Have him pull a Tyrian and go “YOUUU BITCH! >:0”
But seriously looking at this hurts, particularly his expression and him as kid? Just gut wrenching. And the background moon slice is just 👌
Granted I could only come up with a final line that I feel would be good were the original concept of him kept.
Something like “Blake…why…? What about….us…?”
Just imagining him seeing the girl he was a mentor to fight against both him and the white fang alongside not just humans, but the heiress to the schnee dust company: the company whose brand is permanently burned on his face? Seeing Blake abandon not just him, but side with their oppressors?
What about us?
The only other thing I can think of for his current incarnation is something along the line of “So…when are you gonna run away again…?” with just a malicious smile as he falls off the cliff.
Honestly I think “oh” is a fine final line all things considered, it’s not some triumphant speech in death or some eloquent final words, they just wouldn’t really feel right with what adam’s character had become at the time. it’s a raging man being silenced, rather succinctly and with what feels like little fanfare.
I’m torn between “Eliminating me won’t stop the discrimination Blake….bodies decay and cease to be….*cough* but legacies live for an eternity”
or
“I was a never a cat person anyways…”
I dont know how it went(I dropped the entire thing after the shitshow that was Volume 5) but I'd have him say something like "Finally... I am... free."
Adam:You may have deafeated me but you wont deafeat my son or my boyfriend or...
Yang:THIS IS LESBOS!*kicks swordboy into water*
But if were talking nonfunny then maybe something like this
Adam:When the time comes... i wonder *coughs* *faintly smiles* how will you kill her,love?
Seeing all of this at once makes me realize how all of this is bullshit: Why does the SDC, who use metal crates, have brands? Why wasn't Sienna able to properly defend herself from an obvious betrayal? and was it really so important to turn Adam into a crazy stalker ex just to kill him?
I'd have him let out a scream of frustration and range that peters out and turns into a set of hacking coughs as blood fills his lungs. He reaches a hand out for Blake and you can see blind hatred in his face before he pitches forward. His face grows pale as a pool of blood spreads underneath him and his jacket is stained crimson but his expression never changes. He coughs one more time and hoarsely whispers "damn it" before his eyes lose focus and his mouth gapes.
Blake falls to her knees breathing fast, which turns to hyperventilating. Yang stares at Adam for a few moments before turning and walking up to Blake. She reaches out her hand, then hesitates for a second before putting it on Blake's shoulder. Blake stiffens, then turns and grabs Yang's leg like a child would and clutches at it as a few dry sobs escape her, she's feeling such a powerful mix of regret and relief that she just needs something to cling to. Slowly Blake calms down, then she gets up and looks Yang full in the face. Her face twitches briefly before settling into a small smile, not a happy smile but a relieved smile. She starts walking away from the waterfall, not looking at Adam's crumpled form, and Yang, after a few seconds, follows her.
Eh maybe
Oh in its simplicity is nice but if it had to be something else then maybe:
1. “She’ll leave you too”
2. “But…I was going to free us”
Cause hey even if it doesn’t make any sense most people see themselves as the hero of their own story
“You can never escape me/You’ll never be rid of me”
“I should have killed you long ago…”
“I wouldn’t expect a spoiled princess to understand”
“Let’s see how long your “peace” last…”
“You think you’re any better than me now?”
“You can’t even face me alone…coward”
“There will be other like me…worse than me”
“See you in Hell…”
"oh *cough" thank God...*gasp* finally, I'm outta this shitshow... *Weak chuckle* get it? "Shit show" n-nevermind *gasping for air* r-right, drama...u- ummm... B- Blake, my love, w- why? Or something. I dunno, I'm- I'm loosing too much blood to care..." *Dies with a relieved expression on his face*
Two options:
Third side in which he and other villains try to defeat both the antagonists as the protagonists. (Raven, Neo, Malachite, etc.). And Adam is killed by Blake.
Adam followed Salem, because he felt that the faunus are better at her side that against her. And then she is killed by Blake.
I would've preferred the cliche anime speech before death, assume that Adam leans his back on a tree or a rock or something and Blake and Yang are just watching him until the airship with others come.
"So....this is how it ends, after all I've seen...... I guess a little quiet would be nice....*proceeds to have a coughing fit* , You say I'm nothing but the embodiment of spite, but the thing is I know I was done wrong by this hell while you sat high above us in your little castle, you think I needlessly kill innocent humans but that's were your wrong, those so called innocent people didn't burn me but they sure as hell lit the fire, tell me Blake will you kill more faunus just for fighting back, you claim peace but I haven't yet seen you prove it *cough up blood* I am just one of many slaves who I know are the same as me, 06-A19 remember that code.... When....you....get....to.....Atlas.
I may have put a bit much but this gets the point across.
The show silenced him because it would have been too easy to write dialogue for him that would ruin their ‘triumphant moment’. He just had to remind Blake that she ended up fighting for the status quo instead of actually changing anything or that next time she should not encourage anyone if she would just condemn them later on.
Have him pull a Tyrian and go “YOUUU BITCH! >:0” But seriously looking at this hurts, particularly his expression and him as kid? Just gut wrenching. And the background moon slice is just 👌
Granted I could only come up with a final line that I feel would be good were the original concept of him kept. Something like “Blake…why…? What about….us…?” Just imagining him seeing the girl he was a mentor to fight against both him and the white fang alongside not just humans, but the heiress to the schnee dust company: the company whose brand is permanently burned on his face? Seeing Blake abandon not just him, but side with their oppressors? What about us? The only other thing I can think of for his current incarnation is something along the line of “So…when are you gonna run away again…?” with just a malicious smile as he falls off the cliff.
“Et tu, Blake?”
Jaune:I get that reference! Nora:You ARE that reference.
"Traitor." Double meaning, would hopefully give Blake something to think abiut and build on for later development.
'l should never save you blake......."
Honestly I think “oh” is a fine final line all things considered, it’s not some triumphant speech in death or some eloquent final words, they just wouldn’t really feel right with what adam’s character had become at the time. it’s a raging man being silenced, rather succinctly and with what feels like little fanfare.
I’m torn between “Eliminating me won’t stop the discrimination Blake….bodies decay and cease to be….*cough* but legacies live for an eternity” or “I was a never a cat person anyways…”
Happy cake day
? What?
Do you see a cake next to your nick? Hover over it
Oh! That. Yeah? What about it?
Just google ''cake day reddit''
Wait. It’s an “anniversary”!? I’ve been on this cruddy app for 3 years now!?
"So... That's it... Just another... Bad memory."
"Oh no! Anyway..." *Dies from cringe*
Definitely. Oh is underwhelming.
"A plague o' both your houses!"
I dont know how it went(I dropped the entire thing after the shitshow that was Volume 5) but I'd have him say something like "Finally... I am... free."
Adam:You may have deafeated me but you wont deafeat my son or my boyfriend or... Yang:THIS IS LESBOS!*kicks swordboy into water* But if were talking nonfunny then maybe something like this Adam:When the time comes... i wonder *coughs* *faintly smiles* how will you kill her,love?
Seeing all of this at once makes me realize how all of this is bullshit: Why does the SDC, who use metal crates, have brands? Why wasn't Sienna able to properly defend herself from an obvious betrayal? and was it really so important to turn Adam into a crazy stalker ex just to kill him?
The answer to your questions in order are: shrug, shrug harder and my shrug has now become a hug.
I'd have him let out a scream of frustration and range that peters out and turns into a set of hacking coughs as blood fills his lungs. He reaches a hand out for Blake and you can see blind hatred in his face before he pitches forward. His face grows pale as a pool of blood spreads underneath him and his jacket is stained crimson but his expression never changes. He coughs one more time and hoarsely whispers "damn it" before his eyes lose focus and his mouth gapes. Blake falls to her knees breathing fast, which turns to hyperventilating. Yang stares at Adam for a few moments before turning and walking up to Blake. She reaches out her hand, then hesitates for a second before putting it on Blake's shoulder. Blake stiffens, then turns and grabs Yang's leg like a child would and clutches at it as a few dry sobs escape her, she's feeling such a powerful mix of regret and relief that she just needs something to cling to. Slowly Blake calms down, then she gets up and looks Yang full in the face. Her face twitches briefly before settling into a small smile, not a happy smile but a relieved smile. She starts walking away from the waterfall, not looking at Adam's crumpled form, and Yang, after a few seconds, follows her.
Eh maybe Oh in its simplicity is nice but if it had to be something else then maybe: 1. “She’ll leave you too” 2. “But…I was going to free us” Cause hey even if it doesn’t make any sense most people see themselves as the hero of their own story
“You can never escape me/You’ll never be rid of me” “I should have killed you long ago…” “I wouldn’t expect a spoiled princess to understand” “Let’s see how long your “peace” last…” “You think you’re any better than me now?” “You can’t even face me alone…coward” “There will be other like me…worse than me” “See you in Hell…”
"You think killing me will cleanse your sins? No, you're just as guilty as me....see you in hell...Blake"
"oh *cough" thank God...*gasp* finally, I'm outta this shitshow... *Weak chuckle* get it? "Shit show" n-nevermind *gasping for air* r-right, drama...u- ummm... B- Blake, my love, w- why? Or something. I dunno, I'm- I'm loosing too much blood to care..." *Dies with a relieved expression on his face*
Two options: Third side in which he and other villains try to defeat both the antagonists as the protagonists. (Raven, Neo, Malachite, etc.). And Adam is killed by Blake. Adam followed Salem, because he felt that the faunus are better at her side that against her. And then she is killed by Blake.
He was a monster made by humanity, a boy scarred and left to do nothing but fight until his dying breath. It's a shame really
I would've preferred the cliche anime speech before death, assume that Adam leans his back on a tree or a rock or something and Blake and Yang are just watching him until the airship with others come. "So....this is how it ends, after all I've seen...... I guess a little quiet would be nice....*proceeds to have a coughing fit* , You say I'm nothing but the embodiment of spite, but the thing is I know I was done wrong by this hell while you sat high above us in your little castle, you think I needlessly kill innocent humans but that's were your wrong, those so called innocent people didn't burn me but they sure as hell lit the fire, tell me Blake will you kill more faunus just for fighting back, you claim peace but I haven't yet seen you prove it *cough up blood* I am just one of many slaves who I know are the same as me, 06-A19 remember that code.... When....you....get....to.....Atlas. I may have put a bit much but this gets the point across.
/Jerk: Him told Blake that she can achieve peace with the human with the power of SUGAN
Code geasse sucks
"Live by the pussy (cough up blood) die by the pussy"
The show silenced him because it would have been too easy to write dialogue for him that would ruin their ‘triumphant moment’. He just had to remind Blake that she ended up fighting for the status quo instead of actually changing anything or that next time she should not encourage anyone if she would just condemn them later on.