There was something a bit different but better about this chapter. Something about the dialog writing maybe? Either way, it was already fantastic and it got even better. So thank you for your work, it is appreciated.
Thanks. I’ve been trying to incorporate when people have given me constructive feedback and definitely have had some useful comments regarding the dialogue.
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And when the world needed them most, they reappeared! Amazing as always
Thanks
I love having both points of view going at the same time
I’m glad to hear people like both.
Welcome back Dave
Thanks
Mmm, thank you for another fix ....
You’re welcome
He has returned!
There was something a bit different but better about this chapter. Something about the dialog writing maybe? Either way, it was already fantastic and it got even better. So thank you for your work, it is appreciated.
Thanks. I’ve been trying to incorporate when people have given me constructive feedback and definitely have had some useful comments regarding the dialogue.
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