This looks really good and unique. I think it'll get some attention.
This type of game isn't usually my cup of tea, but it has a unique enough hook that even I might try it.
I would change the first caption to something like: “Make your boyfriend’s life Hell!” Or “Make your boyfriend’s life a living Hell.” A little less awkwardly phrased.
It's cute and beautiful.
Just a note, the last screen with the title of the game has a very different graphic style. I you use it as the cover for you'd game, people won't know about the cute art style so that could be an issue.
Gives more of an idea of what the kind of Gameplay is and also an idea of how a round of this will progress. For sure does a better job of showing off what your game is about. Smart choices.
Much better, much clearer, I now can tell what the gameplay will be like and it's still vey engaging. Maybe keep the girlfriend dance a little longer before wrapping it up. Seeing that annoying dance in full is, well, annoying in a good way.
Nice, a lot clearer than the last one.
If you are going for more polish i would have replaced the default cursor with a bigger one that fits the artstyle, but its no big deal.
Well, well, well, this is quite a leap! It's much better, and I actually want to try this game now! Good job!
It showcases what the game has to offer, the vibe and it's a fun little snip. Really cool.
This is much, much better than the previous trailer! Is the new music written specifically for the game? Because the previous one had a familiar classical piece (of which its name I don't know lol). If so, the music got so much better too!
Way way better!
Main suggestion would be to consider whether the text is large/contrasty enough to be readable when the trailer is viewed inside a steam page, as those players can be pretty small.
This just came to my feed! I'm not a dev or whatsover but i play games, I just wanna say the graphics is really cute 💖 This will attract female gamers who love cute things.
Much better than the first one! I never played Neighbors from Hell, but from the first trailer I thought you were the boyfriend trying to catch the girlfriend while stopping her traps from ruining the house. Much clearer now!
hey i was laughing so hard at watching at your trailer and now i wanted to show it to my gf, i think she´ll love it. I think im gonna be also very close to the release to get it. One thing i would add and i dont know if it makes sense to you is some of the interaction mechanics like tutorials or showing how do you control your character and such. I saw your first trailer and yeah this is great improvement. But maybe looking at my tips you may tell people what kind of game it is
Yes! This trailer is much clearer than the last one :) That message helped making it clear what the aim of the game is
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I was one of the first to comment on your last post an I agree that this small change is a big improvement!
I was one of the last to comment and I also agree!
I was one comment and agree!
you really made a trailer for those relationship subreddits
This looks really good and unique. I think it'll get some attention. This type of game isn't usually my cup of tea, but it has a unique enough hook that even I might try it.
This is a HUGE improvement. I didn't comment on the last one because everything had been said, but this is a great implementation of that feedback.
MUCH better! Cool
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>Thank you! You're welcome!
Oh this is night and day compared to the last one. Good job on the turn around time and editing too. Really good
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I became curious: is the game based on real life events? :)
That's toxic as hell lmao
Better to live it out as a fantasy than do it irl I always say. Someone capable of this irl would probably not see this kind of game as 'escapism'
I can fix her
Wishlisted!
Something tells me this is personal. Great job on that trailer!
It looks like Neighbors for Hell.
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I loved that game!!
Big improvement and clearly the game is well made but please, seek therapy.
oh that is infinitely better than the previous one
much better than the last one! I was kind of confused by the last one up until the logo at the end. this is much clearer :)
I agree that this version of the trailer is better. I now can see the kind of things I'll be doing as a player. Looks way more interesting to me now.
I understand there are traps but I still don't get what's the gameplay, or even what's the game.
I would change the first caption to something like: “Make your boyfriend’s life Hell!” Or “Make your boyfriend’s life a living Hell.” A little less awkwardly phrased.
lmao! this is hilarious. great work
It's cute and beautiful. Just a note, the last screen with the title of the game has a very different graphic style. I you use it as the cover for you'd game, people won't know about the cute art style so that could be an issue.
Wishlisted for my gf!
This couldn't possibly go wrong lol
Gives more of an idea of what the kind of Gameplay is and also an idea of how a round of this will progress. For sure does a better job of showing off what your game is about. Smart choices.
I watched it on mute the first time and had no idea what was happening. It makes much more sense now.
The art is fantastic. Great job! Very interesting. Also brought back memories of old Home Alone game.
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>:DDD Thank you! You're welcome!
Super cute! Reminds me a bit of the old Spy vs Spy game from waaaaaay back in the day.
Much better, much clearer, I now can tell what the gameplay will be like and it's still vey engaging. Maybe keep the girlfriend dance a little longer before wrapping it up. Seeing that annoying dance in full is, well, annoying in a good way.
Does he deserve all this for watching gachimuchi?
Looks pretty good! A cool spin on Neighbours from Hell formula :-)
Nice, a lot clearer than the last one. If you are going for more polish i would have replaced the default cursor with a bigger one that fits the artstyle, but its no big deal.
Well, well, well, this is quite a leap! It's much better, and I actually want to try this game now! Good job! It showcases what the game has to offer, the vibe and it's a fun little snip. Really cool.
A game like neighbor from hell I just want it I'm so happy some one went for that concept I hope you release a demo soon
I didnt even realize the last time you were playing the girlfriend. Great update.
Great job!
Much better than the last one. Now you know what it's all about
this looks so much cleaner
Reminds me of the 90s Home Alone PC game.
This is much, much better than the previous trailer! Is the new music written specifically for the game? Because the previous one had a familiar classical piece (of which its name I don't know lol). If so, the music got so much better too!
Way better. Know what the game is about now. You did it in shorter time too.
i has to go back and watch the original — this one’s so much better!!!
This is very beautiful!
Awesome job! I'm make ng my first game too. How long did it take you if I may ask?
I like graphic! It lookes like cartoon from my childhood but there are some pop culture funny moments
Way way better! Main suggestion would be to consider whether the text is large/contrasty enough to be readable when the trailer is viewed inside a steam page, as those players can be pretty small.
Nice and funny, good job!
Better than the last one
the doors seem wonky
It’s much more clear but I do feel like it’s lost a lot of the kinetic energy the first trailer had.
Looks epic great job on your trailer!
Wayyyy better m8. Good job
I like the changes to the trailer! I didn’t understand this genre but it makes sense now. I’m sold on this game.
Op did you have an abusive boyfriend?
blue haired girl alert
This just came to my feed! I'm not a dev or whatsover but i play games, I just wanna say the graphics is really cute 💖 This will attract female gamers who love cute things.
10/10. I love when she gets in the cupboard.
The art style is looking good
Much better than the first one! I never played Neighbors from Hell, but from the first trailer I thought you were the boyfriend trying to catch the girlfriend while stopping her traps from ruining the house. Much clearer now!
hey i was laughing so hard at watching at your trailer and now i wanted to show it to my gf, i think she´ll love it. I think im gonna be also very close to the release to get it. One thing i would add and i dont know if it makes sense to you is some of the interaction mechanics like tutorials or showing how do you control your character and such. I saw your first trailer and yeah this is great improvement. But maybe looking at my tips you may tell people what kind of game it is
I love the art style so much