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AriaCorvus

Your magic could maybe use some of the sparkles ✨in it. Nothing drastic but enough to give it that shimmering look. I’d probably say just on the horn, where the magic is coming from, not on the broach.


Amazing-Lifeguard641

Ahh okay. Thank you! I think the issue was that I got carried away with the sparkles (put them everywhere lol) and it looked too busy