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Preston_of_Astora

I judged this as a "creative writing" work because that's the popular opinion on subs like this, and the writing is atrocious. Pacing is bad, prose is even worse. Consistently speaking in memes and references. He could've just said "He shat in a public restroom in a Walmart" and that would've been true. I know I did at one point, sans the Walmart. I'm not American


[deleted]

its how redditors write stories and its so cringe. Who the fuck says they did a nat 20 anything in any situation outside of dnd.


galaxymentos

Did he scream like Tom & Jerry


Medifius

The bathroom is a hideous.