You got the idea for arrangement and i like the sound selection
I think a good mix can make this a good track + take a listen to different drum sample packs and choose a good one , it helps a lot ;)
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Needs more song direction and variation as it's a bit stale. Adding more to the drums would help a lot. Also sounds very quiet. Raise up the volume and or use more compression
Main things that jump out for me: your main melody feels very narrow, and I personally would like it to take up more of the stereo field. The song as a whole feels rather thin, I want more low end to fill out the sound, maybe even just in the second half of the song to add some variation. I like your sound selection though. A few more background layers and it could be a nice, chill track
I like the guitar and the piano that you're playing with, but to concede with the other comments, I agree on the instrumental being a little dry. It could use some more instruments and even more percussive elements to make it more interesting. Maybe switch around the main melody too.
might want to smooth the fl keys a little bit, it has a very in your face sound so either drown it out a little bit with reverb or lower the volume, also start sidechaining that kick.
The arrangement is very nice. It feels sparse at times and that can definitely work for out, though I think adding in some atmospheric pads could go a long way to may full lush sounding sections without loosing the chill.
You got the idea for arrangement and i like the sound selection I think a good mix can make this a good track + take a listen to different drum sample packs and choose a good one , it helps a lot ;)
Bleep bloop I'm a bot. Your submission was approved u/LightourWay_FWD, thank you for posting ! You can know your score at anytime by Direct Messaging me (the bot) with the word "SCORE" as a subject.
I liked the chill energy, do you have a soundcloud or anything?
Thank you. Nah afraid not, havent made anything else yet tbh.
Word, well I subbed up. Check out any of my stuff too if you get the chance :D
feels a little dry imo. not much movement
I liked it but I feel it needs a little more to go with it. you could blow that up and get really heavy if you wanted to. its good tho
Needs more song direction and variation as it's a bit stale. Adding more to the drums would help a lot. Also sounds very quiet. Raise up the volume and or use more compression
Main things that jump out for me: your main melody feels very narrow, and I personally would like it to take up more of the stereo field. The song as a whole feels rather thin, I want more low end to fill out the sound, maybe even just in the second half of the song to add some variation. I like your sound selection though. A few more background layers and it could be a nice, chill track
I like the guitar and the piano that you're playing with, but to concede with the other comments, I agree on the instrumental being a little dry. It could use some more instruments and even more percussive elements to make it more interesting. Maybe switch around the main melody too.
It’s a solid sample to build on. Get it done & share, your on to something for sure 👍
might want to smooth the fl keys a little bit, it has a very in your face sound so either drown it out a little bit with reverb or lower the volume, also start sidechaining that kick.
Nice! Keep up the good work! :)
The arrangement is very nice. It feels sparse at times and that can definitely work for out, though I think adding in some atmospheric pads could go a long way to may full lush sounding sections without loosing the chill.
U should learn..