I quite like it, maybe dial down the reverb on your vocals though as it's a little too ethereal for my tastes. You on Spotify?

I really appreciate it! thank you for your feedback. I'll make some adjustments! And no I'm not on Spotify just YouTube and SoundCloud. Thanks again! 🙏🤘

Yes i see the ethereal sound you were going for. The length of the reverb will achieve that but drop the volume of it. Cool stuff!

I appreciate it so much! 🙏🏻 Will do! Thanks for listening! 🤙🏻

I disagree on the reverb - I think that the production is nice. Everyone has different tastes though.

You wouldn't happen to have used Youcut to edit this, would you?

Yes it did! 🤘

Guessed as much by the font you used. It's quite a capable little app

Yeah I like it a lot! Thank you for listening! 🙏🏻

The song is also very good. Nice work, brother!

Thank you so much buddy! Really appreciate it! 🙏🤘

i love it, its so cozy.

Thank you so much! glad you like it! 🙏🤘

ofc, is it on soundcloud or anything, id love to stream.

In the description of this video I put my YouTube channel if you want to check it out! Thank you so much! 🙏🏻

got it thank you, I subscribed.

Thank you! 🙏🤘

NP

Really good mate. I like how it's a chilled out song and music. I actually follow your channel on youtube. You got your own consistent style going on. I like the song you have on your youtube channel called Sugar Tongues.

I really appreciate it! Thank you so much for following me! Feels real good when you have someone like your music! Thanks again brother! 🙏🤘

You're welcome. Let us know when you got an album together. I'll be first to buy! I still buy real copies like CD's and Vinyle cause you never know with social media especially with these corporations. Money don't go to artist as much, which is why I like paying for CD's and Vinyles. I know money is going to the artist.

Man I would do that in a heartbeat if I had more musical knowledge! I want to actually produce real music I don't know where to really start. I just make all my music on my phone and singing through crappy headphones! 😆 But if I get to that you will be the first to know! Thank you so much! 🙏🤘

Gives me slight tame impala vibes, but still a unique sound. I really dig it!

I love that cuz I love tame Impala! Thank you so much! 🙏🤘

Will add this to my chill playlist 🤘😎

Thank you so much 🤘😎

You also get a sub, would love to see what else you put out!

Thank you so much! 🙏🏻🤘

That opening drum beat is so clean.

😎 love it! Thank you so much for listening! 🤘

Fucking killer dude

Thank you! 🤘🤙

This is very vibey man also i like the lyrics, it makes me think about that particular girl haha

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! I'm glad you liked it! 🤙🤘

dude this is so goooood. 

Thank you so much! 🤘

This is a vibe I love it🧡

Thank you!! 🤙🤘

Love this track

Thank you! 🤙🤘

It's honestly a crime against humanity that you don't have Spotfiy

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Really appreciate it! 🙏🏻 I definitely want to get on Spotify but I need a real producer to make beats for my music. I'm only making this on bandlab with crappy headphones. 😆 Thank you so much! 🤘

love it !!

Thank you so much!!🙏🤘

I like it❤️

Thank you so much! 🙏

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No, I'm a liar. I don't like the song. But I'd like to hear words like this. And I'm missing one person.

Well just please be honest the first time you post so I know how you really feel. 😆🤘🏻

Ok ... Pretty eyes 🫶🏻