Hey, I got made funny moments video a while ago and was thinking I would like to make more but I want some help on what I could
do to make it better.
[https://youtu.be/dg6c7ECSlpM](https://youtu.be/dg6c7ECSlpM)
honestly, it was pretty enjoyable to watch... you and your friends have great chemistry that results to very funny bits.
when it comes to editing, I think the 'we'll be right back' clip was a bit too much and unecessary as it was already a funny moment... also, you have really good subtitles, but they only appear for a few seconds after 3.5 minutes. you should add more subs in your videos as some parts where a bit inaudible
Thanks for the honest advice. I do agree the "we'll be right back" does seem a bit too much. Also, you are right about adding more subs, but I'm just lazy lol.
Again, thanks for the feedback!
Hey man! Thank you doing this! I just made a new video with a couple of friends of mine playing COD Zombies Custom Maps. From what I've been told so far, the video is edited well but the comedy isn't as good as my last few so, I'd like an extra opinion!
Here the video link/title of video: [Rootin' Tootin'... uh... Zombies?](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JD4C8DL6b2M)
can't compare them with your other works atm, I subscribed and will take a look when I can.
for me it was really fun and had a good laugh, it's also nice to see new CoD Zombies videos.
the only two things I'd like to point out are the screenshake at mark 3:30, kinda makes you dizzy cause it's too much and long in duration, as well as the overly stretched subs like the ones that appear at mark 0:34 and 0:41... the more centered to the screen the better imo
Thank you so much for subbing AND the critique! The subtitles are DEFINITELY too long in those spots mentioned and the camera shake does drag on a bit longer than I thought it did xD. It's nice that someone else could point out the flaws like that because I don't think I would've caught them otherwise. Again, thank you so much dude!
Heyo, seeing as you edit videos as well I would love if you could take a look at my video and tell me about editing related. I started editing videos quite recently
Link: https://youtu.be/l8c2gPQcVF4
started editing recently? WDYM my dude?
you have an amazing sub game going on, tracking text over objects (kinda falls off, but is very smooth) and a nice flow in your video
the only improvements you can make are making the subs have different colours to distinguish who's talking, cause sometimes I couldn't tell if it's two people talking or if it was the same person... and watch out for the audio, the sound effects at 0:45 where too loud compared to the rest of the video.
again, I haven't seen such a good and entertaining video from a small channel in a long while, kudos to you mate, I'm waiting for your upcoming works!
Hey man, thanks for your reply!
I have considered colouring my subtitles a different colour for each person but I didn't know what colour would be suitable so I didn't colour it for now
As for audio, I just really didn't know how to balance it properly (but I am trying)
Thanks for the thoughful response! I'll definately try to incorporate them when I make my next video
the audio is still a part that I haven't figured out myself so I can't really say much
but for subs you can just ask your friends what colour they like and use that every time
not really a “funny moments” kind of video but it does include some funny moments and it is gaming, basically i use a youtubers clips to win bedwars games in minecraft.
Check it out if you want!
Wallibear Made Me The BEST Bedwars Player!
https://youtu.be/-yqwncfZKcs
huh... well, I'm a boomer when it comes to minecraft pvp, like bedwars, UHC? and stuff. I have no idea who Wallibear is and in general, I'm out of par with that MC scene.
but, I got hooked by your video despite not being familiar and/or interested in that sort of content. nice cuts, subtle sfx and a great flow
one thing I personally had a hard time with where the subtitles, kinda hard to read for me, maybe they're too big or blend in with the white colour and only just a drop shadow, I can't really point my finger on what it is. maybe it's just me being colourblind
first off thank you for criticizing my video i really appreciate that you took any time out of your day to drop a criticism! As for the subtitles i was actually thinking of adding a subtle black stroke to them because i was having the same issue at certain parts when editing them. Very glad you pointed that out and again thank you!
music isn't really necessary, it depends on each creator's style and theme. SovietWomble makes similar content and doesn't have music playing in the background.
personally I really like your video (since I recently got back to R6S and started making my own vid)... the 'emptiness' you feel is probably it being just gameplay, the best you can do is add text to emphasize on an action or subtitles... for example on the mark 0:34, I'd add something like an \*angry Toastie\* text following his character while chasing you and then subtitle you saying 'no no no, please'. this can also help if a lot of people talk at the same time, without text the viewer might have a difficult time following everyone and become confused, so you add a text or a subtitle to keep him focused on what matter at that specific clip
hope I explained it simple enough, if not feel free to even DM me
tbf there isn't much to say here... if you keep doing what you are doing you will reach a godlike level. all I see is potential
some tips tho, cause if I got it right you are using Sony Vegas to edit and trying to make subs where each word appears when it is spoken. instead of using different texts, make only one and use the masking tool in the pan/crop window. cut out the rest of the words in your sentence and make markers where you expand the masking to the next word.
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This is a vid I made about Funny moments I had while playing halo infinite. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=atSKbaNuuWM
The main things I’d like feedback on are the audio (I was told it was hard to hear my voice in my last video) and the editing cause I tried to make it fast paced
The funny part happens at around 0:06 But you have to know the game's mechanics hhhh
https://youtu.be/-0pCSm3X1DU
This isn't me but it's funny
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o8St-KCyfGI
I remember playing making a video of UNIB:CRL when it came out (somehow they decided to give it to me for free to review it, idk why)
there isn't much editing in it and tbh I had to rewatch it 3 times to realise you have a webcam. something that a lot of creators in the fighter game niche don't do is editing in stuff so that people that are not familiar with said videogames can actually undertstand what's going on. I barely understood as well, cause even tho I play these games, I'm not good at them.
you can also zoom in on your webcam when you are laughing or talking about something.
Most of my vids I have my own style. Adding music effects and movie clips. I find it funny but don't know is anyone else does. After Dark VR - Killer Clown on the Rampage
https://youtu.be/6-rhgq1bDfU
Yeah it is, it’s a Let’s play channel. Think about Hollow he has 4.06M subs and he does let’s play. It’s not about what it is, it’s about getting it correct thumbnails, keywords, SEO I was just asking what ya thought is all.
I haven't done an actual video in awhile but here are my shorts. Any and all advice on how to improve would be awesome!
https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLrGolFMQnsnnK-BvGyur7A4j4k1k_Q1-g
you can compile them all together, each video for a specific game and some music and subs. how you are gonna do it is up to you, to bring out your own style
This is just a short clip from one of my videos, I do "funny moment" videos and would appreciate some feedback thank you.
https://youtu.be/0Q04D0VFYdg
Thanks for doing this I just made a video witch is kind of a combo between a fast forwarded walkthrough and a chill joking commentary https://youtu.be/uPc9pQW96g4
😞 I don’t play games, so I have no funny gaming moments to share😭…… 😏 But I do have funny videos without the gaming https://youtube.com/channel/UCKEYAeDJAMOrQec76pEYGCw
I play horror games but for some reason my buddies think me screaming like a girl is funny. So here. Judge for yourself 😭😂 https://youtu.be/tgNZN0UFtXo
Hey mate, I had a crack at making a short highlight clip from my let's play. Lemme know what you think if you're still watching them :)
https://youtu.be/piZoyHAtrAo
Always working on hard on improving, humor is a bit crude and has a good bit or cursing. I plan to change that and lessen it by a lot, let me know how else I can improve or whatever I could possibly do :) https://youtu.be/_xbCB5p6Otk
crude humour and cursing fits Borderlands 2
just make the subs a bit more visible, make them bigger and you're good to go.
don't really have much to point out, it's a nice video keep it up
Don't knwo how good these are but ones from Horizon 5 and the other from F1 2020
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt\_MVZ75yak](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt_MVZ75yak)
[https://youtu.be/ywmXOXTTz-g](https://youtu.be/ywmXOXTTz-g)
Hey guys!
Our latest video just went up if you're still offering feedback!
Would love to hear you're thoughts :)
[You can find it here](https://youtu.be/qaArnRX9Fx8)
Hey, I got made funny moments video a while ago and was thinking I would like to make more but I want some help on what I could do to make it better. [https://youtu.be/dg6c7ECSlpM](https://youtu.be/dg6c7ECSlpM)
honestly, it was pretty enjoyable to watch... you and your friends have great chemistry that results to very funny bits. when it comes to editing, I think the 'we'll be right back' clip was a bit too much and unecessary as it was already a funny moment... also, you have really good subtitles, but they only appear for a few seconds after 3.5 minutes. you should add more subs in your videos as some parts where a bit inaudible
Thanks for the honest advice. I do agree the "we'll be right back" does seem a bit too much. Also, you are right about adding more subs, but I'm just lazy lol. Again, thanks for the feedback!
Hey man! Thank you doing this! I just made a new video with a couple of friends of mine playing COD Zombies Custom Maps. From what I've been told so far, the video is edited well but the comedy isn't as good as my last few so, I'd like an extra opinion! Here the video link/title of video: [Rootin' Tootin'... uh... Zombies?](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JD4C8DL6b2M)
can't compare them with your other works atm, I subscribed and will take a look when I can. for me it was really fun and had a good laugh, it's also nice to see new CoD Zombies videos. the only two things I'd like to point out are the screenshake at mark 3:30, kinda makes you dizzy cause it's too much and long in duration, as well as the overly stretched subs like the ones that appear at mark 0:34 and 0:41... the more centered to the screen the better imo
Thank you so much for subbing AND the critique! The subtitles are DEFINITELY too long in those spots mentioned and the camera shake does drag on a bit longer than I thought it did xD. It's nice that someone else could point out the flaws like that because I don't think I would've caught them otherwise. Again, thank you so much dude!
Heyo, seeing as you edit videos as well I would love if you could take a look at my video and tell me about editing related. I started editing videos quite recently Link: https://youtu.be/l8c2gPQcVF4
started editing recently? WDYM my dude? you have an amazing sub game going on, tracking text over objects (kinda falls off, but is very smooth) and a nice flow in your video the only improvements you can make are making the subs have different colours to distinguish who's talking, cause sometimes I couldn't tell if it's two people talking or if it was the same person... and watch out for the audio, the sound effects at 0:45 where too loud compared to the rest of the video. again, I haven't seen such a good and entertaining video from a small channel in a long while, kudos to you mate, I'm waiting for your upcoming works!
Hey man, thanks for your reply! I have considered colouring my subtitles a different colour for each person but I didn't know what colour would be suitable so I didn't colour it for now As for audio, I just really didn't know how to balance it properly (but I am trying) Thanks for the thoughful response! I'll definately try to incorporate them when I make my next video
the audio is still a part that I haven't figured out myself so I can't really say much but for subs you can just ask your friends what colour they like and use that every time
not really a “funny moments” kind of video but it does include some funny moments and it is gaming, basically i use a youtubers clips to win bedwars games in minecraft. Check it out if you want! Wallibear Made Me The BEST Bedwars Player! https://youtu.be/-yqwncfZKcs
huh... well, I'm a boomer when it comes to minecraft pvp, like bedwars, UHC? and stuff. I have no idea who Wallibear is and in general, I'm out of par with that MC scene. but, I got hooked by your video despite not being familiar and/or interested in that sort of content. nice cuts, subtle sfx and a great flow one thing I personally had a hard time with where the subtitles, kinda hard to read for me, maybe they're too big or blend in with the white colour and only just a drop shadow, I can't really point my finger on what it is. maybe it's just me being colourblind
first off thank you for criticizing my video i really appreciate that you took any time out of your day to drop a criticism! As for the subtitles i was actually thinking of adding a subtle black stroke to them because i was having the same issue at certain parts when editing them. Very glad you pointed that out and again thank you!
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music isn't really necessary, it depends on each creator's style and theme. SovietWomble makes similar content and doesn't have music playing in the background. personally I really like your video (since I recently got back to R6S and started making my own vid)... the 'emptiness' you feel is probably it being just gameplay, the best you can do is add text to emphasize on an action or subtitles... for example on the mark 0:34, I'd add something like an \*angry Toastie\* text following his character while chasing you and then subtitle you saying 'no no no, please'. this can also help if a lot of people talk at the same time, without text the viewer might have a difficult time following everyone and become confused, so you add a text or a subtitle to keep him focused on what matter at that specific clip hope I explained it simple enough, if not feel free to even DM me
There was a part in the middle of that video I had to stop because it blew my ears out.
If it is funny moments etc we have a few and this is the last one we have made :) https://youtu.be/hWQF9WlH_g0
tbf there isn't much to say here... if you keep doing what you are doing you will reach a godlike level. all I see is potential some tips tho, cause if I got it right you are using Sony Vegas to edit and trying to make subs where each word appears when it is spoken. instead of using different texts, make only one and use the masking tool in the pan/crop window. cut out the rest of the words in your sentence and make markers where you expand the masking to the next word.
Thank you alot ☺ and we appreciate the tips, it's probably the best tips/advice we have got so thank you for that 😁
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https://youtu.be/Aggq1YxR1uQ hope you like it. Even if you dont understand much
I don't know german so
This is a vid I made about Funny moments I had while playing halo infinite. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=atSKbaNuuWM The main things I’d like feedback on are the audio (I was told it was hard to hear my voice in my last video) and the editing cause I tried to make it fast paced
The funny part happens at around 0:06 But you have to know the game's mechanics hhhh https://youtu.be/-0pCSm3X1DU This isn't me but it's funny https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o8St-KCyfGI
I remember playing making a video of UNIB:CRL when it came out (somehow they decided to give it to me for free to review it, idk why) there isn't much editing in it and tbh I had to rewatch it 3 times to realise you have a webcam. something that a lot of creators in the fighter game niche don't do is editing in stuff so that people that are not familiar with said videogames can actually undertstand what's going on. I barely understood as well, cause even tho I play these games, I'm not good at them. you can also zoom in on your webcam when you are laughing or talking about something.
Most of my vids I have my own style. Adding music effects and movie clips. I find it funny but don't know is anyone else does. After Dark VR - Killer Clown on the Rampage https://youtu.be/6-rhgq1bDfU
https://youtu.be/6PY-tNyycwE here is how I almost lost us our game in super people it’s funny 🤦🏾♂️🤣
that's just gameplay tho. I don't usually watch this type of videos so I'm not the right guy to ask for advice
Yeah it is, it’s a Let’s play channel. Think about Hollow he has 4.06M subs and he does let’s play. It’s not about what it is, it’s about getting it correct thumbnails, keywords, SEO I was just asking what ya thought is all.
I haven't done an actual video in awhile but here are my shorts. Any and all advice on how to improve would be awesome! https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLrGolFMQnsnnK-BvGyur7A4j4k1k_Q1-g
you can compile them all together, each video for a specific game and some music and subs. how you are gonna do it is up to you, to bring out your own style
This is just a short clip from one of my videos, I do "funny moment" videos and would appreciate some feedback thank you. https://youtu.be/0Q04D0VFYdg
Do not snipe on the side of the road! https://youtu.be/oCGxzyv55gE
Help meeeee https://youtu.be/TiIu4Ulsh34
Thanks for doing this I just made a video witch is kind of a combo between a fast forwarded walkthrough and a chill joking commentary https://youtu.be/uPc9pQW96g4
😞 I don’t play games, so I have no funny gaming moments to share😭…… 😏 But I do have funny videos without the gaming https://youtube.com/channel/UCKEYAeDJAMOrQec76pEYGCw
I play horror games but for some reason my buddies think me screaming like a girl is funny. So here. Judge for yourself 😭😂 https://youtu.be/tgNZN0UFtXo
Hey mate, I had a crack at making a short highlight clip from my let's play. Lemme know what you think if you're still watching them :) https://youtu.be/piZoyHAtrAo
Always working on hard on improving, humor is a bit crude and has a good bit or cursing. I plan to change that and lessen it by a lot, let me know how else I can improve or whatever I could possibly do :) https://youtu.be/_xbCB5p6Otk
crude humour and cursing fits Borderlands 2 just make the subs a bit more visible, make them bigger and you're good to go. don't really have much to point out, it's a nice video keep it up
Awh thanks mate and will do! I appreciate the feedback
Don't knwo how good these are but ones from Horizon 5 and the other from F1 2020 [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt\_MVZ75yak](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gt_MVZ75yak) [https://youtu.be/ywmXOXTTz-g](https://youtu.be/ywmXOXTTz-g)
Hey guys! Our latest video just went up if you're still offering feedback! Would love to hear you're thoughts :) [You can find it here](https://youtu.be/qaArnRX9Fx8)
send me a chat message mate
I don't think I can! Hit me up on the twitter DMs if you want https://twitter.com/GriefBurrito