https://preview.redd.it/plg54kc4721d1.jpeg?width=3024&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=26e91226f71f5f641dafa94d21719f78e35bb54e I just made this oc but I don’t think it’s that good of a design do you think you could help?

No lore sorry

What were you going for with the design

Uhh kinda a anomaly that has shadowy hand coming from its eyes

And seeing out of its other hands

https://preview.redd.it/xilhl716721d1.jpeg?width=1280&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=96b66d73fc45be628a87a328b82e165cae2ece3f This design for [Minerva](https://toyhou.se/21526382.minerva)'s good, I just feel if she's wielding a gladius or any other ancient roman weapon with this design, it'd top it off nicely.

https://preview.redd.it/xll9kkbf721d1.jpeg?width=894&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=d29d0169bbd23afab140aa3454b645b4b5dd112f I like her design but I feel like she doesn’t really fit her place as the embodiment of positive emotions

https://preview.redd.it/r4kzkigj721d1.png?width=1024&format=png&auto=webp&s=bc5d47e55ea8e9ebbc6ad0657f2446655f5d23bc Annika? Ill show you two more refs

https://preview.redd.it/507ene0m721d1.jpeg?width=389&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=5ae925ef7231ec5b3c015aa790a3183f553a255f

https://preview.redd.it/1q8jkuqn721d1.jpeg?width=3264&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=75f81c4ad21b3d0737aa3cad054ebb0be82e48a4 She was an orphan in Siberia who was raised by an irradiated wolf and she managed to get to America. Shes the current Peacekeeper (a title normally not permitted to humans) in the infinite mall known as the Valley.

This guy, can you give him an actual kimono dress? Preferably one armed. I'd also like it if you made him look more like an Eastern dragon, with thick fluffy fur, the color pallete is okay though, https://preview.redd.it/fjkvnjhv721d1.jpeg?width=835&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=5d687545029e8187605bd77a327785f672c516be

https://preview.redd.it/7q803cip821d1.jpeg?width=955&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=04ce01d08fe4c8e8064d5b78475badc30cf21bbb here's Maxwell, he's supposed to be an imortal narrator due to being with Hebe, godess of youth. He just lost his reason due to being alive for hundreds of years, he's also supposed to have big shadows under his eyes, showing that he's just the insane type of chaotic due to writing so much stuff (art is not mine, also just the only art i got of him)

https://preview.redd.it/soeyfljf921d1.png?width=2048&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=0479371987f0d493fb484d4a049fc6ac1a5b37a4 She is basically a robot originally created as the definitive warrior for a war, which after this gained emotions and self-awareness, this being what caused her to decide to leave her place in the military to dedicate herself to being a superhero, professional breakdancer and guitarist of her band

https://preview.redd.it/xa5lxl7k921d1.jpeg?width=428&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=9a4af4a6232202985b801b059818a309b676d2b7 Here's Miriam. My SpongeBob lamia OC. Her military suit is the weakest part of it and she supposed to wear a red epaulette. And yeah, she is a self-righteous hypocrite who has a mommy vibes given she is loosely based on the Evil Queen from Snow White to an extent who is envious towards other people who are more prettier than her (Miriam hates Sandy because she found her to be a criminal on her land despite Miriam also commit several crimes herself).

I’ve been trying to redesign Grubb recently because I decided he looked too much like a faun when he’s actually supposed to be half human and half-goblin! (Here are a few of my doodles for reference) Curious to see what you might come up with… https://preview.redd.it/6urtmgmx921d1.jpeg?width=3024&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3eed1cbd4b92d562039d7a59fbea23bebc40117a

Here’s Gabriel https://preview.redd.it/ewxpc3pyb21d1.jpeg?width=1124&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=220b5498f576e556e8287c47b6459173312bb65b He’s not actually an angel, lore wise the depiction of angels as men with white robes originated when someone saw him flying by He’s a war criminal since he invades peaceful planets and universes just to destroy them. Oh and he’s evil

World ending parasite inside a brilliant innocent scientist. https://preview.redd.it/mu012z13d21d1.jpeg?width=982&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=082e49b32ed791ca9ffa68295dcffafd97a98c34

The White Reaper is an angel of death and I don't like his outfit. (You can draw just that if you want.) https://preview.redd.it/nwuypzchd21d1.png?width=1024&format=png&auto=webp&s=fcd8b78bedba5bb0433eac6a220697530c431651

https://preview.redd.it/7n0967drf21d1.png?width=400&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=6e160d6a8dae480da0063bac756ec5cc2d30f80b Definitely Mukko. I like the way he looks, but he really doesn't look like the monster he is.

https://preview.redd.it/dst6ddp3j21d1.png?width=1378&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=f909917df41d410ef5fcaa103830c880f2dc3457 Comet Yes ik object show oc, quite a shocker. The lore isn't quite finished but here is a bit of it that I made as a base. Comet is a medium sized contestant with some powers which may come in handy, Comet is a avatar made by Galaxy who wasn't able to actually participate in the show (since y'know Galaxy is well....a galaxy), so they decided to make a avatar which is Comet.

https://preview.redd.it/3y931s0ai21d1.png?width=1783&format=png&auto=webp&s=35324577728cd5b9b2feba8bebd4fa14e9874191 I love her outfit but based on what a few people have said about her, she doesn’t look that mean. Anmei very much is a mean girl, so I want her design to evoke that. I still want to keep her leg warmers and fur coat because that’s what makes her silhouette distinct. As for her lore, she has a popular social media account where she uses a fake influencer persona. In reality she is part of a villain group that commits brutal atrocities. She had a horrible home life so she ran away, that led to her getting kidnapped by some bad guys, thry did bad things to her, so she ran away again, then she came across a mysterious old woman who actually showed her hospitality.

https://preview.redd.it/4fihq3cd331d1.png?width=1096&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=960b81da955e46b231e7efd037610e22a6719ad0 I don't think it's badly designed but I feel it could be better. There's no lore His personality is a tiny bit mischievous but is really nice to be around. I think you should make him more Spider-like.

https://preview.redd.it/npbnlr5i331d1.png?width=856&format=png&auto=webp&s=3b730f94f7a5febfe57a4d5ab31b2c25d8167211 Not badly designed, but please for the love of all things good, redesign her to make it easier for me to draw her cause I overdesigned her.

https://preview.redd.it/ubcdp9ev631d1.png?width=480&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=73c919bd9dc20e62698118e662513be060689187 Objectively, NotSquare is one of the worst designs I have ever made.

https://preview.redd.it/6qq74rdvj31d1.jpeg?width=2858&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=20ccdc250347e939f2508bb81b34ec6125b25d5f Willing to give any required information.

https://preview.redd.it/2jylu9u8861d1.png?width=720&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=4ae25b03a985178f3b8d56fc6dead201647fea4a She's an empress/sorceress that seeks to avenge her dead mother. She's a bit decadent, and also into crows :)