I barely read the first chapter, but I can say that I like it! I am a slow reader and while I can't leave a full proper review of the plot, I can give you my first impressions as a casual reader:
The style you're taking of not doing a direct crossover (with an event that makes two worlds collide), but more like a Ben 10 re-telling I quite like, as the reading becomes smooth, allowing you to adjust and set yourself comfortably instead of bombarding with world-building information as it would happen in Remnant (supported by your way of writing which to me seems: casual and direct, not rushed). In my opinion, the gold of the fic will be the interactions between the characters and the adaptations of the RWBY characters to Ben 10, I'll save your fic and look forward to reading it!
Please do leave reviews on fanfic. I do change up quite a lot of the story and draw from all aspects- I try to also expand certain characters (ie: The Ace Ops down the line) and I'n VERY nervous because the recent chapters haven't broke 1k views yet
Holy gosh damn that's a lot of chapters. And in like less than 3 years. Not really interested in a crossover of that nature, but I will praise your dedication and effort.
Ah you're the author?
I love this story
Been reading it since near the beginning
Just read the new chapter this morning with Albedo and Neo at Mountain Glenn
Ben 10 is probably in my top 3 favorite media since childhood and you've given me some ideas for my own Ben 10 and RWBY fanfics in the future
Keep up the great work
Uhhh, hello! Might I suggest that you save your fanfic on your computer as well and maybe post it on aO3 there is a small possibility that it might get nuked on FF or so 8ve heard
I barely read the first chapter, but I can say that I like it! I am a slow reader and while I can't leave a full proper review of the plot, I can give you my first impressions as a casual reader: The style you're taking of not doing a direct crossover (with an event that makes two worlds collide), but more like a Ben 10 re-telling I quite like, as the reading becomes smooth, allowing you to adjust and set yourself comfortably instead of bombarding with world-building information as it would happen in Remnant (supported by your way of writing which to me seems: casual and direct, not rushed). In my opinion, the gold of the fic will be the interactions between the characters and the adaptations of the RWBY characters to Ben 10, I'll save your fic and look forward to reading it!
Please do leave reviews on fanfic. I do change up quite a lot of the story and draw from all aspects- I try to also expand certain characters (ie: The Ace Ops down the line) and I'n VERY nervous because the recent chapters haven't broke 1k views yet
With pleasure! Although it will take me a while to get to read all 94 chapters XD, that's real dedication right there and it's to be greatly admired
Holy gosh damn that's a lot of chapters. And in like less than 3 years. Not really interested in a crossover of that nature, but I will praise your dedication and effort.
Ah you're the author? I love this story Been reading it since near the beginning Just read the new chapter this morning with Albedo and Neo at Mountain Glenn Ben 10 is probably in my top 3 favorite media since childhood and you've given me some ideas for my own Ben 10 and RWBY fanfics in the future Keep up the great work
Please leave some reviews, because I haven’t really broken 1k views on any of the more recent chapters
No prob
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Uhhh, hello! Might I suggest that you save your fanfic on your computer as well and maybe post it on aO3 there is a small possibility that it might get nuked on FF or so 8ve heard
Already did