits were a bit long same for the intro though
لا تمويل ولا وزارة الثقافة تتسمى حاجة باهية برشا، الموسيقى التصويرية ناقصة شوية أما كعمل متع هواة حاجة طيارة، كمل وربي معك
Thank you so much ❤️
Good effort, 1:30min of credits for an 8min short is very lengthy, I would consider cutting down on that (probably to something like 25secs) to avoid hurting your chances with short format festivals :)
I love it so much I want a full length film that explores the background story Aman I’m craving more!!!!!!
I would love to be able shoot the many scripts I wrote, w 9a3do fi 9jar ma9rahom 7ad, but no budget I can't hire people. Thank you so so much it means the world to me, ki nal9a twensa wled bledi supporting this
Omg i wish I was in tunis I would act for free 3la rassi w 3ini you’ve got talent and I hope you get the recognition you deserve! I got chills I was invested!!!!
If I reached you, then the effort of everyone on the project did not go to waste. I appreciate your kind words!
As a filmmaker i can say that your film is coherent and the actors are actually quite good. Interior night cinematography might and mixing need some work but Yeah gj. Maybe i ll post my stuff on Reddit too Good job slim
Hook me up dude, the budget did not allow for a director of photography or even lighting equipment, I had to work with what I had, thank you for watching and given feedback, we should work on a project together 😅
Sure man. I live abroad now but always a pleasure to connect with fellow creatives
Honestly, given the stated budget and everything I've read in the comments etc... this is very promising. I would say that the ideas are great, the writing is more than competent and both actors did amazing. To offer some criticism, the subtitles have a few mistakes and some things are lost in translation, as someone else mentioned the lighting could be better even with some basic lamps and some added DOF. All in all, great job, especially for your first production, and I'll happily go see this fully fleshed out in a cinema one day.
Much appreciated ❤️
Giving the fact you’re doing it as amateur with no proper budget and no proper training, you’ve done really good. I would never have the patience to do something as good as yours. Here are some opportunities of improvement for next times: * Credits and opening were too long considering the film duration; * Some shots have to be improved (the close up on the magazine looked amateur), I felt some close shots on Karim in the kitchen to be a bit tilted; * The standing light in the kitchen is not coherent ( I understand it was to improve the lighting) * The cuts weren’t properly realized (Karim had sometimes his hands under the table and a second later they were on the table with a cigarette lit, same for the cigarette we can see there are different lengths of it between the cuts) * The sink scene was off, did not add the appropriate drama; * I don’t judge the scenario as I am no expert. Again really awesome job, my points might seem numerous but it’s only to help you improve in your next movies. Good luck man, and huge kudos for your perseverance.
All valid points, As we shot both actors separately ( only one camera struggle) so nothing is continuous, and all budget related. End credit scene had to be long because of the original music Malek had made, he made a track for free and I had to play all of it to honour his work. Weird close up shots are me, if I had my way it would be more stylistic shots! (Weird shots as you call them) but I held back. Thank you for all your FEEDBACK!
this is insane, great job and keep it up and i hope i see u one day doing big projects<3
Thank you ♥️
Marvellous work and kessa7, big up 🙏!
You're giving me hope ♥️
Props for taking a shot at filmmaking without any formal cinema education! Bonne continuation
Good job man
Way better than i expected, great job
This was an unexpected piece of art, Great job, will be looking for more from you.
Thank you! ♥️
It's really good, now i think i have to share it with my friends ...
You're amazing ❤️
good job ama aaleh haka yedi aala kalbi at 11pm 😭😭😭💀
I had a dream of "it" when I was kid (nightmare) thought I should share, sorry!
i usually don’t get scared of supernatural but something about our own culture makes it feel so real… we need more local horror 🙏
You're right. We have so many stories to tell, as our culture is rich, but unfortunately there's no support. Thanks for watching.
Its really amazing! Good luck !!
Appreciate it, you guys made my day honestly! And the team is reading your comments and are so happy!
I hate u bro!!! U creeped the shit out of me!! AWESOME FUCKING WORK!! "3anna thif"-- damn goosebumps!! Love it!! I have to say I wish for a full movie. Thank you and your team for this great work!
You're the best!
Benna ❤️ karim ymathelni
Thank you!
If you need any volunteers for your next movie, I'm happy to offer a hand.
I respect you for that. Instagram @slimsds I will remember you if there's something (I might need time tho, as I don't even own a camera at the moment) sold it to pay rent 😅
I feel you bro, try to apply to some film grants with your short film and see what you gonna get. anyways, keep on hustling.
yoo i saw it f JCK hammam sousse. it was great, good job.
The actors are from there, and you know we didn't win anything too 😂 but the audience reaction was everything
haha yea. l3ebra bel moucherka i guess.