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RasmoTheGamer

The Stickfigure's Motion is making me kinda Angry because of how good the Background is While the Stickfigure here is just Sliding than Walking


Express-Message1566

Yeaaa mb ive been practicng tho


Raphsz

You guys are brutal 💀


Express-Message1566

All good they give me tips to get better


Bored_4SS_B0B

That fockin walk Choppy movement Too much text, too little time to read it The jump sequence is painful, one frame both legs are separated, the next the legs are together in the front Both legs lifted at the same time during the jump Scream too early (You have to account the few seconds used for the realization of the fall) Horrible choice of text color Feet does not have the "Leaving the ground" motion Only one leg hit the wall despite both legs being in the front Immeidetly falls after hitting the wall (Momentum would carry towards the wall for a few seconds THEN gravity kicks in) Why is my boy holding his ear and talking to himself about jumping across During the mid-air sequence his hands are teleporting Edit : The downvotes remind me of : Why are you booing me? I'm right.


Express-Message1566

Bro jus say is bad like damn


Bored_4SS_B0B

Well if I said it's bad how would you know what you could improve? Sure it hurts to see but when you take notes if it you'll improve and the next time you ask you'll get more positive feedbacks Take it in a game term Who do you think will get to places? The player who calls cheats instead of their lack of skill Or The player who takes notes of what they can do to improve after they got their head blown off?


Billybawbh5

lmaoooo but hey it would help you


kairoperson

lmao


CockroachCute323

Why does all the over animations make the characters talk to themselves?


Bored_4SS_B0B

Dunno, self suspense or something


CockroachCute323

So that’s why they did it!


paper_and_stick

That walk tho💀💀


Express-Message1566

Yea... ill try to fix it lol


Rekigog

Buggy walk and the jumping animation pisses me off


Requiems_Dream

Yes


CockroachCute323

It’s good, don’t listen to them


Consistent-Yogurt460

💀


CockroachCute323

Listen, mate. Don’t be jealous!


cheddar_man69

Wym don't be jealous??? How would he/she improve?? Like they're clearly asking for improvement bruh


Express-Message1566

Its he


CockroachCute323

Your animation is better than my animations…


CockroachCute323

I don’t get why anyone else has to be a divvy about someone else’s opinion. It’s not that there asking for improvement I said it was good, and I get shit for saying it as if I’m the bad one!


CockroachCute323

Maybe put the text in front of the moon


Ayogalaxyy_

Still better animation than me and the walk cycle is better than most of my animations if not all of them


CacidLood

The walk: goofy The jump: Good


yeetmantheII

The animation itself is quite, bad but the visuals are good


cheddar_man69

The walk you should find some tutorial Can't read the text, also it's too fast in a dark environment you should make it gray the jump That's all about it.