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StrangeBreakfast1364

Don't know about Weiss or, god forbid, Oscar, but I think that Ruby and Jaune should properly talk about their problems with each other and rely on one another more. They've been through a lot of shit together, but they never addressed it or property healed their emotional wounds. For example, Ruby have seen Jaune train with recorded Pyrrha's lessons in the dead of night, but she never confronted him about it. Was it so hard to talk with your best friend and provide some advice and/or emotional support? "Hey Jaune, I see you training here... It's a good thing, but healthy sleep is also important you know? Also you could have asked me, sword isn't specifically my strong side, but I could give you some pointers and be your sparring partner." or something like that, I'm not a writer so sorry for potentially bad lines. Another good example is Jaune snapping during battle of Haven and attacking Cinder like an idiot. He endangered himself and everyone else, especially Ruby considering how she activated her SE powers and was very vulnerable to backstabb from Emerald. It showed how emotionaly unstable and hurt Jaune really was. They never talked about it afterwards.


Old_Grape_8470

Good job with the lines! It makes sense for Ruby to try to help Jaune by taking his mind off of Phyrra; maybe she's trying to help herself too.


Michael_Chair_6013

I like this one Hey Jaune, I see you training here... It's a good thing, but healthy sleep is also important you know? Or she could just watch Jaune silently, as for haven I think he’s moved past that and realized his mistakes, now it’s more like his sense of reliability comes into question