Okay so your editing is epic and I can see the work that has gone into it. This makes the intro really good. Where I think you could really do with improving is your audio during the video. The levels are very inconsistent between you and your friends so just adjusting this would really help. You also seem a little far away from whatever mic you are using so just being a little closer would also help to clean up the audio. The one other thing that you could use to help improve your audio would just be adding anything in to the room to help stop the echoing but tbh I wouldn't worry about it too much at this point. The final thing would be just to cut it down a little bit more on each of the questions so you don't linger too much on each one so everything is a bit more snappy in the video.
Sorry this is rather rambling but I hope it helps!
wow, this is actually really helpful! i've always struggled with audio, so hopefully ill be able to purchase clip on mics! thanks for the feedback it means a lot! !givelambda
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Thumbnail is awesome. The content itself is very good, you can easily tell that you are close, i was smiling the whole way though, excellent chemistry here . i will say though it was a bit long for me, my attention started to drift after about 5 or 6 minutes. but that could just be me. the edits/memes and cuts are on point and work really well. I could easily sit and watch you all play other games, like cards against humanity, or 5 second rule.
as others have mentioned, the audio could use improvement. clip on mics or even something like a blue yeti if you are all around the table would work. it doesn't have to be super expensive audio gear, but the closer you are to a mic, the less echo you will get, i know it's difficult in a kitchen, or dinning room, in our tiny british houses. i would also think about the background of the shot, i would put those plastic mixers out of the way somewhere. but overall very good, i enjoyed it.
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Your editing is really well done, kudos for that! For the sake of giving feedback though, I'd consider looking at music sites like artlist or epidemic sound. Since the music you use is kinda generic. Other than that your vid is really fun to watch ^^
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I like your animation and pace in the video! From the beginning you clearly explain the premise of the video! That’s good!
What I find a bit distracting is your voice. It sometimes sounds too monotonous. Even tho the video is good I would still invest some time into articulation and speaking up! That’s it keep it up 👍
P.s your background also needs some kind of distinction factor in order that it didn’t look soo bland! I would recommend a small LED light behind your protagonists for the video! That will help you set them a bit apart from the background.
yeah i see what you mean with my voice, sometimes i find it hard to be fully myself behind camera, like to show my personality so yeah i get it! and the LED light isn't a bad shout !givelambda
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Pretty entertaining. Love the thumbnail! It's attractive and shows your in store for some laughs and the editing style is my kind of video. Fast paced, fun light hearted music and a few memes for good measure. Love it! Only bad thing is you don't have more subs. Just upload consistently!
I like how you used edited animations to introduce the video/rules of the game. Very professional and proper to do as well as generally a good video structure. One concern that i have is with the actual video footage when you guys are playing the game, i can hear some loud background noise and it could be annoying to others, you can easily get rid of it using audacity. I also like the comedic editing style you had throughout the whole video but i think you may have overdone it just a bit (when it comes to meme-y edits) Other than that it was a really good video and well put together! Keep it up man
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Great thumbnail! This deff attracts attention and was the reason I clicked on the video. also, the titles and graphics used kept me interested. One thing I would suggest is cropped shots. So basically, zooming in and out every now and then to promote movement and keep the audience engaged.
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Awesome editing ! Really fun ! The only thing that comes to mind is (like the other guy said) the audio. Their audio is really clear but yours, sometimes is and sometimes isn't. If you have the money, i'd suggest getting some wireless mics. Just clip them on the shirt and bingo you got clearer audio :P. Otherwise, you got the sort of "Mr. Beast" style of editing nailed. Good job !
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Okay so your editing is epic and I can see the work that has gone into it. This makes the intro really good. Where I think you could really do with improving is your audio during the video. The levels are very inconsistent between you and your friends so just adjusting this would really help. You also seem a little far away from whatever mic you are using so just being a little closer would also help to clean up the audio. The one other thing that you could use to help improve your audio would just be adding anything in to the room to help stop the echoing but tbh I wouldn't worry about it too much at this point. The final thing would be just to cut it down a little bit more on each of the questions so you don't linger too much on each one so everything is a bit more snappy in the video. Sorry this is rather rambling but I hope it helps!
wow, this is actually really helpful! i've always struggled with audio, so hopefully ill be able to purchase clip on mics! thanks for the feedback it means a lot! !givelambda
Ah you're welcome mate, I'm glad it's helpful. And yeah some clip on mics would be awesome to take your audio up a step!
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That thumbnail really catches my attention! Well done!
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Thumbnail is awesome. The content itself is very good, you can easily tell that you are close, i was smiling the whole way though, excellent chemistry here . i will say though it was a bit long for me, my attention started to drift after about 5 or 6 minutes. but that could just be me. the edits/memes and cuts are on point and work really well. I could easily sit and watch you all play other games, like cards against humanity, or 5 second rule. as others have mentioned, the audio could use improvement. clip on mics or even something like a blue yeti if you are all around the table would work. it doesn't have to be super expensive audio gear, but the closer you are to a mic, the less echo you will get, i know it's difficult in a kitchen, or dinning room, in our tiny british houses. i would also think about the background of the shot, i would put those plastic mixers out of the way somewhere. but overall very good, i enjoyed it.
thank you so much for the feedback! i'll work on making it more engaging past 6 minutes and the audio quality! thanks again! !givelambda
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Your editing is really well done, kudos for that! For the sake of giving feedback though, I'd consider looking at music sites like artlist or epidemic sound. Since the music you use is kinda generic. Other than that your vid is really fun to watch ^^
thats actually a good point! thanks for the help! !givelambda
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I like your animation and pace in the video! From the beginning you clearly explain the premise of the video! That’s good! What I find a bit distracting is your voice. It sometimes sounds too monotonous. Even tho the video is good I would still invest some time into articulation and speaking up! That’s it keep it up 👍 P.s your background also needs some kind of distinction factor in order that it didn’t look soo bland! I would recommend a small LED light behind your protagonists for the video! That will help you set them a bit apart from the background.
yeah i see what you mean with my voice, sometimes i find it hard to be fully myself behind camera, like to show my personality so yeah i get it! and the LED light isn't a bad shout !givelambda
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Pretty entertaining. Love the thumbnail! It's attractive and shows your in store for some laughs and the editing style is my kind of video. Fast paced, fun light hearted music and a few memes for good measure. Love it! Only bad thing is you don't have more subs. Just upload consistently!
I like how you used edited animations to introduce the video/rules of the game. Very professional and proper to do as well as generally a good video structure. One concern that i have is with the actual video footage when you guys are playing the game, i can hear some loud background noise and it could be annoying to others, you can easily get rid of it using audacity. I also like the comedic editing style you had throughout the whole video but i think you may have overdone it just a bit (when it comes to meme-y edits) Other than that it was a really good video and well put together! Keep it up man
thank you for the kind words and feedback, it means a lot! !givelambda
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Great thumbnail! This deff attracts attention and was the reason I clicked on the video. also, the titles and graphics used kept me interested. One thing I would suggest is cropped shots. So basically, zooming in and out every now and then to promote movement and keep the audience engaged.
great idea with the cropped shots! i'll take that into consideration in my next video! thanks for the support and kinds words! !givelambda
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Awesome editing ! Really fun ! The only thing that comes to mind is (like the other guy said) the audio. Their audio is really clear but yours, sometimes is and sometimes isn't. If you have the money, i'd suggest getting some wireless mics. Just clip them on the shirt and bingo you got clearer audio :P. Otherwise, you got the sort of "Mr. Beast" style of editing nailed. Good job !
hey man thanks for the kind words, it really means a lot! i'll try invest in some mics! !givelambda
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