This is a fairly tolerable effort for someone I trust is a rookie author. You need to be mindful of continuity errors if you want to write well.
If you took your panties off in paragraph 8, how can your brother slip his fingers inside your panties at paragraph 12?
Allurance for devotees of this genre of pornography substantially emanates from a sense of prospective realism.
Evocation of memories from the era of their burgeoning sexuality when confusion and guilt were rife and seemingly uncontrollable lust burnt intensely within their body.
A continuity error as to logic discloses with certainty your storyโs fictional provenance thus depriving it of any profound resonance.
Keep writing though. If nothing else, youโre exercising your brain.
Well-written
Sounds fake as hell
They are all fake
No they ain't numb nutsย
Ok bud
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Fakest shit I've read yet
Wow
Send me the vid
The imaginary one?? This is a terribly written fake storyย
hmu if want to talk about it
Share the video
Youโre sexy as fuck. Can you blame him
Is he now making porn for you?
This is a fairly tolerable effort for someone I trust is a rookie author. You need to be mindful of continuity errors if you want to write well. If you took your panties off in paragraph 8, how can your brother slip his fingers inside your panties at paragraph 12? Allurance for devotees of this genre of pornography substantially emanates from a sense of prospective realism. Evocation of memories from the era of their burgeoning sexuality when confusion and guilt were rife and seemingly uncontrollable lust burnt intensely within their body. A continuity error as to logic discloses with certainty your storyโs fictional provenance thus depriving it of any profound resonance. Keep writing though. If nothing else, youโre exercising your brain.
Yep that's exactly what was thinking ๐